Dear _,
On November 9, 20__, I took my GRE Subject (BIOLOGY) test. Although I it isbeyond me to report the exact number of the participants in this specific testthe world over, the score I achieved indicated to me that I was above 98%, andaccording to the analysis by my classmates, this might be the highest score thatChinese students have ever achieved. While I was aware that the importance ofany test score as an indicator of one’s scholastic aptitudes should never beover-exaggerated, the result still gave me a tremendous sense of self-pride andself-achievement. I believe that I achieved such a high score not through merecoincidence. Instead, it is the result of my long-time love for and dedicatedefforts at biology. With an implicit faith in my knowledge of biology and in mypotential to continue to excel others, I here solemnly file this document in anattempt to apply for admission into your esteemed university for a Master’sprogram in pharmacology.
I am confident in my qualifications as a competitive applicant for yourhighly respected program, partially because of my unusual interest inpharmacology. As a bridge across medical science and pharmacy, pharmacologyplays a vital role in the research on the ways to resist diseases. Theexploration and the subsequent elaboration on the mechanism of therapeuticfunctioning of drugs is a necessary step in the development and application ofdrugs to overcome diseases. Faced with this academic discipline that isinextricably connected with human life and human welfare, I have always beenfascinated by this subject, bent on making my own contributions to theimprovement of the quality of human life. Every time I learn about new theories,approaches and developments in biology and pharmacology, I cannot help feelingexcited. Each setback I encounter or each success I achieve in my experimentswould motivate me to persist and continue. It is this fascination with biologyand pharmacology that stands behind my dedicated studies and research in thosesubjects.
The 4-year comprehensive and systematic study and training in the specialtyof pharmacy guaranteed my successful completion of my undergraduate program atthe College of Medicine of _ University, the best medical institute in an academic environmental famous for its rigorousness, I established a solidfoundation in such diverse fields as biology, chemistry, biochemistry,pharmacology, pathology, physiology, and cell biology. As I approached mystudies primarily from a problem-oriented manner, devoting much more energy tolabwork than to coursework in order to satisfy my curiosity for solvingpractical problems, my overall GPA is somehow affected, slightly lower than whatI would have desired. In my case, GPA, which is purely based on exam scores,does not account much. In retrospect, I have been more concerned with developingmy hands-on abilities and on developing an extensive knowledge rather than onintensive test-oriented knowledge. Nevertheless, compared with other students, Iam sure that I excel them in terms of experimental skills and the ken ofknowledge and, for an undergraduate, a good foundation supported bycomprehensive specialized knowledge and strong hands-on abilities are mostimportant for more intensive studies in the future.
I have every reason to believe that my excellent experimental skills andresearch experience will qualify me to be a helpful research assistant to myfuture supervisor and to make important research achievements. Even when I was afreshman, I started to work as a research assistant in the laboratory. Over thepast four years, I have commanded most of the basic skills necessary forundertaking lab research, such as operations on animals, cell culture,electrophoresis experiments, etc. By far, my most important research experiencecame from undertaking my graduation project, which exemplified an overall testof experimental techniques. I chose to focus on the Effect of Ye3 on the CellApoptosis. The reason for choosing this subject of research is that the study ofcell apoptosis has a crucial importance in the treatment of cancer and inmaintaining the immunity of those suffering from AIDS. On the premise that rareearth ions are considered capable of entering cells, I decided that my projectwould concentrate on rare earth ions and their effects on cell nucleus. Withextensive experiments, I discovered that, under different circumstances, rareearth ions would produce totally different behavior toward cell apoptosis. Whenthe concentration of rare earth ions is below a certain ultimate limit, thefunction of the ions changes from that of facilitating cell apoptosis to that ofsuppressing cell apoptosis. As an initial and tentative study, my research haswon very positive comments from my advisor. In undertaking a large quantity ofexperiments, I not only applied basic operation skills with much dexterity butalso acquired many new techniques such as making post-coloring observation ofthe morphology of cell nucleus through the confocal fluorescence microscope, andperforming qualitative testing of cell apoptosis with the help of flow cytometrymethod (FCM).
Having completed my undergraduate education and acquired necessaryqualifications, I would like to pursue a more advanced degree program at TheDepartment of Pharmacology & Therapeutics, Faculty of Medicine at TheUniversity of _. The department, founded in the 1950’s, has been greatlystrengthened by the joining of dozens of renowned scholars and specialists overeach of the past decade. Its mission, “to educate, create and sustain knowledgeconcerning the actions and mechanisms of drugs in biology and medicine,"reflects the Department’s consistent dedication to academic excellence. YourDepartment fosters research collaborations within the Department as well as withother _ Faculties & Departments, national and international universitiesand related industries, and is committed to the development of new researchareas. I am especially interested in Clinical Pharmacology Research Organization(CPRO) under the leadership of Dr. _.
Your research-oriented program adheres to an “apprenticeship” model ofgraduate training in which in which graduate students work in closecollaboration with a particular Faculty member, their supervisor. Since thematching of research and professional interests between the student and aFaculty member within the Department is paramount, I would like to identify Dr._ and Dr. X_as either instructor or supervisor with whom I would like to workwith. Dr. X_may enlighten me on central nervous system physiology andpharmacology while Dr. X_may instruct me concerning the mechanisms of actionand resistance and intracellular pharmacokinetics of antiviral agents. Myinitial study of their papers and research reveals that their fields of researchperfectly parallel my study and research interests. I expect that my Master’sprogram can ultimately lead to a Ph. D. program.
