I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS forthe GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.
He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchina's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the GiftedClass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, hisEnglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. But I noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his English during his fiveundergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient inEnglish as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.
In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only hisextraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am surethat Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he maycare to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
Yours sincerely
Fan Pu
Professor and Deputy Head
Dear Sir,
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University inJune next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your universitynext fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog ofyour university and any other necessary information, and also a set ofapplication forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
尊敬的老師:
您好!我叫___，是盤錦市遼河油田第一高階中學高三學生。貴校是我理想中的學校，不僅因為我的姑姑在這裡任教，也是因為這裡有我喜歡的專業——材料化學，我希望通過自己的努力實現自己的理想。
我的爸爸是遼河油田的一名高階工程師，媽媽是教育培訓中心的一名教師，爸爸媽媽給我取這樣的名字，就是希望我能取父母之長，名字寄託著父母的期望，父母的愛陪伴我成長。正如父母所期望的，如今的17歲的我，不僅學習成績優秀，而且健康，自信、陽光，向上。性格開朗、大方，興趣廣泛。在高中階段，兩次被評為學校三好學生，是老師，長輩心目中的好學生，好孩子，是同齡夥伴的好朋友。
我非常感謝我的父母對我的教育，他們沒有象其他家長那樣，從小就讓孩子上這個班、那個班，我從小到大從沒有進過各種文化課實補習班，在我很小的時候，他們培養我對大自然的熱愛，帶我去各地旅遊，領略祖國的大好山河，首都北京、現代化大都市上海、海南的天涯海角，九寨的青山綠水，古都承德，到處都留下我的足跡。古人說，行萬里路，讀萬卷書，這些經歷開闊了我的視野，豐富了我的知識，更是豐富了我的人生，我為能在童年、少年時期有這樣的經歷而慶幸。
父母都是喜愛讀書之人，這也在潛移默化中影響著我，我也喜愛讀書，尤其喜愛讀歷史和軍事方面的書，在很小的時候，就讀《三國演義》，從兒童版到原裝版，讀了不下五遍，許多章節都能背誦下來，還看《二十五史》、《史記》《資治通鑑》以及許多名人傳記。讀史使人明鑑，讀書增長了我的知識，歷來文史不分家，對歷史書籍的熱愛使我在學習上更加輕鬆，我雖然選擇了學習理科，但我的文科成績一樣優秀。讀書更使我學會思考，名人傳記使我懂得，沒有隨隨便便的成功，成功的背後是努力，是付出，是對真理的堅持，是臥薪嚐膽，有時甚至是要犧牲自己的生命!我和我的同學都是90後的孩子，在遼河油田這樣生活水平比較富裕的地區，許多孩子從小嬌生慣養，依賴性強，自我管理能力差，而我的父母從小就培養我的自我管理、自我教育的能力，我不僅在學習上從來不用老師和家長操心，在班級裡還擔任數學課代表工作，幫助老師做許多班級工作，同學有問題也都喜歡問我，而我也總是耐心地給同學講解，在幫助同學的同時也使自己對知識有了更深入的理解，真是送人玫瑰手有餘香。同時我還擔任學生會文藝部工作，參與學校的各項活動，豐富了自己的經歷，鍛鍊了自己的能力。這些都是我高中生活最為寶貴的財富。
我的家庭給了我一個比較民主和寬鬆的氛圍，使我不必把時間和經歷都用有書本上，分數上，對我的興趣和愛好，父母都是支援和鼓勵的。我喜愛音樂，在國小時候就被選入學校樂團，後來又專門學習二胡，達到考級十級，併成為興隆臺區少兒藝術團成員，在學習相對緊張的中學和高中階段，也鼓勵我參加市區組織的演出活動。我喜愛運動，網球、足球、羽毛球、乒乓球、籃球都是我喜歡的，雖然不是樣樣精，但也算是樣樣通，快樂體育、快樂運動，運動給了我健康的體魄，也給了我健康向上的生活態度。
我熱愛生活，關心身邊的每一個人，感謝生活給予我的一切。我關心國家大事，每天早上都要收聽“中國之聲”的廣播，晚上放學回來，父母也會就一些新聞、實事、熱點問題與我探討，使我的思想始終能跟上時代的脈搏，而不是兩耳不聞窗外事的書呆子，我相信世界是我們的，我們要與祖國同呼吸，共命運，因為在我們身上，肩負著建設祖國的責任。
敬愛的老師，感謝您看完我的自薦信，我對自己充滿信心，也相信您也會對我充滿信心。為了我的理想，我要加倍的努力。
尊敬的_大學老師領導：
您好!我是___，是入黨積極分子，__省三好學生，在日常的學習和生活中我處處以身作則，以榜樣的力量感染和帶動我的同學。我在學習上勤奮刻苦，始終成績優異，我就讀的學校是一所擁有近四千名學生的省級示範校，每學期我校都要進行一次10所省級示範性高中的聯合考試，每個年級的考生約一萬三千多人在這類地區聯考中，我的成績始終名列前茅。20__年上學期我考取了地區聯考第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名。20__年下學期地區第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名，20__年上學期地區第9名，英語單科成績第一;本校第2名，班級第一名。20__年下學期地區第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名。20__年高三的第一次考試我考取第一名。我從國中起就多次參加全國中學生奧林匹克各學科競賽，並於20__年獲全國中學生奧林匹競賽一等獎，20__年獲全國中學生奧林匹競賽英語、數學、化學競賽一等獎、物理競賽二等獎。讀高中後20__年我獲取全國中學生英語能力競賽一等獎，全國中學生數學競賽希望杯三等獎。20__年獲全國中學生生物、數學競賽決賽資格。各學科競賽拓寬了我的學習思路，檢驗了我的學習效果，也爭強了我的自信心。
20__年8月我升入高中，12月份我校有一名不幸身患尿毒症的同學叫___，面對著一個年輕的生命在頑強的與死神抗爭。我決定和我的同學一起發起一次奉獻愛心的捐贈活動，以集體的力量挽救這個年輕的生命。我寫了倡議書，在學校號召老師和同學們為___同學捐款，還到社會上進行宣傳，得到老師、同學和社會各界人士的幫助，共捐款6萬餘元。為邱純亮同學做換腎手術奉獻了我們的一份愛心。我們的愛心捐贈活動在社會上引起了強烈的反響。我市電視臺在晚間最近新聞欄目專門做了報道。挽救這個瀕臨枯萎的生命的過程，震撼了我的心靈。因為我有能力通過自己的努力，延續一個年輕的生命，同時，愛心捐贈活動也驗證了我的組織能力，凝聚力和感召力，更是對我自身綜合素質的一次檢驗。在後來的班級工作和組織其他活動的時候我的自信心更強了。
當邁入了_大學的校門，也就步入了我生命中的最重要、最精彩的階段。我會珍惜在校園中渡過的分分秒秒，在這大師雲集、神聖的學術殿堂、在這群賢畢至的高等學府，如飢似渴的吸納最新的知識和資訊，發揚林業學子的優良傳統，刻苦學習、精益求精，通過腳踏實地的努力使自己成為本專業的優秀學生，同時努力探索和驗證與本學科、本專業相關的科學知識，以唯物和科學的態度勤奮地學習、深刻地思索、不懈地尋求本學科領域的最新知識，使自己成為本學科領域的有發展潛力和有培養價值的學生，成為北京林大的驕傲。
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is _ _, _ _ _ University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students _ _ _, and believe that it can be a good completionof your master's courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, _ _ _ _ adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, _ _ students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that he'll be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and _ _ _ by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school _ _ football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. _ _ said the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
I am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
Application Letter for studying abroad
Xiao Ming
Student
Shandong University
27 Shanda Nan Lu
Jinan , Shandong , China
250100
Dr. Melba Ripley
The School of Architecture
University of Louisiana
100 Webber Hall
Baton Rouge, LA 70814
Dear Dr. Melba Ripley:
My name is Bu Xuliang , a student studying Microbiology technology in
Shandong University School. I intend to spend my doctor years in aUSAuniversity by the end of September 20__ for my higher education at the sametime to develop my scientific skill since I love to have a career in the fieldof Microbiology.
