尊敬的各位老師及校領導:
本人是外語系日語專業2班學生，現申請休學，為期一年(201X年9月—201X年9月)，希望學校予以批准。
不知何時開始，會忘記自己做一件事的理由，會回想不起昨日的自己，也不知道日復一日的我，在做些什麼。回想至今為止的大學生活，有收穫，也有一些不甘。收穫了善良簡單的朋友們，還有隨和可親的同學們，以及學習日語帶給我的充實感，還開始學習了我所喜歡的跳舞。不甘是由於我的迷茫，是由於我所不喜的大學生活，我不喜的並非大學本身，而是由於時代賦予他的另一種風貌與意義。然而，另一種意義上，大學也是自己的，如何度過大學生活也取決於每個人自己。我不希望沒有目標，並且沒有認清自己，就茫茫然然的度過這寶貴的四年，這樣對我的青春來說也算是一種損失。
休學的一年裡，我會找一份與日語相關的工作，繼續學習日語。我對所能找到的工作抱的期望值並不高，也並不認為出社會工作會有多順利。在休學的一年中，我希望能和在校的同學們一起考N2 或是N1，實現自我獨立，並且能為家裡儘自己的力量。回學校之後，也能更加有目的的學習，或者還能做些翻譯兼職。未曾想過考研的我，竟然也萌生了跨專業考心理學研究生的念頭，雖然只是一剎那的想法，也讓我自己驚訝不已。我也明白了，活著要不斷的學習，學校就是一片很好的土壤，能為我們營造最好的環境。
我決定休學，並不是不對自己的人生負責，而正是因為我要對自己的人生負責。可能有人會影響你的人生，但他們無法對你的生命負責，也沒有人會對你的生命負責。休學是我認認真真，反反覆覆考慮所得出的決定。很多時候，我們永遠都不知道自己所做的決定是對是錯，或許根本就沒有對或錯。只能在認真且客觀地思考之後，做出心中的選擇，這樣也就不會後悔了罷。
上天賦予了我們思考的能力，就讓我們不能僅僅滿足於肉體上的需求活著，而要在心靈體驗上感受到真正的滿足。我有自己想過的生活，我也想為之努力，我也會為之努力的。
家長聯絡電話: 家長簽名:
學生聯絡電話: 學生簽名:
尊敬的學校領導、老師：
我是現就讀於X大學XX級X學院X班的學生，現因(休學原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(休學時間)，即從X年X月XX日至X年X月XX日。
望領導及老師能夠予以批准。
申請人：
申請時間：x年x月x日
尊敬的:
我是系X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(一般為一年)。
休學後，我會努力(如:留學)，並且在有餘力的前提下繼續堅持學習。並在休學期間，加強自己的思想教育，使自己的思想始終與我校保持高度一致。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
此致
敬禮
系X班
年 月 日
尊敬的：
我是系X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要出國留學休學XX年。
休學後，我會努力,並且繼續堅持學習。並在休學期間，加強自己的思想教育，使自己的思想始終與我校保持高度一致。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
此致
敬禮
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
尊敬的：
我是，現就讀於X級X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(填上你要休學的時間)。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
X級X班
年 月 日
尊敬的老師：
你好!我叫，是本校系*班學生。
因最近情緒煩躁，頹廢，不能靜下心在校繼續學習。在自己的學習中，感覺到前所未有的迷茫，想到外面體驗一下生活。故向學校申請休學一段時間，希望能獲你的批准。
以前，從知道考慮自己前途的時候，我選擇了上學.然而在日新月異的變革中，在校畢業後的就業問題是每個在校學子的一塊心病。我想的很多、很久，感覺自己的命運由自己把握，真想出學校大門改變自己一下，即使改變後仍沒結果，我則問心無愧!
