I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
I am a person keen on thinking and experiencing. My lively character andvigorous energy have made me very active in extracurricular events in which Ihave sought an all-round personal development. Sociology Studies will provide mewith the kind of constant real life thinking I have always craved, while helpingme to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also myconcern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue thissubject for my higher education, as I believe Sociology Studies sums up a lot inthe changing nature of society.
My education has schooling my perception of society and people leading meto be acutely aware of social events, inequality, identities, cultures andreligious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from -China. I was practicing in the Chinese Hope Project during summer holidays andvolunteered to investigate the issue of low educational attendance rate forfemale students in rural China with my tutor from my high school and that was avery good experience as it not only made me realise how traditional culturalinfluence could remain unchanged in some of those rural areas in China and alsothe way parents and children interacting. I always have wondered why for manyChinese students just like me, hundreds of them fail to choose what they reallywant to student and do as a career. Chinese parents are definitely havingstrange influences on their kids' decision making in terms of education andcareer or in the worst cases; the parents decided what their kids should dosolely. My mother believes that I should go for Finance studies, while I clearlyknow that my interest has never been in the Mathematical formulas and numbers, Ialways find the diversities of societies, people, beliefs, cultures and the waypeople interacting together very fascinating. So, during this summer, mythoughts kept returning on why I worked so unsuccessfully towards studyingfinance and economics as my mother expected? And how can I truly become my ownmaster by progressing a BA that I really like to engage more research and enrichmyself with? How did all the cultural and beliefs affecting the way we actingthe roles in the community? In which way an individual could actually build upand refine his/her identities?
In pursuing a Sociology degree, I seek answers to these questions. Athorough examination of the Sociology behind human behaves could reveal thebeliefs,values and identities; it enables us to exam and understand ourselvesbetter. While knowledge of Sociology will certainly benefit the social servicesproviding, I also maintain a passion for Culture Studies for that same ural behaviour study appeals to me because it tells us why we act in acertain way - under a cultural atmosphere. Also for being in the UK for 3 years,the knowledge about the outside world has given me a unique and balancedperspective to examine the reality of Chinese society too. In this historicalepoch in which China is becoming closely integrated into the internationalcommunity and playing an influence role in the world arena, I wish to gaininsights into our society in its socio-culture aspects and to study how Chineseculture can respond to the globalization process.
By combining these thoughts into a good BA in Sociology degree programme, Ican pursue my professional goal of doing education and community service workfor the government and perhaps focusing in promote public welfare. My experiencein the past in social practices has not only equipped me with an intellectualfoundation for my future studies but has also supplied me with my career my eyes, China's several thousand years of history has given rise to thedeep-entrenched rule by man instead of rule by law and nature. In dealing withsuch issues like economic development, poverty elimination and the promotion oflaw, the framing and application of government policies seem to play a greaterrole. Therefore, it is obvious that to contribute to public welfare and tonational development, it is more realistic and useful to become a well-trainedand well-qualified public administrator. In this lies the motivation of myapplication for an undergraduate programme in sociology at your esteemeddepartment.
WanSheng High School where I was studying is a key provincial high schoolthat attracts best students from every part of the province. In fierce academiccompetitions, I have managed to remain top-ten in my high school academicperformance and was recommended by the school to Highbury College,Portsmouth tostudy my foundation course. I passed the foundation course successfully in 20__and was an outstanding student of my class. I believe that my previous socialpractices activities and academic preparations have built a solid background forme to further my intensive and fruitful research in your BA in Sociologystudies. After gaining knowledge of both Sociology and different cultures at thehighly regarded University of Leicester, I plan to work for social services touse my knowledge of social human behaviour to aid members of the public.
Application Letter for studying abroad
Xiao Ming
Student
Shandong University
27 Shanda Nan Lu
Jinan , Shandong , China
250100
Dr. Melba Ripley
The School of Architecture
University of Louisiana
100 Webber Hall
Baton Rouge, LA 70814
Dear Dr. Melba Ripley:
My name is Bu Xuliang , a student studying Microbiology technology in
Shandong University School. I intend to spend my doctor years in aUSAuniversity by the end of September 20__ for my higher education at the sametime to develop my scientific skill since I love to have a career in the fieldof Microbiology.