This Personal Statement is presented by a highly self-motivated Chineseyoung man who cherishes high academic ambitions, possesses outstanding biologyknowledge, and is determined to work harder to make even more proudachievements. For this reason, I hope that my application can be given mostserious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Dear _,
As a 28-year-old female, there has been nothing sensational about my pasteducation and career experience. I do not feel any regret because I have alwaysbeen making worthy efforts to achieve personal development and to enrich my lifein my own way. Helen Keller serves as a paragon that I will emulate in my entirelifetime. The beautiful things that she brought to the world with her lovingheart and her strength convince me that the power of the spiritual motivation isinfinite. An individual lives a meaningful live only to the extent of benefitingthe welfare of others. Both my education and my five-year work experience haveunmistakably made me believe that economics is a science whose ultimate functionis the improvement of human welfare. The motivation behind my currentapplication for a Master’s program in economics is to pursue a more fruitfulcareer development in the future so that the process of my self-actualizationwill also be a process of making contributions to others.
My education background makes me an appropriate candidate for your education consists of two stages. From 1993 to 1995 I received a juniorcollege education from the Business School of _ University, majoring inmarketing. Then I proceeded onto an undergraduate program in the Department ofBusiness Administration of _ University, waived of entrance examination becauseof my distinguished academic performance at the junior college (ranking topsecond among 31 students in the class). During my undergraduate program, Icontinue to maintain a satisfactory academic performance, ranking top ten amonga total of 51 students. Completing my undergraduate program in 1998, I obtaineda Bachelor’s degree in economics.
Through my undergraduate program, I gained an increasingly deepunderstanding of the importance of economics. As far as I am concerned,economics is by no means an abstract discipline. It is closely connected withreality and is designed to explore and explain diverse economic phenomena andeconomic laws. For the foreseeable future, the conflict between the scarcity ofnatural resources and the infinitude of human demand will continue to persist,posing a long-lasting threat to the social development of all nations. Thenecessity to seek a solution to this conflict gave birth to Economics, whichpromises to maximize material wealth through an optimum allocation of use of my diligent efforts at coursework and my strong interest ineconomics, I managed to achieve a top-10 ranking in my class，winning the honorof Outstanding Student and a second-class scholarship. I familiarized myselfwith most classic works on economics and management, including Principles ofManagement by Harold Koontz, Economics by Samuelson, Competition Strategy byPorter and Wealth of Nations by Adam Smiths, etc. From the very beginning of myeconomics study, I have tried to expose myself to western perspectives.
Starting from the premise that economics will be lifeless unless it isapplied to the problems in the real world, I paid special attention in myundergraduate program to the combination of theory and practice as a way oflearning and applying my knowledge of economics. I once spent a whole summervacation on conducting a survey of the fast food business in _ City. I sampled15 fast food restaurants, carried out interviews with restaurant owners and thecustomers. I applied quantitative analysis to my statistics and proposedconcrete measures for developing the city’s fast food industry through improvingmanagement, business environment, food variety and service quality.
My research ability was improved through writing my thesis –The Protectionand the Development of China’s National Industry in the Age of Reform andOpening Up. The thesis focuses on China’s joining of WTO and its possiblenegative impact on the growth of national industry. My conclusion is that acareful balance must be struck between the protection of national industry andthe introduction of foreign capital. The thesis was rated “Excellent” for itscomprehensive theoretical formulation, detailed statistics and creativeperspectives.