謝謝學校這一年的培養!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
Since I was young I have always had a keen interest in the way that thethings around me work. From marvelling at the telephone to how planes can fly,engineering advances have never failed to captivate me. For this reason, I havealways tried to find out how such things function, and about how they have hadan impact on the society we live in today. Coupled with the fact that I havealways enjoyed the logical and problem-solving processes involved in maths andphysics, I decided several years ago to embark on a career in engineering.
Since then, I have endeavoured to find out as much about engineering aspossible. I researched the great engineers such as Brunel, and discovered thegreat works they had completed. I have attended several engineering conferences,the most recent of which I was selected to speak live on radio about myexperiences. And once I had completed several weeks' worth of work experience, Iwas assured that it was the career that I wanted to pursue.
This summer, I took part in the Nuffield Bursary scheme for a month,working in a team, at Aerogistics Ltd. Our project was to analyse and implementa new system for the distribution of consumable materials to the individualdepartments within the company. We found the current system to be highlyinefficient and after much data gathering and thought, presented our findings tothe senior managers of the company who agreed with our ideas. The last week wasspent starting the implementation of these ideas. I found the experience to behighly challenging, yet rewarding especially as it led to me gaining a GoldCrest Award. I also found it useful as I got to see engineers at work and thedaily problems that they face. I learnt that there is a lot more to being a goodengineer than possessing technical competence, although this is undoubtedlyimportant; team work, communication and leadership skills are vital as well.
I have also recently been selected to complete two placements with armyengineers. One of these placements will focus on the more practical side ofengineering while the other will focus on the skills needed by a professionalengineer focussing on project planning and leadership. I hope to find theexperience useful.
In my spare time I like to play sport and music. In secondary school I wascaptain for the Netball and Football teams, as well as taking part in variousother sports. The experience of this greatly improved my team working abilitiesas well as my fitness. As a keen musician I am working towards my grade 5 theoryand grade 7 practical on cello. I am a member of a Youth Orchestra, and havejust recently completed a tour of Italy. I am also in the school orchestra andhave led several orchestras in the past, before progressing to the LYO.
In school, I am Deputy Head Girl, helping to lead a team of over 40prefects. I find this to be a challenging and stimulating role and believe ithas developed my confidence immensely. As well as carrying out the normal dutiesof a prefect, such as supervising younger students, I must lead and manage theother prefects. My role involves arranging rotas, organising after school eventssuch as the Year 7 social and parent's evenings and public speaking as well asother responsibilities, which have developed my communication, organisation andleadership skills immensely. The role requires a lot of commitment, but it hashelped to improve my time management, as I try to strike a balance between itand school work, which is my main priority. I have also been selected to competein the Physics Olympiad and have been entered for the Biology AdvancedExtension.
During my time at university I hope to gain a good degree, which will standme in good stead for when I enter the world of work. I would like to continue myeducation in a place where I can thrive both academically and socially, andwhere I can put my determination and motivation into good use. Thank you.
尊敬的_大學老師：
您好!