During the past three years, I had been an excellent student .I was
extremelyinterested in knowing how a microorganism change food to theenergy for their Biochemical processes, and used to find out the answer bymyself. I have
published a paper in past three years. I am quite confident that I canarrange both my study and my daily life well in new environment. I also tookpart in a great deal of social activities and some of them were reallyimpressive. I would truly like to have theopportunity to do research work inyouruniversityso as to learn more new technology in Microbiology technology.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information aboutthe application at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Xiao Ming
尊敬的：
我是系X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要出國留學休學XX年。
休學後，我會努力,並且繼續堅持學習。並在休學期間，加強自己的思想教育，使自己的思想始終與我校保持高度一致。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
此致
敬禮
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節)
合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶裡，藉此打動評審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
尊敬的_領導、老師們：
有目標的人生才是有意義的人生，一個人若沒有目標，就如同迷失了方向的船隻，隨波逐流，永遠沒有溫馨的港灣。我的目標，就是求新務實地創造，以成果回報社會，以人格魅力影響世界!而我最嚮往的_大學，也將成為我生活的契機。
王國維曾提到人生的三個境界，我的過去就是“昨夜西鳳凋碧樹，獨上高樓，望盡天涯路”。因為一直都是非常優秀的學生，因此對自己的要求也很嚴格。記得那是國小五年級的期末測試，不知是換了考場，還是題目的角度難度不合我的口味，我一向引以為豪的數學在那次考試中只有區區80分。老師們不好嚴厲地批評我，畢竟我平時的專注有目共睹;父母卻是非常失望地將我“軟禁”起來，不能出門，不能碰電腦，甚至於“新聞聯播”都成為禁忌。
我後悔自己太不認真，但是這又有什麼用呢?!在被關在家的時間裡，我就把那張試卷翻來覆去地看，我看錯的題目，重新做它們，繼續尋求更快更好的解法。這種開拓初次嘗試是很累的，阿拉伯數字圍成緊箍咒，向我的頭上套去。
直到進入國中才逐漸意識到這就是所謂的“正確學習方法”，才瞭解“不認真”是過於籠統的概念。其實在不知不覺中，無論誰都會進步，譬如我並沒有刻意去琢磨那些錯題，而錯題於我就像是甘甜的乳汁，有著汲取不盡的養分。後來當聽到有人評價我認真、仔細、“肯鑽”、“坐得住”時，我並沒有多大的感覺。靜下心進而回顧，已經在長年累月中成為習慣，歲月的流逝雖會將鋒芒磨盡，但遺留下來的卻是至寶。
而“衣帶漸寬終不悔，為伊消得人憔悴”堪稱現在生活的映照了。每天往返於學校家庭間，尤其是進入高三，重複單調的生活讓人產生厭倦。可是我明白我所要追求的是什麼，我為“伊”而憔悴，但卻“終不悔”。這是希望的作用：當我看見新的藥物治療病人、新的材料用於生活、新的裝置提高產率，看到人民的生活美好，我就會感到由衷的喜悅，這也就成為支援我繼續奮鬥的力量。
我看小說，我看其中所反映的社會現象，或者作者所要表達的美好願望;我看動漫，我看其中所展現的美好人性，或者享受作品本身帶給我精神的放鬆。我把我的感受寫進部落格，我為自己創造發洩的條件，於是有人評價我冷靜、客觀、“有思想”，於是有人說我趕得上潮流，有創新意識。其實這些都是一家之言，自己怎麼樣，只有自己最清楚。
我曾不太善交際，從而一度將“寂寞讓我如此美麗”奉為經典。但是看到同學回家都有伴兒，遇到困難都可以向死黨尋求幫助，我便也感到孤單與落寞。可是社會畢竟是自己的社會，個體的生存幾乎都是靠個體的力量，沒有誰會一直陪同自己走下去：父母會先於自己逝去，配偶則必須在成人後在“對的時間”遇到，朋友更不可能如影隨形。我意識到了，也就盡力讓自己融入生活圈，竟發現其實一切很簡單，需要的只是善意、友好和坦誠。
我在高中遇到很多天資聰穎的人，在感嘆的同時也逐漸發現其實“上帝在厚重的牆上開了一扇小窗”。“窮則獨善其身，達則兼濟天下”，雖然現在是一個人，但也必須從完善自我做起。在“修行”的途中所感受到的靈魂的昇華是愚鈍的我無法用筆描述的。我嫉妒過競賽優異的人，並且在得知胸有成竹的化學競賽落榜時也難過得無法入眠。但等到冷靜下來細細分析，其實自身還有非常多的漏洞：氣氛緊張時容易先入為主，遇到困難“腎上腺素分泌會急劇增多”從而影響思維。我努力克服它們，並且見賢思齊。
當然如果進入_大學，那裡將肯定是我展示自己的平臺了。在理想的指引下，我將繼續秉持高中以來優良的學習習慣和方法，繼續貫徹全面發展，努力在各方面都讓自己滿意;在生活上也必須更加照顧自己了，雖然現在也是一人，但遠在他鄉，當圓月嵌入蒼穹時也會不免引起鄉思吧。未來的生活有許許多多的變數，可以是充滿激情，也可以是頹唐無奈，生活會有非常多的誘惑，但是我必須堅守住心靈的淨土：無論怎麼改變，我所追求的理想不變!我希望為科學研究竭盡心力，我希望為國民思想精神的昇華奮鬥終身!不僅僅是大學，進入社會、開始工作，無論怎麼改變，必將始終為了崇高的事業奮鬥，向著理想賓士!我相信在未來的某一天，當我“驀然回首”時，我的夢想，已經在“燈火闌珊處”。這也應該是我人生的最後一個境界了。
我享受挑戰，勇於嘗試沒有把握的事，我知道絢爛的未來需要靠自己創造。我一直幻想自己是名英武的騎士，駕著名駒，在廣袤的歷史田野中，向著理想賓士!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
尊敬的X大學老師：
您好!我是X，現就讀於X。感謝您在百忙之中審閱我的留學申請書。
X大學，以怒蹄奔騰的駿馬為標誌物，希望學子們能“騰天潛淵，吐納川海;遼闊原野，一任賓士”，博大高遠的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成為X大學的一名學生。
由於在數學上表現出了優秀的能力，我5歲時上了國小。20X年時，我們全家來到北京，並開始了我在X學校長達8年的學習。這8年來，X見證著我點點滴滴的進步。來到北京前我對英語一無所知，可我的母校是一個國際化的學校，於是我的英語讓老師和父母十分著急。後來在父母老師的幫助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英語水平，現在英語已經成為我的優勢之一。小升中的時候，我的成績還不是很好，在我國中三年的不懈努力之下，最終以會考523分(當時的市重點線)的成績進入了我校高中部實驗班。在高一時我的成績在班裡、年級的前列，參加了海淀區數學、物理、化學競賽，並在第X屆全國數學“希望杯”比賽中獲得全國三等獎。進入高二之後，我在所有考試(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的週考、區統考)中都保持著班級第一、年級第一的成績，而且整個高中年級的各科會考成績都是A。我認為只要對學習有著嚴肅認真的態度，始終都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性對待考試、不斷提高自己的學習能力，從而保持了一個穩定的、向上的狀態，我會將這種狀態在我以後的學習、生活中繼續保持下去。
我出生在一個民主開放的家庭。父母都是老師，給我一定的自由發展空間，並著重培養我的領悟能力、學習能力和動手能力，讓我學會自立。於是我在遇到生活、學習、與人溝通相處等方面的困難時，都自己想辦法獨立解決，從而在各方面成為班級、年級的佼佼者。由於父母對我潛移默化的影響，我做事十分認真，習慣追求完美，雖然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的態度和意志讓我在學習、工作中有著出色的表現。
正如校訓“X”所展示的，我的母校X學校，既秉承了傳統教育的嚴謹、求實，也發揚了寄宿學校的軍事化管理，更融入了外國教育的開放和高效。正是在這樣的環境中，我擁有了豐富的知識、多樣的能力、堅強的毅力和開朗的性格。在X年的學習生涯中，我更加成熟穩重，做事心思縝密、謀劃周到，成為一個學習優秀、善於處理各方面事務、全面發展的人。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