During the past three years, I had been an excellent student .I was
extremelyinterested in knowing how a microorganism change food to theenergy for their Biochemical processes, and used to find out the answer bymyself. I have
published a paper in past three years. I am quite confident that I canarrange both my study and my daily life well in new environment. I also tookpart in a great deal of social activities and some of them were reallyimpressive. I would truly like to have theopportunity to do research work inyouruniversityso as to learn more new technology in Microbiology technology.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information aboutthe application at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Xiao Ming
Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economichub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I havedeveloped a meaningful outlook on lie. I identify myself with such values thatone gives meaning to life when one lives to give. Success stories of my parents, relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief inbeing independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.
As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to myworking parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools inBeijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciateindependence. As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset Igained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those6 years. After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school bybike. Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consentto the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first placegiven the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parentsand grandparents. Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain orsunshine,tempered my strong character. I have been holding myself to higheststandards, academically and physically from primary school days through tocollege life. I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have beenexposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside ofclassroom. I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstratedcommitment to teamwork. I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when Iwas in primary school. Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills inthe field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader. And I didjustice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete inShanghai and Hong Kong several times. And the strong track record of outoutstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitementtoday. During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposedto the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center ofAsia. That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth andfinance. And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped myambition to be a financer.
Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life anddeath for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference wasFinance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity. The result cameas a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead. But Istuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance. I have since workedhard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance. As a result , I amdnow well on my way to graduation with double degrees in both computer scienceand finance in 20__.
During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as Idabbled into the real business world. We settled for newspaper as our maidenattempt.. As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating,from cost control to market survey. My strong leadership and sunergy of theentire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy. Yetinexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in theend. But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture. I now know more aboutwhere I need to work on. When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how tomanage money in the safest way. They helped me put my pocket money in the bankand get interest as a return. Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize thatsystematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much moreabout what finance is all about. Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimmingincreases, the desire to swim in the sea grows. Yet, with more academicexposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge neededto stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance. That self-conscious humblenessversus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to optfor further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges offinance.
After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for ClarkUniversity,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US. I trustthat demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind offinance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update myvision as financier of the future. To me,Clark is the best and right place thatcan surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike. I am morethan anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble partto its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas. I am therefore very muchlooking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus. May that offercome just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in oneof the greatest colleges in the US.
pplied Program：Organizational Behavior
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
Dear_,
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built， management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China， so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl， it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures， and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant， helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I， also， would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up， I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China， I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE)， even so， books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June， 20__， Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms， I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment， I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact， I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American， and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting： Why somecompanies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more thanothers? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the samedifficulties?
With the questions in my mind， I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack： Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch， in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior， I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this， my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed， definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December， 20__， I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge， I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately， as a senior， I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months， I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system， which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation， I continued my work inthis company. In May， 20__， the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes， they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training， I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster， with its excellencein management， represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment， I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind， I hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
As a 28-year-old female, there has been nothing sensational about my pasteducation and career experience. I do not feel any regret because I have alwaysbeen making worthy efforts to achieve personal development and to enrich my lifein my own way. Helen Keller serves as a paragon that I will emulate in my entirelifetime. The beautiful things that she brought to the world with her lovingheart and her strength convince me that the power of the spiritual motivation isinfinite. An individual lives a meaningful live only to the extent of benefitingthe welfare of others. Both my education and my five-year work experience haveunmistakably made me believe that economics is a science whose ultimate functionis the improvement of human welfare. The motivation behind my currentapplication for a Master’s program in economics is to pursue a more fruitfulcareer development in the future so that the process of my self-actualizationwill also be a process of making contributions to others.
My education background makes me an appropriate candidate for your education consists of two stages. From 1993 to 1995 I received a juniorcollege education from the Business School of _ University, majoring inmarketing. Then I proceeded onto an undergraduate program in the Department ofBusiness Administration of _ University, waived of entrance examination becauseof my distinguished academic performance at the junior college (ranking topsecond among 31 students in the class). During my undergraduate program, Icontinue to maintain a satisfactory academic performance, ranking top ten amonga total of 51 students. Completing my undergraduate program in 1998, I obtaineda Bachelor’s degree in economics.