"韶華不為少年留，勤為天道酬。"正如高三的教室後牆上我所想出的勵志名言一般，它時刻激勵著班上的同學與我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡陽市八中高三的一名學生，就讀文科，是平凡的，因為是一個同所有人一樣的矛盾融合體;但又堅信自己是不同的，是因為我將成為發光體。金子，到哪裡都會發光，而我選擇的是貴校這樣一座鍊金爐。
河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我願像河般，為夢想奔騰向前永不止息;像海般容納百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利萬物而不爭，處眾人之所惡，故幾於道。居善地，心善淵，與善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，動善時。夫唯不爭，故無尤。"善的最高境界，大致在於此乎。像水般，往低處流，卻能容納百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高處走時，當不勝寒時，不忘想想水的謙虛，以一種包容一切的姿態，以柔化剛，接受萬物的俯視與臣服，這種"柔德"，使我自己的心境變得平和，要像水那樣，無形勝有形，不斷地改變，塑造自己，臻於完美。
寵辱不驚，閒看庭前花開花落;去留無意，漫隨天外雲捲雲舒的同時，我本著湖湘學派"經世致用"的原則，志當存高遠。如果說周總理是"為中華之崛起而讀書"，那我便願為"中國之強盛而讀書"。學無止境，人生本是一個不斷學習的過程。在六年的學習委員一職的任職過程中，除了學習課本知識，我的右手可以寫出一手漂亮的毛筆。因為正，一筆一劃地寫，心才會正。我的左手，能彈出美妙的小提琴樂章，這不僅開發了我的右腦，音樂更使我思維敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不僅是人類對上帝的提問，更是與大自然的交流。讓狂躁的心，不知不覺間安靜下來。
人生的旅途中，讀書萬卷：安徒生童話到世界名著。我醉心於寶黛間的痴纏;徜徉於《傲慢與偏見》裡伊麗莎白奇妙的心海中;感嘆於李白"我輩豈是蓬蒿人"的豪邁;與杜甫"安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏"一起憂國憂民;與易安居士一起看"雨疏風驟，綠肥紅瘦"。在文的海洋中，我願成那一滴水，一尾魚，在海洋心中，見證著它的悲喜。於是在歷史的不平中，我亦詩嘆曰：陳王夢還金鏤枕，鳳皇遺恨正阿房，才佳長恨無歸處，冷露成淚暗遺香。
我同樣願行萬里路，沿途的風景，豐盈著自己的人生，懂得取與舍，讓人生的閱歷更加豐富。曾到過南京，河畔槳聲燈影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝舊事已隨流水，而這座古都卻有太多歷史無法忘記的東西：革命先行者孫文先生之陵……流連於河海大學門前，不由駐足，希望自己能成為"歸人"，而不是"過客"。我這樣的遊子，在閱過17年風景後，選擇了河海大學作為圓夢的地方。
我喜歡奔跑的感覺，起跑線比重點更加美好，體味那為理想拼搏的過程。十年磨一劍，劍出鞘，一鳴驚人，直指河海。
我，靜如處子，或動如脫兔，願意跟書本這樣高尚的朋友對話。書山有路勤為徑，運用正確的學習方法，在無涯的學海中"直掛雲帆濟滄海"，正確地駕駛著學習之舟，雖然途中有風浪，但堅持駛向目的地--河海之灣。我，崇尚獨立，常獨立思考探尋人生真諦，遇事冷靜自若，卻又讓理性成為我織夢的梭，讓勤奮成為我築夢的橋。理智與熱情，誠信與好學，成為划向河海的槳，只為到那裡，為自己編織另一個夢，解決南方家鄉旱澇災害頻繁的問題，造福家鄉、祖國人民。在見證河灣輝煌的同時，與河海一起創造下一個輝煌。
我願逆風行舟，駛向河海，利用水，造福人民。
我願逆風，只為尋河海一夢。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
20__年__月__日
尊敬的_領導、老師們：
有目標的人生才是有意義的人生，一個人若沒有目標，就如同迷失了方向的船隻，隨波逐流，永遠沒有溫馨的港灣。我的目標，就是求新務實地創造，以成果回報社會，以人格魅力影響世界!而我最嚮往的_大學，也將成為我生活的契機。
王國維曾提到人生的三個境界，我的過去就是“昨夜西鳳凋碧樹，獨上高樓，望盡天涯路”。因為一直都是非常優秀的學生，因此對自己的要求也很嚴格。記得那是國小五年級的期末測試，不知是換了考場，還是題目的角度難度不合我的口味，我一向引以為豪的數學在那次考試中只有區區80分。老師們不好嚴厲地批評我，畢竟我平時的專注有目共睹;父母卻是非常失望地將我“軟禁”起來，不能出門，不能碰電腦，甚至於“新聞聯播”都成為禁忌。
我後悔自己太不認真，但是這又有什麼用呢?!在被關在家的時間裡，我就把那張試卷翻來覆去地看，我看錯的題目，重新做它們，繼續尋求更快更好的解法。這種開拓初次嘗試是很累的，阿拉伯數字圍成緊箍咒，向我的頭上套去。
直到進入國中才逐漸意識到這就是所謂的“正確學習方法”，才瞭解“不認真”是過於籠統的概念。其實在不知不覺中，無論誰都會進步，譬如我並沒有刻意去琢磨那些錯題，而錯題於我就像是甘甜的乳汁，有著汲取不盡的養分。後來當聽到有人評價我認真、仔細、“肯鑽”、“坐得住”時，我並沒有多大的感覺。靜下心進而回顧，已經在長年累月中成為習慣，歲月的流逝雖會將鋒芒磨盡，但遺留下來的卻是至寶。
而“衣帶漸寬終不悔，為伊消得人憔悴”堪稱現在生活的映照了。每天往返於學校家庭間，尤其是進入高三，重複單調的生活讓人產生厭倦。可是我明白我所要追求的是什麼，我為“伊”而憔悴，但卻“終不悔”。這是希望的作用：當我看見新的藥物治療病人、新的材料用於生活、新的裝置提高產率，看到人民的生活美好，我就會感到由衷的喜悅，這也就成為支援我繼續奮鬥的力量。
我看小說，我看其中所反映的社會現象，或者作者所要表達的美好願望;我看動漫，我看其中所展現的美好人性，或者享受作品本身帶給我精神的放鬆。我把我的感受寫進部落格，我為自己創造發洩的條件，於是有人評價我冷靜、客觀、“有思想”，於是有人說我趕得上潮流，有創新意識。其實這些都是一家之言，自己怎麼樣，只有自己最清楚。