親愛的教授：
我很高興以書面形式推薦的醫生的信。 __支援他申請在實驗室的博士後位置。
博士。X__一個優秀的研究生致力於為毫秒我的監督下度。在我與他在大學接觸，他的創造力和態度研究工作給了我很深的印象。他總是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解決他自己的問題，我很滿意他。
__一直致力於高分子發光研究六年左右。據我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化學在主人的工作，如蛋白質和核酸檢測等，在這些領域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已經和將發表多篇論文在國際期刊。我在讀他的論文發表和與他討論往往興趣。我很讚賞他的研究能力。
__博士還擁有非常優良品格。他是一個虔誠的科研工作者。他的作品是在週末。他是一個誠實和智慧，可靠，負責人，並且是非常合作過。
基於這些優勢，我相信這個年輕人將實現在今後的工作更大的學業成功。因此，我強烈支援他的應用程式，這將不勝感激，如果你能給他的優先考慮。
請隨時聯絡我，如果我可以回答關於__的任何其他問題。我的地址如下：
教授__X
尊敬的各位老師及校領導:
本人是外語系日語專業2班學生，現申請休學，為期一年(201X年9月—201X年9月)，希望學校予以批准。
不知何時開始，會忘記自己做一件事的理由，會回想不起昨日的自己，也不知道日復一日的我，在做些什麼。回想至今為止的大學生活，有收穫，也有一些不甘。收穫了善良簡單的朋友們，還有隨和可親的同學們，以及學習日語帶給我的充實感，還開始學習了我所喜歡的跳舞。不甘是由於我的迷茫，是由於我所不喜的大學生活，我不喜的並非大學本身，而是由於時代賦予他的另一種風貌與意義。然而，另一種意義上，大學也是自己的，如何度過大學生活也取決於每個人自己。我不希望沒有目標，並且沒有認清自己，就茫茫然然的度過這寶貴的四年，這樣對我的青春來說也算是一種損失。
休學的一年裡，我會找一份與日語相關的工作，繼續學習日語。我對所能找到的工作抱的期望值並不高，也並不認為出社會工作會有多順利。在休學的一年中，我希望能和在校的同學們一起考N2 或是N1，實現自我獨立，並且能為家裡儘自己的力量。回學校之後，也能更加有目的的學習，或者還能做些翻譯兼職。未曾想過考研的我，竟然也萌生了跨專業考心理學研究生的念頭，雖然只是一剎那的想法，也讓我自己驚訝不已。我也明白了，活著要不斷的學習，學校就是一片很好的土壤，能為我們營造最好的環境。
我決定休學，並不是不對自己的人生負責，而正是因為我要對自己的人生負責。可能有人會影響你的人生，但他們無法對你的生命負責，也沒有人會對你的生命負責。休學是我認認真真，反反覆覆考慮所得出的決定。很多時候，我們永遠都不知道自己所做的決定是對是錯，或許根本就沒有對或錯。只能在認真且客觀地思考之後，做出心中的選擇，這樣也就不會後悔了罷。
上天賦予了我們思考的能力，就讓我們不能僅僅滿足於肉體上的需求活著，而要在心靈體驗上感受到真正的滿足。我有自己想過的生活，我也想為之努力，我也會為之努力的。
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尊敬的_大學老師：
您好!
"韶華不為少年留，勤為天道酬。"正如高三的教室後牆上我所想出的勵志名言一般，它時刻激勵著班上的同學與我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡陽市八中高三的一名學生，就讀文科，是平凡的，因為是一個同所有人一樣的矛盾融合體;但又堅信自己是不同的，是因為我將成為發光體。金子，到哪裡都會發光，而我選擇的是貴校這樣一座鍊金爐。
河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我願像河般，為夢想奔騰向前永不止息;像海般容納百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利萬物而不爭，處眾人之所惡，故幾於道。居善地，心善淵，與善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，動善時。夫唯不爭，故無尤。"善的最高境界，大致在於此乎。像水般，往低處流，卻能容納百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高處走時，當不勝寒時，不忘想想水的謙虛，以一種包容一切的姿態，以柔化剛，接受萬物的俯視與臣服，這種"柔德"，使我自己的心境變得平和，要像水那樣，無形勝有形，不斷地改變，塑造自己，臻於完美。
寵辱不驚，閒看庭前花開花落;去留無意，漫隨天外雲捲雲舒的同時，我本著湖湘學派"經世致用"的原則，志當存高遠。如果說周總理是"為中華之崛起而讀書"，那我便願為"中國之強盛而讀書"。學無止境，人生本是一個不斷學習的過程。在六年的學習委員一職的任職過程中，除了學習課本知識，我的右手可以寫出一手漂亮的毛筆。因為正，一筆一劃地寫，心才會正。我的左手，能彈出美妙的小提琴樂章，這不僅開發了我的右腦，音樂更使我思維敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不僅是人類對上帝的提問，更是與大自然的交流。讓狂躁的心，不知不覺間安靜下來。
人生的旅途中，讀書萬卷：安徒生童話到世界名著。我醉心於寶黛間的痴纏;徜徉於《傲慢與偏見》裡伊麗莎白奇妙的心海中;感嘆於李白"我輩豈是蓬蒿人"的豪邁;與杜甫"安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏"一起憂國憂民;與易安居士一起看"雨疏風驟，綠肥紅瘦"。在文的海洋中，我願成那一滴水，一尾魚，在海洋心中，見證著它的悲喜。於是在歷史的不平中，我亦詩嘆曰：陳王夢還金鏤枕，鳳皇遺恨正阿房，才佳長恨無歸處，冷露成淚暗遺香。
我同樣願行萬里路，沿途的風景，豐盈著自己的人生，懂得取與舍，讓人生的閱歷更加豐富。曾到過南京，河畔槳聲燈影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝舊事已隨流水，而這座古都卻有太多歷史無法忘記的東西：革命先行者孫文先生之陵……流連於河海大學門前，不由駐足，希望自己能成為"歸人"，而不是"過客"。我這樣的遊子，在閱過17年風景後，選擇了河海大學作為圓夢的地方。
我喜歡奔跑的感覺，起跑線比重點更加美好，體味那為理想拼搏的過程。十年磨一劍，劍出鞘，一鳴驚人，直指河海。
我，靜如處子，或動如脫兔，願意跟書本這樣高尚的朋友對話。書山有路勤為徑，運用正確的學習方法，在無涯的學海中"直掛雲帆濟滄海"，正確地駕駛著學習之舟，雖然途中有風浪，但堅持駛向目的地--河海之灣。我，崇尚獨立，常獨立思考探尋人生真諦，遇事冷靜自若，卻又讓理性成為我織夢的梭，讓勤奮成為我築夢的橋。理智與熱情，誠信與好學，成為划向河海的槳，只為到那裡，為自己編織另一個夢，解決南方家鄉旱澇災害頻繁的問題，造福家鄉、祖國人民。在見證河灣輝煌的同時，與河海一起創造下一個輝煌。
我願逆風行舟，駛向河海，利用水，造福人民。
我願逆風，只為尋河海一夢。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
20__年__月__日
Dear _,
I am a student of _ school _ (female, born on August 20th, _), and I amabout to become a middle school student. My biggest wish is to be able to studyin _, because destiny made me know _middle school. In the summer of 20_ I wasfortunate to become a member of the school club, and represented _ middle schoolto participate _ in _ the middle school student sports meeting (table tenniscompetition) that year, and achieved good results. In just a few days of thecompetition, through the introduction of the leading teachers and teammates, Ihave a full understanding of _middle school. After that, I pay more attention tolearning and love sports. In my heart, learning and exercise have constitutedthe driving force for mutual promotion. At present, my table tennis skills havebeen further improved. In the 20_20_years, I have won the second place in thewomen's group A of the table tennis competition for two consecutive years.