Through my undergraduate program, I gained an increasingly deepunderstanding of the importance of economics. As far as I am concerned,economics is by no means an abstract discipline. It is closely connected withreality and is designed to explore and explain diverse economic phenomena andeconomic laws. For the foreseeable future, the conflict between the scarcity ofnatural resources and the infinitude of human demand will continue to persist,posing a long-lasting threat to the social development of all nations. Thenecessity to seek a solution to this conflict gave birth to Economics, whichpromises to maximize material wealth through an optimum allocation of use of my diligent efforts at coursework and my strong interest ineconomics, I managed to achieve a top-10 ranking in my class，winning the honorof Outstanding Student and a second-class scholarship. I familiarized myselfwith most classic works on economics and management, including Principles ofManagement by Harold Koontz, Economics by Samuelson, Competition Strategy byPorter and Wealth of Nations by Adam Smiths, etc. From the very beginning of myeconomics study, I have tried to expose myself to western perspectives.
Starting from the premise that economics will be lifeless unless it isapplied to the problems in the real world, I paid special attention in myundergraduate program to the combination of theory and practice as a way oflearning and applying my knowledge of economics. I once spent a whole summervacation on conducting a survey of the fast food business in _ City. I sampled15 fast food restaurants, carried out interviews with restaurant owners and thecustomers. I applied quantitative analysis to my statistics and proposedconcrete measures for developing the city’s fast food industry through improvingmanagement, business environment, food variety and service quality.
My research ability was improved through writing my thesis –The Protectionand the Development of China’s National Industry in the Age of Reform andOpening Up. The thesis focuses on China’s joining of WTO and its possiblenegative impact on the growth of national industry. My conclusion is that acareful balance must be struck between the protection of national industry andthe introduction of foreign capital. The thesis was rated “Excellent” for itscomprehensive theoretical formulation, detailed statistics and creativeperspectives.
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
My name is Lin Hao, from Northeast China---Heilongjiang Province. Thelong-term and cold climate has allowed me to develop a tough and tenaciouscharacter in the course of my life. In 20 years, I was admitted to China withexcellent results. Jilin University, a prestigious university, is currentlystudying for a bachelor's degree in economics majoring in internationaleconomics and trade, and a second degree in futures investment and managementmajor in the same period. My university is a comprehensive university with avery complete range of disciplines. My university life has not only enabled meto develop a comprehensive and three-dimensional development in learning methodsand professional knowledge, but more importantly, it has improved my ability tointegrate knowledge of various disciplines. At the same time, it greatlyincreased my desire for knowledge. Therefore, I decided to study in the UK aftergraduation. Through understanding, I currently hope to apply for a__University__ major.
Family is very important to everyone, because it is the first classroom forus to receive education. My grandfather was a banker, my father was abusinessman, and my mother was a statistician. Their words and deeds to meplayed an extremely important role in the establishment and development of myoutlook on life and values, and also helped me. Established an honest,hardworking, and never-say-fail character. So influenced by them, I am veryinterested in finance disciplines. My family is the most important asset in mylife. It gives me the interest in learning this subject and the character ofgoing forward courageously.
Through the learning of professional knowledge, I have developed a stronginterest in economics and finance. I read "Life Economics" by Dr. DavidFriedman. In the book, he used easy-to-understand cases. Combining the mistyprinciples of economics with people’s ordinary life has enabled me to master theeconomic principles that most people find boring, and the learning methods inreal life. At the same time, I have a good understanding of Fried Dr. Mandeveloped a feeling of worship. In the same year, I read his masterpiece "PriceTheory" again. Through the study of this book, I became obsessed with knowledgeof currency and finance. Due to the strong desire for knowledge, I started tominor in the second degree "Futures Investment and Management". During thisperiod, I met a mentor, Professor Lu, a very famous scholar in China's futuresindustry. Professor Lu combines the theory and practice of the futures market,and combines the true meaning of life with the operation of the futures market,which is regarded as a "casino" by outsiders, and teaches us the knowledge ofthe futures market and economic investment. This teaching method is in line withmy learning habits, so I quickly entered the state. We often discuss thedevelopment of China’s futures industry and the price fluctuations of the worldfutures market together. In the autumn of 20__, I was invited to assist him incompleting the "China Financial Futures" Research work on the "Enlightenment ofthe Japanese Yen Development Route to the Development of China's Renminbi" inthe "Market Establishment" project. Because of his outstanding performance, hewon the appreciation of Professor Lu.