Yours sincerely,
1. 參觀和考察學校
預約參觀考察學校(首先進入學校的，先註冊，然後通過郵件在網上預約參觀學校的時間，一般學校都需要你提前預約，也可以自己接打電話預約)。收到回信按預約時間訪問學校，會有招生辦的老師帶領參觀校園然後幫助你瞭解相關學校資訊。
2. 網上提交申請材料
確定學校後就可以在提交申請材料，學校的通常都會有完善的申請流程，按照提示和要求來就好。學校收到遞交材料後如果有不完善的地方仍然會通過郵件形式與家長溝通，所以記得時常看看郵箱以及垃圾郵件箱。
3. 等待面試通知
從申請到收到面試通知這個過程會比較漫長，至少一個月，兩個月也完全有可能。
因為，泰國人辦事速度較慢，申請的學生越來越多，而招生辦通常就是兩三個負責人，她們每天有接待不完的訪問者以及上百封郵件要回復。
所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建議勤發郵件溝通以防被疏漏。準備的這期間可以好好幫助孩子準備面試。低齡兒童面試對英文的要求不高，能簡單的交流。
但是一年級以後的需要有一定的基礎，面試包括聽說讀甚至寫，比想象中要難。所以一定要有英文基礎。(但各個學校都存在不同程度的差異，所以看你選擇的是哪個學校)
4. 面試結果
參加學校面試後，不會立馬有結果，通常等上一個月兩個月都很正常。所以建議你至少提前半年開始辦理申請。泰國開學時間一般都在八月份，一個學年分四個學期，平均兩個月為一學期。
5. 交建校費和學費並保留收費單
如果面試成功學校會學校會通知你按時繳費(建校費和學費，學費可以按一學年交也可以按一學期交)學校收到款項會給你郵寄收費單據和簽證所需的推薦材料(單據和簽證材料都得儲存好，這個後續去大使館辦簽證要用到)。
A wise man once said “how dreadful knowledge of the truth can be, when there’s no help in truth.” I think, out of all thoughtful things one can think about, this quotes is unique description of what the depth of Drama and the Performing Arts can do for people. By studying Drama, we can become a variety of people, trapped within one single mind, all trying to be freed and each with their own personality and poison. Humanity has helped Drama so much to produce narrative of such calibre, and characters of such depth and poise – characters, which can be as sweet and innocent, or can take the more disgusting side of what being a human is, being as evil as what thought possible
Performance Art explores the whole range of human emotion and can produce tremendous performances and visual experiences and with Drama, in particular, we can go further than flesh and blood and express ourselves as somebody else and take on this ‘mask’. The most profound thing I have found when studying Drama is that we can become any person in the entire world, and still be us
I have always had a love for the performing arts since I can remember; for there has never really been anything else I have ever wanted to do apart from act. But acting is not just a subject to study people, narratives or social issues – we can discover so many things about ourselves, why we perform a character this way: is it because this person is so much like us? There have been numerous qualities I have discovered about myself while participating in drama. In teaching, I have learn how to really connect with people and help them to explorer what their feelings produce and more notably, how we learn about others, about a single person just by the way they say a monologue
Teaching has been a great experience for me because it has given me the time to evaluate my own performance and teaching skill, learning to become that character just a little but more. This has also been enhanced by the performances I have taken part in, learning to work together in teams to realise the dream of the narration and the vision of the director (for nothing really exists without the vision or image)
While experiencing other aspects of the Performing Arts, I have found that is has increased my performance skill on whole and expended my knowledge on the performance world greatly, Dance, Art and English all focusing on similar issues such as the Commedia dell’arte, Henrik Ibsen, Physical Theatre and Movements and philosophies. These subjects have greatly complemented my time in Drama, and increased my confidence and ability in being a performer. Being involved in 5 consecutive school productions, 2 amateur productions, teaching experience and a student has really influence me concerning the determination I will put into a career in Drama and Acting, and just working with these people and directors have really bettered me in the way I act, see myself and carry on with my life. The Performing Arts is such a brilliant profession to work in, because there is so much opportunity to explore the world
I know that I can offer the performing arts the time, the expense and the spark that it deserves. There is nothing else in world that I would devote more time to than being on the stage or acting in the street, and with the passion and determination to succeed behind me, I will give that spark and flavour that acting and the performing arts is all about. I know I can offer so much, because it is the only profession where, maybe just for one night, I can become someone else and do a damn good job of being that person – and I can easily say that I can offer the world, because performance and acting is my whole world. As well as enjoying Drama, I have also taken a shine to Philosophy and finding the reason for irrationality, and I feel particularly moved in amazement by the work of Bob Fosse and George Orwell for their use of horror, sorrow and murder. And a great interest to the History of Art, because so much of the story of us is portrayed in Art and more so these days it is so unique how Art and Drama work together to produce movement, beauty and conception.
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的:
我是系X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(一般為一年)。
休學後，我會努力(如:留學)，並且在有餘力的前提下繼續堅持學習。並在休學期間，加強自己的思想教育，使自己的思想始終與我校保持高度一致。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
此致
敬禮
系X班
年 月 日
尊敬的老師：
你好!我叫，是本校系*班學生。
因最近情緒煩躁，頹廢，不能靜下心在校繼續學習。在自己的學習中，感覺到前所未有的迷茫，想到外面體驗一下生活。故向學校申請休學一段時間，希望能獲你的批准。
以前，從知道考慮自己前途的時候，我選擇了上學.然而在日新月異的變革中，在校畢業後的就業問題是每個在校學子的一塊心病。我想的很多、很久，感覺自己的命運由自己把握，真想出學校大門改變自己一下，即使改變後仍沒結果，我則問心無愧!
謝謝學校這一年的培養!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance tosee many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtaindrinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much usefor televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to playwith, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i idemade such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin,surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were...
I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I stillremember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men theywere! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source ofencouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue lighttwinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to chargebravely into the unknown world.
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節)
合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶裡，藉此打動評審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
尊敬的學校領導、老師：
我是現就讀於X大學XX級X學院X班的學生，現因(休學原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(休學時間)，即從X年X月XX日至X年X月XX日。
望領導及老師能夠予以批准。
申請人：
申請時間：x年x月x日
Dear _,
My name is Lin Hao, from Northeast China---Heilongjiang Province. Thelong-term and cold climate has allowed me to develop a tough and tenaciouscharacter in the course of my life. In 20 years, I was admitted to China withexcellent results. Jilin University, a prestigious university, is currentlystudying for a bachelor's degree in economics majoring in internationaleconomics and trade, and a second degree in futures investment and managementmajor in the same period. My university is a comprehensive university with avery complete range of disciplines. My university life has not only enabled meto develop a comprehensive and three-dimensional development in learning methodsand professional knowledge, but more importantly, it has improved my ability tointegrate knowledge of various disciplines. At the same time, it greatlyincreased my desire for knowledge. Therefore, I decided to study in the UK aftergraduation. Through understanding, I currently hope to apply for a__University__ major.