Ping-pong is my hobby, and it is my goal of continuous efforts to improveacademic performance. A good learning environment can create outstandinglearning talents. The suburban high school is my dream choice. The school hasthe traditional virtues of solidarity and mutual assistance, and has a learningatmosphere of "comparison, learning, catching up, and surpassing", and it ismore problem-solving. Good teachers and leaders who are difficult and willing toteach. Opportunities are met but not sought. If the school leaders give me thisopportunity, I will continue to sum up my experience and lessons, be mentallyprepared to dare to endure all hardships, establish the confidence to overcomeall difficulties, and strive to be excellent Achievement completed three yearsof junior high school life. Never let the school leaders down. I don'tunderstand whether this formulation is appropriate, but I implore the leaders tostudy my application.
Yours sincerely,
___,___
Dear_,
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built， management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China， so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I， also， would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up， I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China， I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE)， even so， books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June， 20__， Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms， I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment， I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact， I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American， and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting： Why somecompanies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more thanothers? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the samedifficulties?
With the questions in my mind， I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack： Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch， in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior， I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed， definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December， 20__， I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge， I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately， as a senior， I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months， I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system， which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation， I continued my work inthis company. In May， 20__， the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training， I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster， with its excellencein management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment， I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind， I hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
“Life is Like a Box of Chocolates. You Never Know What You are Going toGet”. Such words come from a famous movie “Forrest Gump”. I don’t know what kindof chocolate life will give me, but I believe I can achieve my target if I workhard with my unwavering belief and persevering efforts like Forrest Gump. As astudent of Mechanical Engineering, I have just finished my undergraduate studysince July. Next what I have to face is to choose the new chocolate which I haveyearned for all long. With four-year study of M.E. in China, I would like toscale higher intellectual heights by undertaking advanced studies in __University, as I believe its rich learning environment and free academicatmosphere will open my eyes to new realities and influence me to confront thesituation back home.
My strong interest in research was born during the undergraduate years at_University. Upon entering the university in 20__, I began to embark on myjourney of industrious study in the Department of Mechanical Engineering. Myexceptionally solid foundation in mathematics and physics provided me with astepping stone with which I proceeded onto the exploration of othersophisticated and erudite subjects. My performance in all the specialty-relatedcoursework not only enabled me to secure good GPA ranking me about top 17 in mygrade among 169 students but also furnished me with a powerful instrumentwhereby to materialize my dreams in the research. I constantly congratulated myluck to obtain a lot of scholarships and awards, due to my academic achievement,from the university, especially the scholarship of “_University – AmericanUnited Technological Corporation”, awarded only for the best students who areboth good at academic and social capacity. Not contented with doing a good jobin mere coursework, I endeavored to keep abreast with the latest theories andtechnologies by reading extensively technical literature in recent journals andattending the lecture some famous professors made. During my undergraduatecareer, I have grasped every chance to do some researching work. I used toparticipate in at least six projects including the intern work in the factory,mechanical designs and graduate design.
Especially during the period from September to November of 20__, I readmany books and journals in the field of mechanical engineering such as “Handbookof Practical Gear Design” (Written by __). In these books, I did intensivereading on the theory of the speed reducer. I investigated and discussed with myteacher on how to apply the theory into the practice. Then according to myteacher’s advice, I tried to organize a team consisting of five members to makea harmonic gear reducer. As a team leader, I should not only take charge of thewhole arrangement of project but also make every member of the team cooperatewith each other harmoniously. Before starting the program, I, together with myteam, made a detailed plan covering the schedule, materials, and equipment. Thefirst step of our work is the design of the reducer. The design plan is asfollows: (1) Set down the blue print. (2) Complete 3-D solid model with Pro/Esoftware. (3) Finite-element analysis with ANSYS software. (4) Assemblingsimulation by using Pro/E. (5) Complete the 2-D draft of part and r two-week design work, we stepped to the next work, manufacture of theproduct. With the aid of the technique of computer, we plan the manufacturingprocess of every part. And then, all parts were made with various machine toolssuch as CNC lathe, wire electrical discharge machine, vertical machining center,and so on. Finally, we had toassembly all parts to the harmonic gear reducer,and test-drove it for many times. With five-week unremitting efforts, wesucceeded in the project of harmonic gear reducer and obtained the highestpraise. This special experience makes it very helpful for my further tly, I find the connection between theory and practice. Textbooks couldhardly cover everything, therefore, if we want to learn more, we should pursueevery opportunity to have practices. Meanwhile, I experienced the importance andmightiness of cooperation. In the project, we divided ourselves into severalparts, not only doing one’s own work well, but also cooperating with each otherharmoniously.
Another case worthy mentioning is my design project for graduation,“Manufacturing and Performance of Electroplated CBN Tools”. The main objectiveof this project is the manufacturing of the electroplated CBN (Cubic BoronNitride) wheels and the research of its performance when grinding theheat-resisted steel. I had completed three steps of task. Firstly, I took chargeof the manufacturing of electroplated CBN wheels, covering the following work:selecting electroplating solution, computing various electroplating parameterssuch as electrical current and temperature, adhering CBN to the tool base byelectroplating a nickel layer. After these basic preparations, I had to do thesecond part of the research work to compare grinding abilities of electroplatedCBN wheels with those of other wheels such as SiC wheels, Al2O3 wheels etc. Thispart of the work needs the researcher’s highly particularity and staidness. Idid the detailed work as follows: (1) Grind heat-resisted steel with variouswheels in the same grinding conditions. (2) Record data and compute the grindingratio of various wheels. (3) Measure the surface roughness of the heat-resistedsteel ground by various wheels. (4) Observe dulling and pullout of abrasivegrains of various wheels by using optical microscope. In this part, we canconclude that electroplated wheels have far better grinding abilities than otherwheels, by comparing parameters, such as grinding ratio, surface roughness final assignment of the project is to find out the most suitable parametersof grinding heat-resisted steel with electroplated CBN wheels, through comparingthe grinding ratio and surface roughness of heat-resisted steel ground indifferent grinding parameters. By investigating the attributes of electroplatedCBN wheels and concluding their practical grinding parameters, this project isvery important in promoting the application of them.
China’s unique advantage of labor force predicts the resplendent future ofits Mechanical Engineering, especially the manufacture, and it is our beliefthat this day will come soon. On the other hand, there are so many experiencedtechnicians in China, however, with the absence of advanced experts manyadvanced producing method cannot be used in practical yield. When I worked asintern in some factories, I found that most of them were still using facilitieswhich were used in America about thirty years ago. Therefore I want to use theadvanced knowledge earned in United States, combined with my acquaintance withChina, to improve the present situation and apply best the advanced scientifictechnology to practical social wealth as soon as possible. I hope to become asuccessful researcher in Mechanical Engineering, the arduous but exhilarativefield. The significant progress achieved in M.E, with the extraordinary culturaland intellectual sources in your university, has attracted me greatly. Based onthe study and the research experience in _ University, I am sure that I amqualified and would be an outstanding Ph.D. student. With the advanced courses,balanced program and distinguished faculty of your department, I would get asolid background for my future academic career.