In addition to studying professional knowledge, in my spare time, I alsoestablished the first leukemia volunteer organization in Jilin Province andserved as the chairman. Helped 10 children with leukemia from poor families inthe form of voluntary activities. Every year, they held lectures on leukemiaknowledge at Jilin University, as well as volunteer registration activities forthe Chinese bone marrow bank (Chinese hematopoietic stem cell bank), and bloodsample extraction activities. In the past three years, the association has beenUnder my leadership, we have made considerable progress and achieved outstandingresults. Many media have reported on our activities. On the website of _社 onOctober 25, 20_, we also reported on our activities. In addition, my deeds werealso reported to the famous Chinese student magazine "East, West, South, Northand University Students" Issue 03 of the year 20_. These honors fully prove theaffirmation of my work by the society and the school. Now, one of every 150volunteers in the Chinese bone marrow bank is developed by my association. Theassociation has also been awarded the title of Jilin University BoutiqueAssociation for three consecutive years. I was also named the first "Moving JiUniversity" of Jilin University. The title of top ten college students, and atthe same time, through the establishment of a volunteer association, not onlyenabled me to realize the value of life, but also exercised my organizationalskills, which greatly improved my personal quality. In addition, I also likesports very much. I am good at sprinting, football, etc. Young, I should be fullof vitality.
In the summer of 20_, as a student representative of Jilin University, Ivisited a famous university. As a Chinese representative, I participated in morethan ten student exchange activities, and as a cultural messenger, I spreadChinese traditions and modern culture to the students, and through the visit, Ilearned some culture and visited their education system. In the process, I wasdeeply moved by the university's advanced teaching mode and strong scientificresearch capabilities. Compared with my own school, although we have developedrapidly, there is still a gap between the world's top education. This feelinginspired my enthusiasm for learning. After returning to my country, I decided touse my own strength to make my own contribution to the development of mymotherland. This is also an important reason why I applied to your school,because as a The responsibility of the Chinese is to use the advanced knowledgeI learned overseas to build my motherland.
"Practice, firm, and hardworking" is the fine tradition I inherited, and itis also my life creed. Facing the imminent graduation from university, a strongthirst for knowledge and a passion for professional knowledge, I decided tocontinue my professional study and accept the rigorous teaching, cutting-edgeresearch and new ways of thinking in the university, so as to enrich myself andrealize myself I also hope that I can become the messenger of the culture of thetwo countries. Thank you for your attention and look forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的老師：
你好!我叫，是本校系*班學生。
因最近情緒煩躁，頹廢，不能靜下心在校繼續學習。在自己的學習中，感覺到前所未有的迷茫，想到外面體驗一下生活。故向學校申請休學一段時間，希望能獲你的批准。
以前，從知道考慮自己前途的時候，我選擇了上學.然而在日新月異的變革中，在校畢業後的就業問題是每個在校學子的一塊心病。我想的很多、很久，感覺自己的命運由自己把握，真想出學校大門改變自己一下，即使改變後仍沒結果，我則問心無愧!
謝謝學校這一年的培養!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
尊敬的X大學老師：
您好!我是X，現就讀於X。感謝您在百忙之中審閱我的留學申請書。
X大學，以怒蹄奔騰的駿馬為標誌物，希望學子們能“騰天潛淵，吐納川海;遼闊原野，一任賓士”，博大高遠的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成為X大學的一名學生。
由於在數學上表現出了優秀的能力，我5歲時上了國小。20X年時，我們全家來到北京，並開始了我在X學校長達8年的學習。這8年來，X見證著我點點滴滴的進步。來到北京前我對英語一無所知，可我的母校是一個國際化的學校，於是我的英語讓老師和父母十分著急。後來在父母老師的幫助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英語水平，現在英語已經成為我的優勢之一。小升中的時候，我的成績還不是很好，在我國中三年的不懈努力之下，最終以會考523分(當時的市重點線)的成績進入了我校高中部實驗班。在高一時我的成績在班裡、年級的前列，參加了海淀區數學、物理、化學競賽，並在第X屆全國數學“希望杯”比賽中獲得全國三等獎。進入高二之後，我在所有考試(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的週考、區統考)中都保持著班級第一、年級第一的成績，而且整個高中年級的各科會考成績都是A。我認為只要對學習有著嚴肅認真的態度，始終都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性對待考試、不斷提高自己的學習能力，從而保持了一個穩定的、向上的狀態，我會將這種狀態在我以後的學習、生活中繼續保持下去。
我出生在一個民主開放的家庭。父母都是老師，給我一定的自由發展空間，並著重培養我的領悟能力、學習能力和動手能力，讓我學會自立。於是我在遇到生活、學習、與人溝通相處等方面的困難時，都自己想辦法獨立解決，從而在各方面成為班級、年級的佼佼者。由於父母對我潛移默化的影響，我做事十分認真，習慣追求完美，雖然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的態度和意志讓我在學習、工作中有著出色的表現。
正如校訓“X”所展示的，我的母校X學校，既秉承了傳統教育的嚴謹、求實，也發揚了寄宿學校的軍事化管理，更融入了外國教育的開放和高效。正是在這樣的環境中，我擁有了豐富的知識、多樣的能力、堅強的毅力和開朗的性格。在X年的學習生涯中，我更加成熟穩重，做事心思縝密、謀劃周到，成為一個學習優秀、善於處理各方面事務、全面發展的人。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的_的老師：
您好!