Family is very important to everyone, because it is the first classroom forus to receive education. My grandfather was a banker, my father was abusinessman, and my mother was a statistician. Their words and deeds to meplayed an extremely important role in the establishment and development of myoutlook on life and values, and also helped me. Established an honest,hardworking, and never-say-fail character. So influenced by them, I am veryinterested in finance disciplines. My family is the most important asset in mylife. It gives me the interest in learning this subject and the character ofgoing forward courageously.
Through the learning of professional knowledge, I have developed a stronginterest in economics and finance. I read "Life Economics" by Dr. DavidFriedman. In the book, he used easy-to-understand cases. Combining the mistyprinciples of economics with people’s ordinary life has enabled me to master theeconomic principles that most people find boring, and the learning methods inreal life. At the same time, I have a good understanding of Fried Dr. Mandeveloped a feeling of worship. In the same year, I read his masterpiece "PriceTheory" again. Through the study of this book, I became obsessed with knowledgeof currency and finance. Due to the strong desire for knowledge, I started tominor in the second degree "Futures Investment and Management". During thisperiod, I met a mentor, Professor Lu, a very famous scholar in China's futuresindustry. Professor Lu combines the theory and practice of the futures market,and combines the true meaning of life with the operation of the futures market,which is regarded as a "casino" by outsiders, and teaches us the knowledge ofthe futures market and economic investment. This teaching method is in line withmy learning habits, so I quickly entered the state. We often discuss thedevelopment of China’s futures industry and the price fluctuations of the worldfutures market together. In the autumn of 20__, I was invited to assist him incompleting the "China Financial Futures" Research work on the "Enlightenment ofthe Japanese Yen Development Route to the Development of China's Renminbi" inthe "Market Establishment" project. Because of his outstanding performance, hewon the appreciation of Professor Lu.
In addition to studying professional knowledge, in my spare time, I alsoestablished the first leukemia volunteer organization in Jilin Province andserved as the chairman. Helped 10 children with leukemia from poor families inthe form of voluntary activities. Every year, they held lectures on leukemiaknowledge at Jilin University, as well as volunteer registration activities forthe Chinese bone marrow bank (Chinese hematopoietic stem cell bank), and bloodsample extraction activities. In the past three years, the association has beenUnder my leadership, we have made considerable progress and achieved outstandingresults. Many media have reported on our activities. On the website of _社 onOctober 25, 20_, we also reported on our activities. In addition, my deeds werealso reported to the famous Chinese student magazine "East, West, South, Northand University Students" Issue 03 of the year 20_. These honors fully prove theaffirmation of my work by the society and the school. Now, one of every 150volunteers in the Chinese bone marrow bank is developed by my association. Theassociation has also been awarded the title of Jilin University BoutiqueAssociation for three consecutive years. I was also named the first "Moving JiUniversity" of Jilin University. The title of top ten college students, and atthe same time, through the establishment of a volunteer association, not onlyenabled me to realize the value of life, but also exercised my organizationalskills, which greatly improved my personal quality. In addition, I also likesports very much. I am good at sprinting, football, etc. Young, I should be fullof vitality.
In the summer of 20_, as a student representative of Jilin University, Ivisited a famous university. As a Chinese representative, I participated in morethan ten student exchange activities, and as a cultural messenger, I spreadChinese traditions and modern culture to the students, and through the visit, Ilearned some culture and visited their education system. In the process, I wasdeeply moved by the university's advanced teaching mode and strong scientificresearch capabilities. Compared with my own school, although we have developedrapidly, there is still a gap between the world's top education. This feelinginspired my enthusiasm for learning. After returning to my country, I decided touse my own strength to make my own contribution to the development of mymotherland. This is also an important reason why I applied to your school,because as a The responsibility of the Chinese is to use the advanced knowledgeI learned overseas to build my motherland.
"Practice, firm, and hardworking" is the fine tradition I inherited, and itis also my life creed. Facing the imminent graduation from university, a strongthirst for knowledge and a passion for professional knowledge, I decided tocontinue my professional study and accept the rigorous teaching, cutting-edgeresearch and new ways of thinking in the university, so as to enrich myself andrealize myself I also hope that I can become the messenger of the culture of thetwo countries. Thank you for your attention and look forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir,
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University inJune next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your universitynext fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog ofyour university and any other necessary information, and also a set ofapplication forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS forthe GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.
He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchina's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the GiftedClass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, hisEnglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. But I noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his English during his fiveundergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient inEnglish as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.
In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only hisextraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am surethat Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he maycare to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
Yours sincerely
Fan Pu
Professor and Deputy Head
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
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Dear _,
It is my conviction that the meaning of life does not dwell in the lengthof time that one can live or the material abundance that one can acquire, but inthe richness and the wonderfulness of life itself. With the increase of my age,many things in my life have changed. But one thing remains constant, that is, Iwill consistently insist on doing what I like to do and hope that my endeavorscan be valuable to the life of others. I see this as the only way whereby I canrealize the value of my life.