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的_的老師：
您好!
我是來自河南省__中學的__，很高興能向您呈上我的留學申請書，也希望藉此機會我可以脫穎而出，為順利進入_大學奠定堅實的基礎。
在首都這座夢想之城，可謂高校林立，但是隻有貴校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我們高中都會有人考入貴校，他們被譽為“天子驕子”。當錄取金榜貼到校園裡，看著他們臉上洋溢的笑容，我的心裡也如波濤洶湧，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定決心，有朝一日我也要以自己的實力築夢於人大校園，成為她的一分子。
可說歸說，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奮學習。
在學習上，我對自己要求十分嚴格，充分發揚不怕吃苦的精神去面對學習中的一切困難和挫折。我知道學習就是一個苦難的過程，唯有堅持不懈，才能實現鳳凰涅盤的重生，才能抵達成功的彼岸。因此，在課堂上，我緊緊跟隨老師的思路，認真聽講，細心做好筆記，每一個知識點都不會錯過。課下，我珍惜時間，努力複習，積極預習，有的放矢地掌控好自己的學習節奏。我喜歡思考問題，喜歡探究問題的本源，然後舉一反三，化整為零。由於我的勤奮、刻苦，我獲得了優異的成績，每次考試都在全校前列，受到了老師和同學們的肯定，多次被評為優秀班幹部、優秀學生、學習標兵等。
在獲得優異成績的同時，我還抽時間，擠時間發展自己多方面的興趣。我喜歡打乒乓球、羽毛球、籃球，沉浸於體育鍛煉的激情與豪邁中，在緊張與刺激間收穫了強健的體魄。但比起體育鍛煉，我更鐘情於國學文化。
我喜歡國學的博大精深，喜歡國學的厚重神奇。課餘，我已經閱讀了多部國學經典，比如《孟子》《論語》《史記》《資治通鑑》《漢書》等，在文字與故事裡感受到了國學的無限魅力。在我看來，國學不僅僅是傳統文化，更是中華民族核心的價值理念和追求，是數千年來中國人思維方式行為方式生活方式生產方式的高度總結，是中華母親的乳汁，是中華兒女的血脈、精神和靈魂，是中國人信仰的天空和大地。
出於對國學的熱愛，我從小就立志要投身於祖國寶貴文化的學習、挖掘、弘揚中，用自己的所學，為國家的文化發展和民族的文化復興，貢獻自己的微薄之力。
而我之所以在眾多的_高校中鍾情於貴校，就是因為貴校深厚的文化底蘊吸引了我。貴校是一所以人文社會科學為主的綜合性研究型高校。自建校以來，貴校始終不忘“立學為民、治學報國”的辦學宗旨，以“實事求是”為校訓，逐漸形成了完備的教育體系，尤其注重發揮人文社會科學認識世界、傳承文明、創新理論、諮政育人、服務社會的作用，半個多世紀以來，已為國家輸送了一大批高素質的人才，其中范文瀾、馮其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可謂赫赫有名，為國家的文化建設做出了巨大的貢獻。
我敬仰貴校國學院，它是新中國第一家以國學為教育研究目的且本碩連讀的教育科研機構。學院學術力量雄厚，已經制定了完整系統的國學教學方案，建立了以經典研讀為中心的課程體系，並充分兼顧傳統與現代的有機融合，在教學與研究中，既有繼承傳統的治學特點，又有鮮明的時代性和寬廣的國際視野。這些，都令我向往。所以，我認為貴校國學院是我的夢想之地，會改變我的人生軌跡。
尊敬的老師，請您考慮並接受我的申請，給我一片天空，讓我自由飛翔，給我一片海洋，讓我盡情暢遊，我相信，進入人大是我最明智的選擇。如果順利被錄取，我一定會珍惜時間，勤奮努力，孜孜以求，投身於學術研究，跟隨大師足跡，在國學的傳承裡留下自己的名字，成為國家的棟樑，成為人大的驕傲。
我相信，我可以。
此致
敬禮
尊敬的各位老師，各位領導:
大家好，我叫___，來自國家連片貧困地區重點縣之一的__省__市__縣。作為一名普通的高三生，今天懷著很特別的心情遞交這份申請，它既懷揣著我對貴大學的嚮往和崇仰。又寄託著我的大學夢。我願懷著最赤誠的心來訴說我心中的願景。也很感激各位老師在百忙之中審讀我的來信。我相信一定不會讓您們失望的。
貧困的大山擋不住我強烈的求學之心。綿延的山路沒有阻擋我的求學之路。生活的不易沒有使我消沉抑鬱，反而激起我奮發圖強的意志，激起我想要努力改變生活現狀，改變家鄉落後面貌的決心。
進入高中以來，我就更加明白學習的重要性，我很佩服這樣的自己，一直保持高昂的鬥志和不服輸的精神，在學習上力爭上游。也許我的成績不是絕對的優勢，但是我努力找準自己的定位，取得屬於自己的進步，把成績穩在班級前幾名，學校前三十名以內。我是一個活潑開朗的女生，甚至有些女漢子風采。自小父母就不嬌慣我，有意識地培養我獨立自主的能力。或許是這種開朗、民主的家庭氛圍，使我在生活學習上都保持樂觀向上的狀態，在學校也積極參加各種活動，包括學校舉辦的運動會和各種演講比賽，也取得不錯的名次。高一時，我擔任班級的團支書，多次帶領同學們組織英語演講比賽、辯論賽等，也組織過很多次班會。這些活動一次比一次成功，我的經驗也在實踐中不斷豐富，既增強了同學們的友誼和感情，也提高了我自身的組織能力。高二時擔任副班長，和班長一起負責管理班級日常工作，鍛鍊了自己的管理協調能力。
在緊張的生活之餘，在假期間我也參與了___會志願服務工作，我的主要工作是幫助引導遊客。雖然時間只有短短的三天，但是我在這個過程中也有很多獨特的感受。其中的感受是__的快速發展，在新的歷史機遇面前，中原經濟正在騰飛，這艘巨輪又一次準備揚帆啟航。其次，在服務過程中，我也遇到全國各地的很多遊客，能為他們服務，讓他們感受__人的熱情，為他們展現__文化的別樣風采與魅力，我感到非常的激動，這是我作為一個__人的驕傲與義務。另外，這項工作也教會我如何更好地與他人溝通，更好地表達自己，在揮灑汗水的同時也提高了自己的表達技能。
那麼說到大學，很多同學都不是很願意選擇_，我想他們一定是沒有了解過_。據我所瞭解，_不僅致力於建設區域性示範作用的綜合性研究大學，也致力於建設高水平的國際知名大學。
我與_還是很有緣分的。首先，作為__本省的大學，而且是第一所示範性211大學，那一定是久負盛名的。而且，我高中三年的老師基本上都是__大學校友，就僅從老師們的口中就斷斷續續瞭解過很多關於__大學的趣事，其中印象最深的是他們說的眉湖，有機會一定要一覽為快。再次，_的很多招生政策都讓我不禁拍手稱讚，從自主招生到農村地區單獨招生，心中都很感動。我們本省就有這樣的好大學，那麼還有什麼理由去外省的呢?我又有什麼理由不選擇這樣的大學呢?其次，我很欣賞__大學的新浪微博，每天既可以感受唯美詩文，人生哲理，有可以欣賞嘻哈小段子，養生小故事。所以，從微博中也可以感受到__大學文而不弱，武而不暴的校風。從這個社會平臺來看，__大學也是很成功的。最後，這也是毋庸置疑的一點，我們__大學的人才遍佈社會各界，不勝列舉的例項都彰顯了我們不凡的實力和競爭力。
最後，我希望報考__大學的漢語言文學專業。一方面，我覺得自己作為一個文科女生，對語言文字天生就有更多的興趣和愛好，有多於常人的關注度。在日常生活中，我最喜歡的事情就是閱讀報刊雜誌，從《讀者》、《青年文摘》再到《意林》，基本上都是我的必看書目。
因此，我也希望日後可以從事與雜誌編輯相關的工作。可能很多人都夢想成為作家或者記者，我知道那需要足夠優秀的文筆和思維跳躍性。現在我對記者的欽佩之情還是大於羨慕的，他們永遠奔赴在新聞的第一線，走在事發的最前列。為大眾呈現最及時、最新鮮的新聞。而我緯度對雜誌編輯情有獨鍾，我真心喜歡這項工作，我享受閱讀書籍時優美文字在眼前跳躍的快感，我願意為這項事業付出心血和精力，也願意為大眾呈現的一面，讓整個社會充滿愛與正能量，更願意去分享這份美好。用文字純淨心靈，哲理文化人生。
當然了，還要請各位老師原諒由於我的閱歷有限，難免會有一些膚淺的認識，我知道勝任這項工作還需要計算機方面的相關知識和技能，而我都不是很熟練，但是我相信我有永不放棄的信心，勇於拼搏的精神，敢於堅持的毅力將這項工作做好。
另一方面，我們也可以看到當前語言文化發展的現象都不是讓人滿意。尤其是在當下文化多元的情形下，面臨西方文化的強烈衝擊，文化發展更加舉步維艱。而我們在世界各地舉辦的孔子學院，傳播國學經典等活動，舉辦《漢字聽寫大會》等節目，都顯示出對文化發展的重視。我們深知文化是民族的血脈，尤其是對中國這樣一個有著五千年文明的大國。文化軟實力就尤為重要，所以我願意為此貢獻自己的一份微薄之力，盡我之能力來弘揚中華文化，傳播國家經典。
最後再次感謝各位老師審讀我的留學申請書。
不後悔，去__大學，只因你的名字叫__大學。
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture ‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
Dear _,