我是來自河南省__中學的__，很高興能向您呈上我的留學申請書，也希望藉此機會我可以脫穎而出，為順利進入_大學奠定堅實的基礎。
在首都這座夢想之城，可謂高校林立，但是隻有貴校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我們高中都會有人考入貴校，他們被譽為“天子驕子”。當錄取金榜貼到校園裡，看著他們臉上洋溢的笑容，我的心裡也如波濤洶湧，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定決心，有朝一日我也要以自己的實力築夢於人大校園，成為她的一分子。
可說歸說，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奮學習。
在學習上，我對自己要求十分嚴格，充分發揚不怕吃苦的精神去面對學習中的一切困難和挫折。我知道學習就是一個苦難的過程，唯有堅持不懈，才能實現鳳凰涅盤的重生，才能抵達成功的彼岸。因此，在課堂上，我緊緊跟隨老師的思路，認真聽講，細心做好筆記，每一個知識點都不會錯過。課下，我珍惜時間，努力複習，積極預習，有的放矢地掌控好自己的學習節奏。我喜歡思考問題，喜歡探究問題的本源，然後舉一反三，化整為零。由於我的勤奮、刻苦，我獲得了優異的成績，每次考試都在全校前列，受到了老師和同學們的肯定，多次被評為優秀班幹部、優秀學生、學習標兵等。
在獲得優異成績的同時，我還抽時間，擠時間發展自己多方面的興趣。我喜歡打乒乓球、羽毛球、籃球，沉浸於體育鍛煉的激情與豪邁中，在緊張與刺激間收穫了強健的體魄。但比起體育鍛煉，我更鐘情於國學文化。
我喜歡國學的博大精深，喜歡國學的厚重神奇。課餘，我已經閱讀了多部國學經典，比如《孟子》《論語》《史記》《資治通鑑》《漢書》等，在文字與故事裡感受到了國學的無限魅力。在我看來，國學不僅僅是傳統文化，更是中華民族核心的價值理念和追求，是數千年來中國人思維方式行為方式生活方式生產方式的高度總結，是中華母親的乳汁，是中華兒女的血脈、精神和靈魂，是中國人信仰的天空和大地。
出於對國學的熱愛，我從小就立志要投身於祖國寶貴文化的學習、挖掘、弘揚中，用自己的所學，為國家的文化發展和民族的文化復興，貢獻自己的微薄之力。
而我之所以在眾多的_高校中鍾情於貴校，就是因為貴校深厚的文化底蘊吸引了我。貴校是一所以人文社會科學為主的綜合性研究型高校。自建校以來，貴校始終不忘“立學為民、治學報國”的辦學宗旨，以“實事求是”為校訓，逐漸形成了完備的教育體系，尤其注重發揮人文社會科學認識世界、傳承文明、創新理論、諮政育人、服務社會的作用，半個多世紀以來，已為國家輸送了一大批高素質的人才，其中范文瀾、馮其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可謂赫赫有名，為國家的文化建設做出了巨大的貢獻。
我敬仰貴校國學院，它是新中國第一家以國學為教育研究目的且本碩連讀的教育科研機構。學院學術力量雄厚，已經制定了完整系統的國學教學方案，建立了以經典研讀為中心的課程體系，並充分兼顧傳統與現代的有機融合，在教學與研究中，既有繼承傳統的治學特點，又有鮮明的時代性和寬廣的國際視野。這些，都令我向往。所以，我認為貴校國學院是我的夢想之地，會改變我的人生軌跡。
尊敬的老師，請您考慮並接受我的申請，給我一片天空，讓我自由飛翔，給我一片海洋，讓我盡情暢遊，我相信，進入人大是我最明智的選擇。如果順利被錄取，我一定會珍惜時間，勤奮努力，孜孜以求，投身於學術研究，跟隨大師足跡，在國學的傳承裡留下自己的名字，成為國家的棟樑，成為人大的驕傲。
我相信，我可以。
此致
敬禮
1. 參觀和考察學校
預約參觀考察學校(首先進入學校的，先註冊，然後通過郵件在網上預約參觀學校的時間，一般學校都需要你提前預約，也可以自己接打電話預約)。收到回信按預約時間訪問學校，會有招生辦的老師帶領參觀校園然後幫助你瞭解相關學校資訊。
2. 網上提交申請材料
確定學校後就可以在提交申請材料，學校的通常都會有完善的申請流程，按照提示和要求來就好。學校收到遞交材料後如果有不完善的地方仍然會通過郵件形式與家長溝通，所以記得時常看看郵箱以及垃圾郵件箱。
3. 等待面試通知
從申請到收到面試通知這個過程會比較漫長，至少一個月，兩個月也完全有可能。
因為，泰國人辦事速度較慢，申請的學生越來越多，而招生辦通常就是兩三個負責人，她們每天有接待不完的訪問者以及上百封郵件要回復。
所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建議勤發郵件溝通以防被疏漏。準備的這期間可以好好幫助孩子準備面試。低齡兒童面試對英文的要求不高，能簡單的交流。