我曾不太善交際，從而一度將“寂寞讓我如此美麗”奉為經典。但是看到同學回家都有伴兒，遇到困難都可以向死黨尋求幫助，我便也感到孤單與落寞。可是社會畢竟是自己的社會，個體的生存幾乎都是靠個體的力量，沒有誰會一直陪同自己走下去：父母會先於自己逝去，配偶則必須在成人後在“對的時間”遇到，朋友更不可能如影隨形。我意識到了，也就盡力讓自己融入生活圈，竟發現其實一切很簡單，需要的只是善意、友好和坦誠。
我在高中遇到很多天資聰穎的人，在感嘆的同時也逐漸發現其實“上帝在厚重的牆上開了一扇小窗”。“窮則獨善其身，達則兼濟天下”，雖然現在是一個人，但也必須從完善自我做起。在“修行”的途中所感受到的靈魂的昇華是愚鈍的我無法用筆描述的。我嫉妒過競賽優異的人，並且在得知胸有成竹的化學競賽落榜時也難過得無法入眠。但等到冷靜下來細細分析，其實自身還有非常多的漏洞：氣氛緊張時容易先入為主，遇到困難“腎上腺素分泌會急劇增多”從而影響思維。我努力克服它們，並且見賢思齊。
當然如果進入_大學，那裡將肯定是我展示自己的平臺了。在理想的指引下，我將繼續秉持高中以來優良的學習習慣和方法，繼續貫徹全面發展，努力在各方面都讓自己滿意;在生活上也必須更加照顧自己了，雖然現在也是一人，但遠在他鄉，當圓月嵌入蒼穹時也會不免引起鄉思吧。未來的生活有許許多多的變數，可以是充滿激情，也可以是頹唐無奈，生活會有非常多的誘惑，但是我必須堅守住心靈的淨土：無論怎麼改變，我所追求的理想不變!我希望為科學研究竭盡心力，我希望為國民思想精神的昇華奮鬥終身!不僅僅是大學，進入社會、開始工作，無論怎麼改變，必將始終為了崇高的事業奮鬥，向著理想賓士!我相信在未來的某一天，當我“驀然回首”時，我的夢想，已經在“燈火闌珊處”。這也應該是我人生的最後一個境界了。
我享受挑戰，勇於嘗試沒有把握的事，我知道絢爛的未來需要靠自己創造。我一直幻想自己是名英武的騎士，駕著名駒，在廣袤的歷史田野中，向著理想賓士!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
尊敬的先生/女士：
你好，我叫__，是__大學的老師。也是__學生的班主任，我非常高興地向你推薦我的學生__，並且相信它能夠出色的完成在貴校碩士課程的學習。
自從他進入大學以來, 常常表現出與年紀不相符的成熟和穩重。由於班上的大部分同學都來自其他省市，這第一次的出門離家的經歷使得他們需要一個相當長的過程適應這個完全陌生的新環境。但我注意到，相比之下，__同學很快的調整好了心態，積極主動地融入到這個新環境之中。
大學的課程與中學有很大不同，偏重在自學能力，而且專業課程的學習要求另一種思維方式。因此，在大一.大二，很多同學都表現出了不同程度的不適應，不知道該如何學習大學的課程。但是，__同學適應能力很強，很快摸清了工商管理課程的關鍵，在很短的時間裡就掌握了學習方法，而且其他任課老師都表示他對於新知識的接受能力很強，新學的知識他馬上就能消化，當堂就能理解掌握。
可以這麼說，班裡的部分學生是拿著極其出色的大學聯考成績走進了我們學校，而__同學憑藉的則是他極強的自學能力和良好的學習方法。這一點，在每學期的期末考試上得到了很好地體現，尤其是在專業英語的期末考試中取得極其優秀的成績,也是班裡少數順利通過英語四六級考試的同學.他對學習英語的熱情和毅力是最讓我感動的.
除了學__同學還校裡足球隊的主力隊員,積極的參加校裡組織的各項活動,有極強的組織和領導才能.他經常到我辦公室或給我打電話,一起討論他學習和生活中所遇到的問題,希望取得更好的學習成績.概括的說__同學是一個好學生.
我希望貴校能給他一個機會，讓他在貴校嚴謹的學風和良好的學習環境中繼續發揮他的特長，進一步提高專業知識，拓寬視野。望貴校考慮它的申請。
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
College-Bound Student Information
CollegeView offers an extensive amount of valuable information andresources for the college-bound student. Please follow these links to discoverhow our publishings can help you in your choice for an educational pathway
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is _ _, _ _ _ University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students _ _ _, and believe that it can be a good completionof your master's courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, _ _ _ _ adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, _ _ students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that he'll be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and _ _ _ by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school _ _ football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. _ _ said the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
Application Letter for studying abroad
Xiao Ming
Student
Shandong University
27 Shanda Nan Lu
Jinan , Shandong , China
250100
Dr. Melba Ripley
The School of Architecture