As a 28-year-old female, there has been nothing sensational about my pasteducation and career experience. I do not feel any regret because I have alwaysbeen making worthy efforts to achieve personal development and to enrich my lifein my own way. Helen Keller serves as a paragon that I will emulate in my entirelifetime. The beautiful things that she brought to the world with her lovingheart and her strength convince me that the power of the spiritual motivation isinfinite. An individual lives a meaningful live only to the extent of benefitingthe welfare of others. Both my education and my five-year work experience haveunmistakably made me believe that economics is a science whose ultimate functionis the improvement of human welfare. The motivation behind my currentapplication for a Master’s program in economics is to pursue a more fruitfulcareer development in the future so that the process of my self-actualizationwill also be a process of making contributions to others.
My education background makes me an appropriate candidate for your education consists of two stages. From 1993 to 1995 I received a juniorcollege education from the Business School of _ University, majoring inmarketing. Then I proceeded onto an undergraduate program in the Department ofBusiness Administration of _ University, waived of entrance examination becauseof my distinguished academic performance at the junior college (ranking topsecond among 31 students in the class). During my undergraduate program, Icontinue to maintain a satisfactory academic performance, ranking top ten amonga total of 51 students. Completing my undergraduate program in 1998, I obtaineda Bachelor’s degree in economics.
Through my undergraduate program, I gained an increasingly deepunderstanding of the importance of economics. As far as I am concerned,economics is by no means an abstract discipline. It is closely connected withreality and is designed to explore and explain diverse economic phenomena andeconomic laws. For the foreseeable future, the conflict between the scarcity ofnatural resources and the infinitude of human demand will continue to persist,posing a long-lasting threat to the social development of all nations. Thenecessity to seek a solution to this conflict gave birth to Economics, whichpromises to maximize material wealth through an optimum allocation of use of my diligent efforts at coursework and my strong interest ineconomics, I managed to achieve a top-10 ranking in my class，winning the honorof Outstanding Student and a second-class scholarship. I familiarized myselfwith most classic works on economics and management, including Principles ofManagement by Harold Koontz, Economics by Samuelson, Competition Strategy byPorter and Wealth of Nations by Adam Smiths, etc. From the very beginning of myeconomics study, I have tried to expose myself to western perspectives.
Starting from the premise that economics will be lifeless unless it isapplied to the problems in the real world, I paid special attention in myundergraduate program to the combination of theory and practice as a way oflearning and applying my knowledge of economics. I once spent a whole summervacation on conducting a survey of the fast food business in _ City. I sampled15 fast food restaurants, carried out interviews with restaurant owners and thecustomers. I applied quantitative analysis to my statistics and proposedconcrete measures for developing the city’s fast food industry through improvingmanagement, business environment, food variety and service quality.
My research ability was improved through writing my thesis –The Protectionand the Development of China’s National Industry in the Age of Reform andOpening Up. The thesis focuses on China’s joining of WTO and its possiblenegative impact on the growth of national industry. My conclusion is that acareful balance must be struck between the protection of national industry andthe introduction of foreign capital. The thesis was rated “Excellent” for itscomprehensive theoretical formulation, detailed statistics and creativeperspectives.
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的老師：
你好!我叫，是本校系*班學生。
因最近情緒煩躁，頹廢，不能靜下心在校繼續學習。在自己的學習中，感覺到前所未有的迷茫，想到外面體驗一下生活。故向學校申請休學一段時間，希望能獲你的批准。
以前，從知道考慮自己前途的時候，我選擇了上學.然而在日新月異的變革中，在校畢業後的就業問題是每個在校學子的一塊心病。我想的很多、很久，感覺自己的命運由自己把握，真想出學校大門改變自己一下，即使改變後仍沒結果，我則問心無愧!