但是一年級以後的需要有一定的基礎，面試包括聽說讀甚至寫，比想象中要難。所以一定要有英文基礎。(但各個學校都存在不同程度的差異，所以看你選擇的是哪個學校)
4. 面試結果
參加學校面試後，不會立馬有結果，通常等上一個月兩個月都很正常。所以建議你至少提前半年開始辦理申請。泰國開學時間一般都在八月份，一個學年分四個學期，平均兩個月為一學期。
5. 交建校費和學費並保留收費單
如果面試成功學校會學校會通知你按時繳費(建校費和學費，學費可以按一學年交也可以按一學期交)學校收到款項會給你郵寄收費單據和簽證所需的推薦材料(單據和簽證材料都得儲存好，這個後續去大使館辦簽證要用到)。
尊敬的X大學老師領導：
您好!首先感謝您能在百忙之中抽出時間審視我的申請材料!
我是X市高階中學理科實驗班的X，和其他的同胞或者說是競爭者們一樣，我也但願通過貴校的自主招生來實現我一直以來的夢想考入X大學。
在眾多高校中，唯有X大學深深吸引了我，而且我也聽到X的學長說，X非常適合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都會盡全力幫你實現，我覺得我就是那種有想法主意、有立異意識的人，這也使我更加堅定了“將來一定要到X讀書”的決心。憑藉著十幾年如一日的努力，我的成績一直名列前茅，會考更是以全市第二十八的成績考入鐵嶺市重點高中理科實驗班。到了高中，我並沒有驕傲，而是更加努力的學習，成績也有了進一步的奔騰，每次考試成績均不亂在年級前十名，施展好時還會進入前五名，我堅信自己是有資格進入X大學的。
相信在此之前，您已經閱讀過了無數的自薦信，對省、市三好學生，校學生會主席，團支部書記等也已經見怪不怪了。很可惜，這些刺眼的榮譽和職位我都沒有，我有的是對X全面的瞭解，有的是對X始終如一的熱愛與嚮往，有的是“非X不去”的勇氣與決心。更重要的是，我有著老實、量力而行的品質，我不會為了得到您的青睞而強調事實，虛張聲勢，而且我覺得一個人的領導能力、組織能力、交際能力和協調能力並不是只有靠這些職位才能體現出來的，究竟校學生會主席只有一個，但具有多地方能力的高中生遠不止這些。
做事堅決，善於籌劃是我的另一長處。說到籌劃，我對自己的未來也已經做好了初步的打算：近年來，跟著中國經濟的起飛，汽車已經走入了平常庶民家。因為汽車產業的提高，這地方精英的需求量也在隨之增長。這對從小酷愛汽車，7歲就能識別數十種車標的我，無疑是一種巨大的激勵，我也勵志將來要進入一家汽車企業，介入設計製造一部機能優異，而且安全節能的汽車。據我所知，現今中國汽車在發念頭的節油耐用，不亂機能上仍有一定的進步空間，而伴跟著油價的提高，增壓直噴等技術也已走下神壇，進入乘用領域。在車身結構地方，人們對於安全恬靜的追求是無止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能設計，有了更優秀的懸架，有了鋁材，甚至碳纖維的應用。我願把我全部的精力都投入到這些領域中，讓中國的汽車有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞臺上。這一切看似虛幻的夢想，一旦進入X，就都很有可能變為現實。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture ‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
Since I was young I have always had a keen interest in the way that thethings around me work. From marvelling at the telephone to how planes can fly,engineering advances have never failed to captivate me. For this reason, I havealways tried to find out how such things function, and about how they have hadan impact on the society we live in today. Coupled with the fact that I havealways enjoyed the logical and problem-solving processes involved in maths andphysics, I decided several years ago to embark on a career in engineering.