University of Louisiana
100 Webber Hall
Baton Rouge, LA 70814
Dear Dr. Melba Ripley:
My name is Bu Xuliang , a student studying Microbiology technology in
Shandong University School. I intend to spend my doctor years in aUSAuniversity by the end of September 20__ for my higher education at the sametime to develop my scientific skill since I love to have a career in the fieldof Microbiology.
During the past three years, I had been an excellent student .I was
extremelyinterested in knowing how a microorganism change food to theenergy for their Biochemical processes, and used to find out the answer bymyself. I have
published a paper in past three years. I am quite confident that I canarrange both my study and my daily life well in new environment. I also tookpart in a great deal of social activities and some of them were reallyimpressive. I would truly like to have theopportunity to do research work inyouruniversityso as to learn more new technology in Microbiology technology.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information aboutthe application at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Xiao Ming
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture ‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
Letters veryimportant part applicationprocess. collegesbecome moremoresought out from increasingnumber applicantseach year, standout fromalsoincreasing. Below we providehelpful information collegerecommendationtailoringeach letter. Know maysound obvious, youknow candidatewell. After all,how can you write collegerecommendation letter someoneyou know little about?Recommendations written vaguefamiliarity oftenidentifiable cando more harm thangood. Obtain anothertip collagerecommendation letter firstobtain student'srsumherGPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employmentexperience specialskills. moreinformation you have about particularcandidate,moreconstructive your recommendation can
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
College-Bound Student Information
CollegeView offers an extensive amount of valuable information andresources for the college-bound student. Please follow these links to discoverhow our publishings can help you in your choice for an educational pathway
Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economichub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I havedeveloped a meaningful outlook on lie. I identify myself with such values thatone gives meaning to life when one lives to give. Success stories of my parents, relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief inbeing independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.