My undergraduate study focused on economics and I achieved remarkablescholastic performance in this field. My GPA is 3.44 (my GRE score is 20__ andTOEFL---- ). For four consecutive years of my undergraduate study, I receivedscholarships for my distinguished academic performance. Due to my equallyprominent performance in extracurricular activities I was conferred on theOutstanding Student in Campus Activities. However, honestly speaking, my realinterest lies not in economics, but in education. Ever since I was a primaryschool student, I had cherished a strong desire for a teaching careerexemplified by my teachers. In the actual teaching career that I embarked onupon my graduating from university, I have become increasingly aware that theexisting educational conditions in China are far from satisfactory. The backwardteaching methodology and the prevailing pedagogical ideology have renderedChinese education out of place with the modern international development ineducation. On the macro level, the current education theory and practice inChina lag significantly behind advanced countries in the West. For instance,though education via the internet has achieved considerable development in pasttwo years, in practical operation such education has more often than notdeteriorated into an extended form of the conventional examination-orientededucation instead of a really interactive process. In my personal experience,despite the fact that some of the problems that I have encountered in myteaching career can be solved by consulting relevant technical literature, Ihave found that the more serious flaws inherent in China's current educationalsystem cannot be worked out easily. Under such circumstances, an advancedprogram in education becomes necessary.
In this age of information, traditional education, both in its ideology andmethodology, has met unprecedented challenge like many other aspects of humanexistence. Meanwhile, the pursuit for higher levels of educational developmentand of the quality of life has largely transformed the educational valueorientation of the general public. The educational model that is centered aroundthe cognitive and intellectual instruction has been seriously ter attention has been devoted to the cultivation of well-developedpersonality and to the ontological status of the individual in education. Suchissues as the internal studies of education science, scientific decision-makingin education, and meta-education have also been increasingly emphasized e have also been innovations in educational research methodology. Thetendency has been to combine modern technology with humanistic researchcategories and with naturalistic research categories, and to organicallyintegrate qualitative descriptions with quantitative descriptions. It is alsoimportant to carry out educational experimentations in which educationalpredictions are complemented by educational feedbacks. Both the complexity ofeducation and the complexity of human individuals have made the comprehensiveapplication of diverse educational approaches necessary. Those new horizons arewhat fascinate me.
In view of the following qualifications that I have acquired, I believethat I will acquit myself satisfactorily in the prospective Ph.D. program ineducation that I am currently endeavoring to apply for. First and foremost, asis often claimed, one's interest is one's best director. I believe that I willdo well what I am really interested in doing. Secondly, though I majored ineconomics as an undergraduate, my trainings during that stage helped developeffective modes of thinking and research approaches. In addition, Iconscientiously self-studied many works related to education, including ADevelopmental History of Educational Science in the West, which enabled me toconstruct a solid groundwork for more advanced studies in this field. Next, itcan be safely asserted that education and economics are not entirely example, it is necessary to apply many statistical methods in educationalpsychology and my academic record indicates that statistics is the subject thatI am most good at. Last but not the least, my current teaching career and myteaching experience will play a positive role in facilitating my target degreeprogram.
The reason why I apply for the University of -- is that it is the firststate university with a time-honored history. The School of Education in thisuniversity is quite prominent among its counterparts in the field. I amparticularly attracted by the School's powerful pedagogical resource, vibrantintellectual atmosphere and a comprehensive curriculum. I plan to apply for adegree program in Instructional Technology or Educational Psychology, both ofwhich enjoy unparalleled academic reputation in the world. My application forInstructional Technology is motivated by my strong interest in the applicationof modern science and technology, especially the information technologyrepresented by the Internet, in the field of education and in the nature of aseries of revolutionary changes resulting thereof. Instructional Technology is anew discipline that has emerged as a result of the rapid development of moderncommunication technology since the late 20th century. It has tremendouspotential for development and commercial application. As for my motive inselecting Educational Psychology as another possible area of specialization inmy degree program, it is my long-cherished interest that primarily counts. Onthe other hand, all the accomplished educators since the 1960's have beenwell-versed in psychology. Almost every important new educational theory isderived psychological findings in one way or another so that educationalpsychology has subsequently developed into a fundamental subject for the scienceof education. The tendency in the 21st century is to emphasize on the microresearch of educational activities and against this backdrop educationalpsychology will be attached greater importance. In Instructional Technology, Iwould like to focus on the following studies: how to improve educationalefficiency by applying research results from natural sciences and engineeringtechnology; how to explore the combination and coordination of pedagogicalcontents and to improve teaching methodology by exploiting the theoreticalfindings from psychology and educational science concerning the process ofteaching and learning. In Educational Psychology, I will concentrate on appliedcognition and development, gifted and creative education, genetics and childrendevelopment, personality structure and individual differences and other relatedsubjects.
For me, to shift from economics to education and to pursue an advanceddegree in the United States is not so much a challenge as an opportunity. Atpresent, major reforms are being introduced into virtually every importantaspect of Chinese society. The field of education especially calls forcomprehensive reforms. The United States occupies an absolutely leading positionin the present-day world in education. It is my conviction that, in the UnitedStates, advanced educational theories, technologies and information willfacilitate me immensely in the achievement of remarkable academic progress,fulfilling my aspiration to become an accomplished professional in the field ofeducation. This will not only bring my patriotic fervor into reality but alsomake my life more meaningful and rewarding.