Since then, I have endeavoured to find out as much about engineering aspossible. I researched the great engineers such as Brunel, and discovered thegreat works they had completed. I have attended several engineering conferences,the most recent of which I was selected to speak live on radio about myexperiences. And once I had completed several weeks' worth of work experience, Iwas assured that it was the career that I wanted to pursue.
This summer, I took part in the Nuffield Bursary scheme for a month,working in a team, at Aerogistics Ltd. Our project was to analyse and implementa new system for the distribution of consumable materials to the individualdepartments within the company. We found the current system to be highlyinefficient and after much data gathering and thought, presented our findings tothe senior managers of the company who agreed with our ideas. The last week wasspent starting the implementation of these ideas. I found the experience to behighly challenging, yet rewarding especially as it led to me gaining a GoldCrest Award. I also found it useful as I got to see engineers at work and thedaily problems that they face. I learnt that there is a lot more to being a goodengineer than possessing technical competence, although this is undoubtedlyimportant; team work, communication and leadership skills are vital as well.
I have also recently been selected to complete two placements with armyengineers. One of these placements will focus on the more practical side ofengineering while the other will focus on the skills needed by a professionalengineer focussing on project planning and leadership. I hope to find theexperience useful.
In my spare time I like to play sport and music. In secondary school I wascaptain for the Netball and Football teams, as well as taking part in variousother sports. The experience of this greatly improved my team working abilitiesas well as my fitness. As a keen musician I am working towards my grade 5 theoryand grade 7 practical on cello. I am a member of a Youth Orchestra, and havejust recently completed a tour of Italy. I am also in the school orchestra andhave led several orchestras in the past, before progressing to the LYO.
In school, I am Deputy Head Girl, helping to lead a team of over 40prefects. I find this to be a challenging and stimulating role and believe ithas developed my confidence immensely. As well as carrying out the normal dutiesof a prefect, such as supervising younger students, I must lead and manage theother prefects. My role involves arranging rotas, organising after school eventssuch as the Year 7 social and parent's evenings and public speaking as well asother responsibilities, which have developed my communication, organisation andleadership skills immensely. The role requires a lot of commitment, but it hashelped to improve my time management, as I try to strike a balance between itand school work, which is my main priority. I have also been selected to competein the Physics Olympiad and have been entered for the Biology AdvancedExtension.
During my time at university I hope to gain a good degree, which will standme in good stead for when I enter the world of work. I would like to continue myeducation in a place where I can thrive both academically and socially, andwhere I can put my determination and motivation into good use. Thank you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further mystudy in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of AppliedPhysics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get myB.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I choseBoston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array ofdatabases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe myinterests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solidacademic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduatestudy.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the GraduateApplication Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, andother relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of thisletter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear_,
I'm Yang, a master candidate from Harbin Institute of Technology, Harbin,P. R. China, supervised by Prof. Tang. And I ever contacted you for the passwordof your papers in the last time. I'm supported by a Chinese National Fund, whichwill support those PhD candidates in China to go abroad to some world classUniversities of their fields. This programme will cover all living cost I needin USA. After I read a lot of papers of my research area, I understand that youare working on MAX phases and have published quite a lot of high levelscientific papers. As such, you are the leading researcher in _ in the world. Ifind your area fits me well, so I write to you to see if you can give me achance to study in your school. My CV and published papers have beenattached.