As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to myworking parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools inBeijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciateindependence. As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset Igained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those6 years. After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school bybike. Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consentto the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first placegiven the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parentsand grandparents. Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain orsunshine,tempered my strong character. I have been holding myself to higheststandards, academically and physically from primary school days through tocollege life. I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have beenexposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside ofclassroom. I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstratedcommitment to teamwork. I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when Iwas in primary school. Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills inthe field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader. And I didjustice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete inShanghai and Hong Kong several times. And the strong track record of outoutstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitementtoday. During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposedto the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center ofAsia. That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth andfinance. And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped myambition to be a financer.
Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life anddeath for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference wasFinance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity. The result cameas a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead. But Istuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance. I have since workedhard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance. As a result , I amdnow well on my way to graduation with double degrees in both computer scienceand finance in 20__.
During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as Idabbled into the real business world. We settled for newspaper as our maidenattempt.. As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating,from cost control to market survey. My strong leadership and sunergy of theentire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy. Yetinexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in theend. But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture. I now know more aboutwhere I need to work on. When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how tomanage money in the safest way. They helped me put my pocket money in the bankand get interest as a return. Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize thatsystematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much moreabout what finance is all about. Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimmingincreases, the desire to swim in the sea grows. Yet, with more academicexposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge neededto stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance. That self-conscious humblenessversus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to optfor further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges offinance.
After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for ClarkUniversity,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US. I trustthat demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind offinance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update myvision as financier of the future. To me,Clark is the best and right place thatcan surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike. I am morethan anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble partto its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas. I am therefore very muchlooking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus. May that offercome just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in oneof the greatest colleges in the US.
pplied Program：Organizational Behavior
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
Dear_,
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built， management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China， so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I， also， would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up， I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China， I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE)， even so， books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June， 20__， Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms， I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment， I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact， I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American， and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting： Why somecompanies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more thanothers? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the samedifficulties?
With the questions in my mind， I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack： Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch， in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior， I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed， definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December， 20__， I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge， I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately， as a senior， I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months， I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system， which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation， I continued my work inthis company. In May， 20__， the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training， I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster， with its excellencein management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment， I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind， I hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
dear professor,
i am greatly grateful that you can spare some time to read my letter. i ama chinese undergraduate from _, which is one of the top 10 universities inchina, and i will graduate in 20_. after that, i want to continue my educationby pursuing a master degree in france. i am now in the department of _.
my primary interest is in international commerce, and i notice that essecis on top of that field, so i decide to exert myself to get in. your research in“cross-cultural relationship marketing”, especially your publications onbusiness of china as well as southeast asia, are of particular interest to i would like to deal with business between europe and china in my 's why i seek entry to your theme.
during my university years, i am used to working in a team environment. forexample, i was administrative vice minister in student union, and organized andschemed activities along with competitions in university. for my excellent job,i gained the scholarship for entertainment and physical education r passing college english tests 4&6, i turned to learn french last yearand i got a score of 463 in tcf. i am preparing for ielts currently, and if gmatis necessary for applying master degree in essec, i shall take the test afterthe ielts test.
with so much admiration and enthusiasm, i hope i would have the opportunityto work under your supervision. if admitted, i am able to continue working alongthe lines of your present research. thanks for your kindness andconsideration.
yours sincerely , _-
Dear _,
On November 9, 20__, I took my GRE Subject (BIOLOGY) test. Although I it isbeyond me to report the exact number of the participants in this specific testthe world over, the score I achieved indicated to me that I was above 98%, andaccording to the analysis by my classmates, this might be the highest score thatChinese students have ever achieved. While I was aware that the importance ofany test score as an indicator of one’s scholastic aptitudes should never beover-exaggerated, the result still gave me a tremendous sense of self-pride andself-achievement. I believe that I achieved such a high score not through merecoincidence. Instead, it is the result of my long-time love for and dedicatedefforts at biology. With an implicit faith in my knowledge of biology and in mypotential to continue to excel others, I here solemnly file this document in anattempt to apply for admission into your esteemed university for a Master’sprogram in pharmacology.