謝謝學校這一年的培養!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
Letters veryimportant part applicationprocess. collegesbecome moremoresought out from increasingnumber applicantseach year, standout fromalsoincreasing. Below we providehelpful information collegerecommendationtailoringeach letter. Know maysound obvious, youknow candidatewell. After all,how can you write collegerecommendation letter someoneyou know little about?Recommendations written vaguefamiliarity oftenidentifiable cando more harm thangood. Obtain anothertip collagerecommendation letter firstobtain student'srsumherGPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employmentexperience specialskills. moreinformation you have about particularcandidate,moreconstructive your recommendation can
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
College-Bound Student Information
CollegeView offers an extensive amount of valuable information andresources for the college-bound student. Please follow these links to discoverhow our publishings can help you in your choice for an educational pathway
尊敬的_領導：
您好!我是遼寧省鐵嶺市高階中學20_屆理科實驗班的金巨集，和其他的同胞或者說是競爭者們一樣，我也希望通過貴校的自主招生來實現我一直以來的夢想——考入_大學，首先感謝您能在百忙之中抽出時間審閱我的申請材料。
相信在此之前，您已經閱讀過了無數的留學申請書，對省、市三好學生，校學生會主席，團支部書記等也已經見怪不怪了。很可惜，這些耀眼的榮譽和職位我都沒有，我有的是對_全面的瞭解，有的是對_始終如一的熱愛與嚮往，有的是“非_不去”的勇氣與決心。更重要的是，我有著誠實、實事求是的品質，我不會為了得到您的青睞而誇大事實，虛張聲勢，而且我覺得一個人的領導能力、組織能力、交際能力和協調能力並不是只有靠這些職位才能體現出來的，畢竟校學生會主席只有一個，但具有多方面能力的高中生遠不止這些。
從小就熱愛旅遊、喜歡開拓視野的我也算是遊遍了祖國的大江南北，各大學也基本都參觀過，而且還在去年先後參加了_大學的冬令營和同濟、_大學的夏令營，但在眾多高校中，唯有自由、開放、享有“_”美譽的_大學深深吸引了我，而且我也聽到__的學長_介紹說，__非常適合那些“有想法”的人，只要你有想法，__都會盡全力幫你實現，我覺得我就是那種有想法、有創新意識的人，這也使我更加堅定了“將來一定要到__讀書”的決心。憑藉著十幾年如一日的努力，我的成績一直名列前茅，會考更是以全市第二十八的成績考入鐵嶺市重點高中理科實驗班。到了高中，我並沒有驕傲，而是更加努力的學習，成績也有了進一步的飛躍，每次考試成績均穩定在年級前十名，發揮好時還會進入前五名，我堅信自己是有資格進入_大學的。
做事果斷，善於規劃是我的另一優點。說到規劃，我對自己的未來也已經做好了初步的打算：近年來，隨著中國經濟的騰飛，汽車已經走入了尋常百姓家。由於汽車工業的進步，這方面人才的需求量也在隨之增長。這對從小酷愛汽車，7歲就能識別數十種車標的我，無疑是一種巨大的激勵，我也勵志將來要進入一家汽車公司，參與設計製造一部效能優異，而且安全節能的汽車。據我所知，現今中國汽車在發動機的節油耐用，穩定效能上仍有一定的提高空間，而伴隨著油價的上漲，增壓直噴等技術也已走下神壇，進入乘用領域。在車身結構方面，人們對於安全舒適的追求是無止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能設計，有了更優秀的懸架，有了鋁材，甚至碳纖維的應用。我願把我全部的精力都投入到這些領域中，讓中國的汽車有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞臺上。這一切看似虛幻的夢想，一旦進入__，就都很有可能變為現實。眾所周知，__的機械工程及自動化、車輛工程等專業都是當前國內最一流的。除此之外，貴校的密歇根學院不僅包含機械類專業，而且如果前兩年在校成績突出，還能出國到密歇根大學繼續深造，學習國外先進的理念，這些都非常有助於實現我遠大的理想。我保證，如果我能進入_大學，一定會本著“_”的校訓努力學習機械方面的專業知識，培養各方面的綜合素質，成為像_那樣的_大學的驕傲。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
Dear _,
My name is Lin Hao, from Northeast China---Heilongjiang Province. Thelong-term and cold climate has allowed me to develop a tough and tenaciouscharacter in the course of my life. In 20 years, I was admitted to China withexcellent results. Jilin University, a prestigious university, is currentlystudying for a bachelor's degree in economics majoring in internationaleconomics and trade, and a second degree in futures investment and managementmajor in the same period. My university is a comprehensive university with avery complete range of disciplines. My university life has not only enabled meto develop a comprehensive and three-dimensional development in learning methodsand professional knowledge, but more importantly, it has improved my ability tointegrate knowledge of various disciplines. At the same time, it greatlyincreased my desire for knowledge. Therefore, I decided to study in the UK aftergraduation. Through understanding, I currently hope to apply for a__University__ major.
Family is very important to everyone, because it is the first classroom forus to receive education. My grandfather was a banker, my father was abusinessman, and my mother was a statistician. Their words and deeds to meplayed an extremely important role in the establishment and development of myoutlook on life and values, and also helped me. Established an honest,hardworking, and never-say-fail character. So influenced by them, I am veryinterested in finance disciplines. My family is the most important asset in mylife. It gives me the interest in learning this subject and the character ofgoing forward courageously.
Through the learning of professional knowledge, I have developed a stronginterest in economics and finance. I read "Life Economics" by Dr. DavidFriedman. In the book, he used easy-to-understand cases. Combining the mistyprinciples of economics with people’s ordinary life has enabled me to master theeconomic principles that most people find boring, and the learning methods inreal life. At the same time, I have a good understanding of Fried Dr. Mandeveloped a feeling of worship. In the same year, I read his masterpiece "PriceTheory" again. Through the study of this book, I became obsessed with knowledgeof currency and finance. Due to the strong desire for knowledge, I started tominor in the second degree "Futures Investment and Management". During thisperiod, I met a mentor, Professor Lu, a very famous scholar in China's futuresindustry. Professor Lu combines the theory and practice of the futures market,and combines the true meaning of life with the operation of the futures market,which is regarded as a "casino" by outsiders, and teaches us the knowledge ofthe futures market and economic investment. This teaching method is in line withmy learning habits, so I quickly entered the state. We often discuss thedevelopment of China’s futures industry and the price fluctuations of the worldfutures market together. In the autumn of 20__, I was invited to assist him incompleting the "China Financial Futures" Research work on the "Enlightenment ofthe Japanese Yen Development Route to the Development of China's Renminbi" inthe "Market Establishment" project. Because of his outstanding performance, hewon the appreciation of Professor Lu.
In addition to studying professional knowledge, in my spare time, I alsoestablished the first leukemia volunteer organization in Jilin Province andserved as the chairman. Helped 10 children with leukemia from poor families inthe form of voluntary activities. Every year, they held lectures on leukemiaknowledge at Jilin University, as well as volunteer registration activities forthe Chinese bone marrow bank (Chinese hematopoietic stem cell bank), and bloodsample extraction activities. In the past three years, the association has beenUnder my leadership, we have made considerable progress and achieved outstandingresults. Many media have reported on our activities. On the website of _社 onOctober 25, 20_, we also reported on our activities. In addition, my deeds werealso reported to the famous Chinese student magazine "East, West, South, Northand University Students" Issue 03 of the year 20_. These honors fully prove theaffirmation of my work by the society and the school. Now, one of every 150volunteers in the Chinese bone marrow bank is developed by my association. Theassociation has also been awarded the title of Jilin University BoutiqueAssociation for three consecutive years. I was also named the first "Moving JiUniversity" of Jilin University. The title of top ten college students, and atthe same time, through the establishment of a volunteer association, not onlyenabled me to realize the value of life, but also exercised my organizationalskills, which greatly improved my personal quality. In addition, I also likesports very much. I am good at sprinting, football, etc. Young, I should be fullof vitality.
In the summer of 20_, as a student representative of Jilin University, Ivisited a famous university. As a Chinese representative, I participated in morethan ten student exchange activities, and as a cultural messenger, I spreadChinese traditions and modern culture to the students, and through the visit, Ilearned some culture and visited their education system. In the process, I wasdeeply moved by the university's advanced teaching mode and strong scientificresearch capabilities. Compared with my own school, although we have developedrapidly, there is still a gap between the world's top education. This feelinginspired my enthusiasm for learning. After returning to my country, I decided touse my own strength to make my own contribution to the development of mymotherland. This is also an important reason why I applied to your school,because as a The responsibility of the Chinese is to use the advanced knowledgeI learned overseas to build my motherland.
"Practice, firm, and hardworking" is the fine tradition I inherited, and itis also my life creed. Facing the imminent graduation from university, a strongthirst for knowledge and a passion for professional knowledge, I decided tocontinue my professional study and accept the rigorous teaching, cutting-edgeresearch and new ways of thinking in the university, so as to enrich myself andrealize myself I also hope that I can become the messenger of the culture of thetwo countries. Thank you for your attention and look forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the lengthof time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but inthe richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age,many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, Iwill consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavorscan be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I canrealize the value of my life.