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的考官：
您好!
很榮幸有機會向您呈上我的留學申請書。
我出生於一個教師之家，母親是一位優秀的國小教師;父親是也曾經是教師，後來經歷了人生的第二次選擇，考入法院，成了一名法官。父母對生活的熱情和對人生挫折的態度，潛移默化地影響著我，形成了我自強不息、不輕言敗的性格。
會考的教訓，讓我懂得了什麼叫腳踏實地，什麼叫不圖虛榮，什麼叫謙虛謹慎，什麼叫取長補短……高中三年，我努力夯實學科基礎知識、掌握學習方法、提高操作實踐能力、同時，利用課餘時間廣泛地涉獵大量書籍，不但充實了自己，而且培養了自己多方面的技能。夷陵中學嚴謹的學風塑造了我樸實、穩重的學習態度，更重要的是在這樣一個精英雲集的地方，我學會了在競爭中挑戰自我，在合作中欣賞他人。這樣一步一個腳印走來，我嚐到了成功的喜悅：成績逐年上升，我看到了自己身上蘊藏著的無限潛能，它讓我相信——如果給我一個支點，我也能撬起整個地球!
選擇_大學我有以下幾個理由：
一是_大學是一所國家教育部直屬的，擁有研究生院，本科專業涵蓋了理、工、文、經、管、法、教育等學科門類的綜合性重點大學，是一所有著堅實的學術基礎和嚴謹的治學傳統，校園環境優美的大學。在這樣的學習環境裡，無論是在知識能力，還是在個人素質修養方面，我會受益匪淺。
二是_大學是一所以工為主的大學，這符合了我的學科興趣，我是一個理科生，尤其以數學、物理學科見長，這次推薦我參加自主招生的就是我的數學老師和物理老師。我喜歡在這樣自主開放的環境裡學習，希望可以有更為廣闊的發展前景。
三是_大學堅持以“厚基礎，寬口徑，強能力，高素質”的人才培養計劃，在教學中注重創新能力培養，注重提高學生的綜合素質，學校實施了一系列教學改革新措施包括：名師上講臺工程、中英文雙語教學工程、“創新人才培養”工程、本碩連讀制度等，還有一系列的完善學分制管理的制度，包括主輔修制、彈性學制、第二學位制、優異生培養制度等。
現在有很多的大學生畢業後面臨就業難的問題，這也將是我今後不能迴避的，但我想，這是一個適應社會的問題。大學是一個可以接觸並嘗試眾多領域的獨一無二的場所，是一個溝通社會的平臺。我希望這裡掌握生活技能，培養自己的社會角色，使自己能承擔社會責任，權利和義務，成為一個真正的社會人。
現在的科技發展可謂日新月異，我的學習是要掌握最基本的學習工具和方法，將來利用這些工具和方法，再去學習新的東西。我們不可能靠在大學裡學到的知識來維護一生的，以後如果不再學了，照樣會落後，所以，本科讀什麼專業不能完全決定畢業後的工作方向。我希望根據我的學科特長，選擇適合我的專業，但是我不會太在意專業的趨向，絕對服從學校根據我的情況進行專業調劑。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的各位老師，各位領導:
大家好，我叫___，來自國家連片貧困地區重點縣之一的__省__市__縣。作為一名普通的高三生，今天懷著很特別的心情遞交這份申請，它既懷揣著我對貴大學的嚮往和崇仰。又寄託著我的大學夢。我願懷著最赤誠的心來訴說我心中的願景。也很感激各位老師在百忙之中審讀我的來信。我相信一定不會讓您們失望的。
貧困的大山擋不住我強烈的求學之心。綿延的山路沒有阻擋我的求學之路。生活的不易沒有使我消沉抑鬱，反而激起我奮發圖強的意志，激起我想要努力改變生活現狀，改變家鄉落後面貌的決心。
進入高中以來，我就更加明白學習的重要性，我很佩服這樣的自己，一直保持高昂的鬥志和不服輸的精神，在學習上力爭上游。也許我的成績不是絕對的優勢，但是我努力找準自己的定位，取得屬於自己的進步，把成績穩在班級前幾名，學校前三十名以內。我是一個活潑開朗的女生，甚至有些女漢子風采。自小父母就不嬌慣我，有意識地培養我獨立自主的能力。或許是這種開朗、民主的家庭氛圍，使我在生活學習上都保持樂觀向上的狀態，在學校也積極參加各種活動，包括學校舉辦的運動會和各種演講比賽，也取得不錯的名次。高一時，我擔任班級的團支書，多次帶領同學們組織英語演講比賽、辯論賽等，也組織過很多次班會。這些活動一次比一次成功，我的經驗也在實踐中不斷豐富，既增強了同學們的友誼和感情，也提高了我自身的組織能力。高二時擔任副班長，和班長一起負責管理班級日常工作，鍛鍊了自己的管理協調能力。