I am confident in my qualifications as a competitive applicant for yourhighly respected program, partially because of my unusual interest inpharmacology. As a bridge across medical science and pharmacy, pharmacologyplays a vital role in the research on the ways to resist diseases. Theexploration and the subsequent elaboration on the mechanism of therapeuticfunctioning of drugs is a necessary step in the development and application ofdrugs to overcome diseases. Faced with this academic discipline that isinextricably connected with human life and human welfare, I have always beenfascinated by this subject, bent on making my own contributions to theimprovement of the quality of human life. Every time I learn about new theories,approaches and developments in biology and pharmacology, I cannot help feelingexcited. Each setback I encounter or each success I achieve in my experimentswould motivate me to persist and continue. It is this fascination with biologyand pharmacology that stands behind my dedicated studies and research in thosesubjects.
The 4-year comprehensive and systematic study and training in the specialtyof pharmacy guaranteed my successful completion of my undergraduate program atthe College of Medicine of _ University, the best medical institute in an academic environmental famous for its rigorousness, I established a solidfoundation in such diverse fields as biology, chemistry, biochemistry,pharmacology, pathology, physiology, and cell biology. As I approached mystudies primarily from a problem-oriented manner, devoting much more energy tolabwork than to coursework in order to satisfy my curiosity for solvingpractical problems, my overall GPA is somehow affected, slightly lower than whatI would have desired. In my case, GPA, which is purely based on exam scores,does not account much. In retrospect, I have been more concerned with developingmy hands-on abilities and on developing an extensive knowledge rather than onintensive test-oriented knowledge. Nevertheless, compared with other students, Iam sure that I excel them in terms of experimental skills and the ken ofknowledge and, for an undergraduate, a good foundation supported bycomprehensive specialized knowledge and strong hands-on abilities are mostimportant for more intensive studies in the future.
I have every reason to believe that my excellent experimental skills andresearch experience will qualify me to be a helpful research assistant to myfuture supervisor and to make important research achievements. Even when I was afreshman, I started to work as a research assistant in the laboratory. Over thepast four years, I have commanded most of the basic skills necessary forundertaking lab research, such as operations on animals, cell culture,electrophoresis experiments, etc. By far, my most important research experiencecame from undertaking my graduation project, which exemplified an overall testof experimental techniques. I chose to focus on the Effect of Ye3 on the CellApoptosis. The reason for choosing this subject of research is that the study ofcell apoptosis has a crucial importance in the treatment of cancer and inmaintaining the immunity of those suffering from AIDS. On the premise that rareearth ions are considered capable of entering cells, I decided that my projectwould concentrate on rare earth ions and their effects on cell nucleus. Withextensive experiments, I discovered that, under different circumstances, rareearth ions would produce totally different behavior toward cell apoptosis. Whenthe concentration of rare earth ions is below a certain ultimate limit, thefunction of the ions changes from that of facilitating cell apoptosis to that ofsuppressing cell apoptosis. As an initial and tentative study, my research haswon very positive comments from my advisor. In undertaking a large quantity ofexperiments, I not only applied basic operation skills with much dexterity butalso acquired many new techniques such as making post-coloring observation ofthe morphology of cell nucleus through the confocal fluorescence microscope, andperforming qualitative testing of cell apoptosis with the help of flow cytometrymethod (FCM).