My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkablescholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 20__ andTOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I receivedscholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equallyprominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on theOutstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my realinterest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primaryschool student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching careerexemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked onupon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that theexisting educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backwardteaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have renderedChinese education out of place with the modern international development ineducation. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice inChina lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance,though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in pasttwo years, in practical operation such education has more often than notdeteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-orientededucation instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience,despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in myteaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, Ihave found that the more serious flaws inherent in China's current educationalsystem cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advancedprogram in education becomes necessary.
In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology andmethodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of humanexistence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational developmentand of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational valueorientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered aroundthe cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously ter attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developedpersonality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Suchissues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-makingin education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized e have also been innovations in educational research methodology. Thetendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic researchcategories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organicallyintegrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is alsoimportant to carry out educational experimentations in which educationalpredictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity ofeducation and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensiveapplication of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons arewhat fascinate me.
In view of the following qualifications that I have acquired, I believethat I will acquit myself satisfactorily in the prospective Ph.D. program ineducation that I am currently endeavoring to apply for. First and foremost, asis often claimed, one's interest is one's best director. I believe that I willdo well what I am really interested in doing. Secondly, though I majored ineconomics as an undergraduate, my trainings during that stage helped developeffective modes of thinking and research approaches. In addition, Iconscientiously self-studied many works related to education, including ADevelopmental History of Educational Science in the West, which enabled me toconstruct a solid groundwork for more advanced studies in this field. Next, itcan be safely asserted that education and economics are not entirely example, it is necessary to apply many statistical methods in educationalpsychology and my academic record indicates that statistics is the subject thatI am most good at. Last but not the least, my current teaching career and myteaching experience will play a positive role in facilitating my target degreeprogram.
The reason why I apply for the University of -- is that it is the firststate university with a time-honored history. The School of Education in thisuniversity is quite prominent among its counterparts in the field. I amparticularly attracted by the School's powerful pedagogical resource, vibrantintellectual atmosphere and a comprehensive curriculum. I plan to apply for adegree program in Instructional Technology or Educational Psychology, both ofwhich enjoy unparalleled academic reputation in the world. My application forInstructional Technology is motivated by my strong interest in the applicationof modern science and technology, especially the information technologyrepresented by the Internet, in the field of education and in the nature of aseries of revolutionary changes resulting thereof. Instructional Technology is anew discipline that has emerged as a result of the rapid development of moderncommunication technology since the late 20th century. It has tremendouspotential for development and commercial application. As for my motive inselecting Educational Psychology as another possible area of specialization inmy degree program, it is my long-cherished interest that primarily counts. Onthe other hand, all the accomplished educators since the 1960's have beenwell-versed in psychology. Almost every important new educational theory isderived psychological findings in one way or another so that educationalpsychology has subsequently developed into a fundamental subject for the scienceof education. The tendency in the 21st century is to emphasize on the microresearch of educational activities and against this backdrop educationalpsychology will be attached greater importance. In Instructional Technology, Iwould like to focus on the following studies: how to improve educationalefficiency by applying research results from natural sciences and engineeringtechnology; how to explore the combination and coordination of pedagogicalcontents and to improve teaching methodology by exploiting the theoreticalfindings from psychology and educational science concerning the process ofteaching and learning. In Educational Psychology, I will concentrate on appliedcognition and development, gifted and creative education, genetics and childrendevelopment, personality structure and individual differences and other relatedsubjects.
For me, to shift from economics to education and to pursue an advanceddegree in the United States is not so much a challenge as an opportunity. Atpresent, major reforms are being introduced into virtually every importantaspect of Chinese society. The field of education especially calls forcomprehensive reforms. The United States occupies an absolutely leading positionin the present-day world in education. It is my conviction that, in the UnitedStates, advanced educational theories, technologies and information willfacilitate me immensely in the achievement of remarkable academic progress,fulfilling my aspiration to become an accomplished professional in the field ofeducation. This will not only bring my patriotic fervor into reality but alsomake my life more meaningful and rewarding.
Yours sincerely,
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
College-Bound Student Information
CollegeView offers an extensive amount of valuable information andresources for the college-bound student. Please follow these links to discoverhow our publishings can help you in your choice for an educational pathway
Monsieur le Président，
Dans le souhait d'une inscription auprès de votre université， j'ai l'honneurde vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.
J'étudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans， et j'obtiendrai malicence(bac+4) en juillet 20_ .
Outre la langue fran?aise， j'ai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle jem'intéresse particulièrement.
Après l'obtention de mon dipl?me， j'aimerais poursuivre mes études delittérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement delittérature.
Or， pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires， j'ai besoin d’un certificatde pré-inscription délivré par votre université. C'est pourquoi je vous demandequelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sontles attesations que je devrais fournir.
Si c'est possible， pourriez-vous me faire parvenir， à l'adresse ci-dessus， undossier d'inscription ?
Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance， je vous prie d'agréer，Monsieur le Président， l'expression de mon profond respect.
尊敬的_老師：
您好!
我叫___，是___中學中學___學生。我與_緣起於幼年時讀過的《荷塘月色》，蒼茫的月光靜靜地瀉落，田田的荷葉亭亭的立著，如同夢境般的美好景色給我留下了深刻的印象,從此，古樸典雅、文化底蘊豐厚的_就紮根於我心中，成為我魂牽夢繞的聖地。
_重視的是全面發展的人才，所以在平時各科的學習中，我都穩紮穩打，表現出色，在歷次考試中都名列前茅。
競賽方面：在20__年第__屆全國生物中學生生物學奧林匹克聯賽中獲陝西賽區一等獎並代表陝西參加國家決賽獲得銀獎，在20__全國聯賽中獲陝西賽區數學一等獎和化學二等獎。在這裡我想談談暑假參加全國生物競賽的經歷。來到武漢二中，我以自己的微笑與親和力結識了來自全國各地的朋友，談天說地，共話理想;我懂得了山外青山樓外樓，與全國的精英相比，我還有很多的地方需要改進;我學會了就算遇到挫折也永不言敗，調整心態迎接下一個挑戰才更重要……這一切，都是讓我畢生難忘的寶貴經歷，也讓我更深刻的理解了_“自強不息”的校訓。
愛好廣泛：我雖然是一個理科生，卻對歷史人文知識等很感興趣，閒暇時喜歡看看“百家講壇”，看電視上的國學知識競賽，有意提升自己的綜合素養。我幼時曾習國畫，我喜歡在生宣上信筆潑墨，喜歡那份“山水橫拖千里外”的悠遠超然;我也學過古箏，我喜歡在那二十一弦琴上鉤託抹挑，喜歡《高山流水》的相逢恨晚，喜歡《春江花月夜》的婉約憂傷;國中時，我去學習跆拳道，我喜歡聽雙腿破空而出凌風而過踢中腳靶的清脆聲響，也將跆拳道精神——禮義廉恥，忍耐克己，百折不屈——牢牢地銘刻在心，並且踐行。
我的理想：我從小就很喜歡看各式各樣的建築，阿布?辛博神廟每個太陽日的第一縷曙光，巴黎聖母院高聳的尖頂，悉尼歌劇院的風帆造型，都讓我深深著迷。我希望能成為_建築系的一員，形成自己獨特的建築風格，從而實現我的終極夢想——參與未來世博會上中國館的設計，讓世界看到中國的風采!
我很喜歡泰戈爾的那一句詩：“天空不留下鳥的痕跡，但我已飛過。”為了我的夢想——_，我已經厚積了多年的力量，等待薄發的那一刻。不論結果如何，至少我曾經為自己的夢想努力過，為自己的人生拼搏過，那麼我就永不後悔。或許當我蒼顏白髮時想起這段時期的經歷，我也會為自己當初的堅持，為年少時的那份破釜沉舟的決心，而微微一笑。
“長風破浪會有時，直掛雲帆濟滄海。”_園，等著我!
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