My research area is mainly about MAX phases. I have published 5 papers inthe journals including J. Mater. Res. and Solid State Commun. In addition,papers were submitted. And now I'm doing _. I am not applying a full time PhDprogramme, and this programme is a short time (12-24 months) co-educationexperiences more like a visit scholar programme. This programme is a new type ofco-educate PhD programme supported by China Scholarship Council. The studyperiod abroad varies from 12 months at least to 24 months at most. I have toaccomplish my doctor degree back to my school (Harbin Institute of Technology),so I'm not supposed to acquire my doctor degree at Drexel University.
And this programme runs like this, students meet the applicationrequirements can apply this programme, and my University and research area isamong the main supporting Universities and areas. Students must acquire anofficial invitation letter from the prospective tutor/University. Therefore, allI need is an official invitation letter from you (or your University). The dateof enrollment I'm considering is September/October 20__. In order to make sure Ican catch up with the next year's programme, I have to prepare all theapplication stuff (including your official invitation letter) before January,20__. And because it will cost about 1 month to mail your invitation letter fromUSA to China, so I really hope you can respond me as soon as possible to makesure I can receive your letter before the winter vacation this year. And if youcan't make this decision or you have a better recommendation whose researchareas fit me well, please inform me. Really hope to hear from you as soon aspossible!
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
I am a student of _ school _ (female, born on August 20th, _), and I amabout to become a middle school student. My biggest wish is to be able to studyin _, because destiny made me know _middle school. In the summer of 20_ I wasfortunate to become a member of the school club, and represented _ middle schoolto participate _ in _ the middle school student sports meeting (table tenniscompetition) that year, and achieved good results. In just a few days of thecompetition, through the introduction of the leading teachers and teammates, Ihave a full understanding of _middle school. After that, I pay more attention tolearning and love sports. In my heart, learning and exercise have constitutedthe driving force for mutual promotion. At present, my table tennis skills havebeen further improved. In the 20_20_years, I have won the second place in thewomen's group A of the table tennis competition for two consecutive years.
Ping-pong is my hobby, and it is my goal of continuous efforts to improveacademic performance. A good learning environment can create outstandinglearning talents. The suburban high school is my dream choice. The school hasthe traditional virtues of solidarity and mutual assistance, and has a learningatmosphere of "comparison, learning, catching up, and surpassing", and it ismore problem-solving. Good teachers and leaders who are difficult and willing toteach. Opportunities are met but not sought. If the school leaders give me thisopportunity, I will continue to sum up my experience and lessons, be mentallyprepared to dare to endure all hardships, establish the confidence to overcomeall difficulties, and strive to be excellent Achievement completed three yearsof junior high school life. Never let the school leaders down. I don'tunderstand whether this formulation is appropriate, but I implore the leaders tostudy my application.
Yours sincerely,
___,___
尊敬的：
我是，現就讀於X級X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(填上你要休學的時間)。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
X級X班
年 月 日
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is _ _, _ _ _ University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students _ _ _, and believe that it can be a good completionof your master's courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, _ _ _ _ adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, _ _ students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that he'll be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and _ _ _ by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school _ _ football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. _ _ said the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節)
合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶裡，藉此打動評審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
Monsieur le Président,
Dans le souhait d'une inscription auprès de votre université, j'ai l'honneur de vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.
J'étudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans, et j'obtiendrai ma licence(bac+4) en juillet 20__ .(1)
Outre la langue fran?aise, j'ai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle je m'intéresse particulièrement.(2)
Après l'obtention de mon dipl?me, j'aimerais poursuivre mes études de littérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement de littérature.(3)
Or, pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires, j'ai besoin d’un certificat de pré-inscription délivré par votre université. C'est pourquoi je vous demande quelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sont les attesations que je devrais fournir.
Si c'est possible, pourriez-vous me faire parvenir, à l'adresse ci-dessus, un dossier d'inscription ?(4)
Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance, je vous prie d'agréer, Monsieur le Président, l'expression de mon profond respect.
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