在緊張的生活之餘，在假期間我也參與了___會志願服務工作，我的主要工作是幫助引導遊客。雖然時間只有短短的三天，但是我在這個過程中也有很多獨特的感受。其中的感受是__的快速發展，在新的歷史機遇面前，中原經濟正在騰飛，這艘巨輪又一次準備揚帆啟航。其次，在服務過程中，我也遇到全國各地的很多遊客，能為他們服務，讓他們感受__人的熱情，為他們展現__文化的別樣風采與魅力，我感到非常的激動，這是我作為一個__人的驕傲與義務。另外，這項工作也教會我如何更好地與他人溝通，更好地表達自己，在揮灑汗水的同時也提高了自己的表達技能。
那麼說到大學，很多同學都不是很願意選擇_，我想他們一定是沒有了解過_。據我所瞭解，_不僅致力於建設區域性示範作用的綜合性研究大學，也致力於建設高水平的國際知名大學。
我與_還是很有緣分的。首先，作為__本省的大學，而且是第一所示範性211大學，那一定是久負盛名的。而且，我高中三年的老師基本上都是__大學校友，就僅從老師們的口中就斷斷續續瞭解過很多關於__大學的趣事，其中印象最深的是他們說的眉湖，有機會一定要一覽為快。再次，_的很多招生政策都讓我不禁拍手稱讚，從自主招生到農村地區單獨招生，心中都很感動。我們本省就有這樣的好大學，那麼還有什麼理由去外省的呢?我又有什麼理由不選擇這樣的大學呢?其次，我很欣賞__大學的新浪微博，每天既可以感受唯美詩文，人生哲理，有可以欣賞嘻哈小段子，養生小故事。所以，從微博中也可以感受到__大學文而不弱，武而不暴的校風。從這個社會平臺來看，__大學也是很成功的。最後，這也是毋庸置疑的一點，我們__大學的人才遍佈社會各界，不勝列舉的例項都彰顯了我們不凡的實力和競爭力。
最後，我希望報考__大學的漢語言文學專業。一方面，我覺得自己作為一個文科女生，對語言文字天生就有更多的興趣和愛好，有多於常人的關注度。在日常生活中，我最喜歡的事情就是閱讀報刊雜誌，從《讀者》、《青年文摘》再到《意林》，基本上都是我的必看書目。
因此，我也希望日後可以從事與雜誌編輯相關的工作。可能很多人都夢想成為作家或者記者，我知道那需要足夠優秀的文筆和思維跳躍性。現在我對記者的欽佩之情還是大於羨慕的，他們永遠奔赴在新聞的第一線，走在事發的最前列。為大眾呈現最及時、最新鮮的新聞。而我緯度對雜誌編輯情有獨鍾，我真心喜歡這項工作，我享受閱讀書籍時優美文字在眼前跳躍的快感，我願意為這項事業付出心血和精力，也願意為大眾呈現的一面，讓整個社會充滿愛與正能量，更願意去分享這份美好。用文字純淨心靈，哲理文化人生。
當然了，還要請各位老師原諒由於我的閱歷有限，難免會有一些膚淺的認識，我知道勝任這項工作還需要計算機方面的相關知識和技能，而我都不是很熟練，但是我相信我有永不放棄的信心，勇於拼搏的精神，敢於堅持的毅力將這項工作做好。
另一方面，我們也可以看到當前語言文化發展的現象都不是讓人滿意。尤其是在當下文化多元的情形下，面臨西方文化的強烈衝擊，文化發展更加舉步維艱。而我們在世界各地舉辦的孔子學院，傳播國學經典等活動，舉辦《漢字聽寫大會》等節目，都顯示出對文化發展的重視。我們深知文化是民族的血脈，尤其是對中國這樣一個有著五千年文明的大國。文化軟實力就尤為重要，所以我願意為此貢獻自己的一份微薄之力，盡我之能力來弘揚中華文化，傳播國家經典。
最後再次感謝各位老師審讀我的留學申請書。
不後悔，去__大學，只因你的名字叫__大學。
尊敬的_領導：
您好!我是遼寧省大石橋市第一高階中學高三學生___。我希望通過貴校的自主招生來實現我在_學習的夢想，感謝您在百忙中抽出時間審閱我的自薦信，以下是我的自我介紹。
三年的高中生活就要結束了，_悠久的歷史，深厚的文化底蘊，豐富的教學資源，良好的學術氛圍，強烈的時代氣息，為社會培養出許多傑出人才。我將選擇貴校為第一志願，非常渴望能在明年7月拿到貴校的錄取通知書，成為一名光榮的_學生，成為一名對社會、對祖國有用的人才。
在多年的學習過程中，從國小習成績一直的我，憑藉自己的努力考入理想的高中——大石橋市第一高階中學，經過三年的錘鍊，我已經成長為意志堅強、底蘊深厚、成熟內斂、熱愛生活、有愛心、有同情心、有上進心、德智體全面發展的優秀學生。
我性格開朗，興趣廣泛，天文地理、國內國際形勢都會引起我極大的興趣與關注。我喜歡參加學校組織的各種活動，喜歡寫作、唱歌，做過校園聯歡晚會主持人等，這些愛好，讓我不但在學習上，而且在多方面取得進步。