Having completed my undergraduate education and acquired necessaryqualifications, I would like to pursue a more advanced degree program at TheDepartment of Pharmacology & Therapeutics, Faculty of Medicine at TheUniversity of _. The department, founded in the 1950’s, has been greatlystrengthened by the joining of dozens of renowned scholars and specialists overeach of the past decade. Its mission, “to educate, create and sustain knowledgeconcerning the actions and mechanisms of drugs in biology and medicine,"reflects the Department’s consistent dedication to academic excellence. YourDepartment fosters research collaborations within the Department as well as withother _ Faculties & Departments, national and international universitiesand related industries, and is committed to the development of new researchareas. I am especially interested in Clinical Pharmacology Research Organization(CPRO) under the leadership of Dr. _.
Your research-oriented program adheres to an “apprenticeship” model ofgraduate training in which in which graduate students work in closecollaboration with a particular Faculty member, their supervisor. Since thematching of research and professional interests between the student and aFaculty member within the Department is paramount, I would like to identify Dr._ and Dr. X_as either instructor or supervisor with whom I would like to workwith. Dr. X_may enlighten me on central nervous system physiology andpharmacology while Dr. X_may instruct me concerning the mechanisms of actionand resistance and intracellular pharmacokinetics of antiviral agents. Myinitial study of their papers and research reveals that their fields of researchperfectly parallel my study and research interests. I expect that my Master’sprogram can ultimately lead to a Ph. D. program.
This Personal Statement is presented by a highly self-motivated Chineseyoung man who cherishes high academic ambitions, possesses outstanding biologyknowledge, and is determined to work harder to make even more proudachievements. For this reason, I hope that my application can be given mostserious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance tosee many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtaindrinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much usefor televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to playwith, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i idemade such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin,surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were...
I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I stillremember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men theywere! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source ofencouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue lighttwinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to chargebravely into the unknown world.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further mystudy in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of AppliedPhysics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get myB.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I choseBoston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array ofdatabases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe myinterests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solidacademic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduatestudy.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the GraduateApplication Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, andother relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of thisletter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節)
合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶裡，藉此打動評審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
1. 參觀和考察學校
預約參觀考察學校(首先進入學校的，先註冊，然後通過郵件在網上預約參觀學校的時間，一般學校都需要你提前預約，也可以自己接打電話預約)。收到回信按預約時間訪問學校，會有招生辦的老師帶領參觀校園然後幫助你瞭解相關學校資訊。
2. 網上提交申請材料
確定學校後就可以在提交申請材料，學校的通常都會有完善的申請流程，按照提示和要求來就好。學校收到遞交材料後如果有不完善的地方仍然會通過郵件形式與家長溝通，所以記得時常看看郵箱以及垃圾郵件箱。
3. 等待面試通知
從申請到收到面試通知這個過程會比較漫長，至少一個月，兩個月也完全有可能。
因為，泰國人辦事速度較慢，申請的學生越來越多，而招生辦通常就是兩三個負責人，她們每天有接待不完的訪問者以及上百封郵件要回復。
所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建議勤發郵件溝通以防被疏漏。準備的這期間可以好好幫助孩子準備面試。低齡兒童面試對英文的要求不高，能簡單的交流。
但是一年級以後的需要有一定的基礎，面試包括聽說讀甚至寫，比想象中要難。所以一定要有英文基礎。(但各個學校都存在不同程度的差異，所以看你選擇的是哪個學校)
4. 面試結果
參加學校面試後，不會立馬有結果，通常等上一個月兩個月都很正常。所以建議你至少提前半年開始辦理申請。泰國開學時間一般都在八月份，一個學年分四個學期，平均兩個月為一學期。
5. 交建校費和學費並保留收費單
如果面試成功學校會學校會通知你按時繳費(建校費和學費，學費可以按一學年交也可以按一學期交)學校收到款項會給你郵寄收費單據和簽證所需的推薦材料(單據和簽證材料都得儲存好，這個後續去大使館辦簽證要用到)。
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