我是個樂觀向上的年輕人。熱愛生活，逆境也不畏懼，對生活充滿信心和希望。我堅信，我的努力會讓我達到成功的夢想。我喜歡感受快樂，我希望把快樂傳遞給我身邊的每一個人，我為強者歡呼，為弱者流淚，我相信送人玫瑰手留餘香。我用自己的真誠，博得良好的同學緣，老師們也都對我非常認可，這多來自我單純、直率、熱情的性格。
我是理科生，養成了行事條理分明的個性，亦是一個做事果斷、有主見、有分寸的人。無論在學習上，還是其他方面，我都努力達到事半功倍的的效果。充分發揮自己的潛力。我常常用更少的時間就能學會別人在標準學習時間內才能獲取的知識，經常花費別人的一部分時間完成和別人同樣的作業任務。在高中歷次的期中、期末考試中，我的成績大多，這些都源自我科學的學習方法和良好的學習習慣。曾獲得大石橋市三好學生的榮譽。
_是我夢寐以求的大學殿堂，假如我這次有幸進步_，我將明確努力方向，能在大學汲取更多的知識，不僅是知識，更有獻身祖國、為民族復興貢獻一份力量的情操。在學術活躍的_，我將努力參加一些團體、論壇和各種活動，鍛鍊我的能力，把自己磨礪成一個_學生所具備的獨特文化品位、非凡才能和良好綜合素質的優秀人才。
“好風憑藉力，送我上青雲。”期待在不久的將來成為_的學生，而_則是我人生大學階段最有意義的好風!隨信附上個人簡歷。懇請貴校領導接受我的申請，實現我的理想。
此致
敬禮
尊敬的_領導、老師們：
有目標的人生才是有意義的人生，一個人若沒有目標，就如同迷失了方向的船隻，隨波逐流，永遠沒有溫馨的港灣。我的目標，就是求新務實地創造，以成果回報社會，以人格魅力影響世界!而我最嚮往的_大學，也將成為我生活的契機。
王國維曾提到人生的三個境界，我的過去就是“昨夜西鳳凋碧樹，獨上高樓，望盡天涯路”。因為一直都是非常優秀的學生，因此對自己的要求也很嚴格。記得那是國小五年級的期末測試，不知是換了考場，還是題目的角度難度不合我的口味，我一向引以為豪的數學在那次考試中只有區區80分。老師們不好嚴厲地批評我，畢竟我平時的專注有目共睹;父母卻是非常失望地將我“軟禁”起來，不能出門，不能碰電腦，甚至於“新聞聯播”都成為禁忌。
我後悔自己太不認真，但是這又有什麼用呢?!在被關在家的時間裡，我就把那張試卷翻來覆去地看，我看錯的題目，重新做它們，繼續尋求更快更好的解法。這種開拓初次嘗試是很累的，阿拉伯數字圍成緊箍咒，向我的頭上套去。
直到進入國中才逐漸意識到這就是所謂的“正確學習方法”，才瞭解“不認真”是過於籠統的概念。其實在不知不覺中，無論誰都會進步，譬如我並沒有刻意去琢磨那些錯題，而錯題於我就像是甘甜的乳汁，有著汲取不盡的養分。後來當聽到有人評價我認真、仔細、“肯鑽”、“坐得住”時，我並沒有多大的感覺。靜下心進而回顧，已經在長年累月中成為習慣，歲月的流逝雖會將鋒芒磨盡，但遺留下來的卻是至寶。
而“衣帶漸寬終不悔，為伊消得人憔悴”堪稱現在生活的映照了。每天往返於學校家庭間，尤其是進入高三，重複單調的生活讓人產生厭倦。可是我明白我所要追求的是什麼，我為“伊”而憔悴，但卻“終不悔”。這是希望的作用：當我看見新的藥物治療病人、新的材料用於生活、新的裝置提高產率，看到人民的生活美好，我就會感到由衷的喜悅，這也就成為支援我繼續奮鬥的力量。
我看小說，我看其中所反映的社會現象，或者作者所要表達的美好願望;我看動漫，我看其中所展現的美好人性，或者享受作品本身帶給我精神的放鬆。我把我的感受寫進部落格，我為自己創造發洩的條件，於是有人評價我冷靜、客觀、“有思想”，於是有人說我趕得上潮流，有創新意識。其實這些都是一家之言，自己怎麼樣，只有自己最清楚。
我曾不太善交際，從而一度將“寂寞讓我如此美麗”奉為經典。但是看到同學回家都有伴兒，遇到困難都可以向死黨尋求幫助，我便也感到孤單與落寞。可是社會畢竟是自己的社會，個體的生存幾乎都是靠個體的力量，沒有誰會一直陪同自己走下去：父母會先於自己逝去，配偶則必須在成人後在“對的時間”遇到，朋友更不可能如影隨形。我意識到了，也就盡力讓自己融入生活圈，竟發現其實一切很簡單，需要的只是善意、友好和坦誠。
我在高中遇到很多天資聰穎的人，在感嘆的同時也逐漸發現其實“上帝在厚重的牆上開了一扇小窗”。“窮則獨善其身，達則兼濟天下”，雖然現在是一個人，但也必須從完善自我做起。在“修行”的途中所感受到的靈魂的昇華是愚鈍的我無法用筆描述的。我嫉妒過競賽優異的人，並且在得知胸有成竹的化學競賽落榜時也難過得無法入眠。但等到冷靜下來細細分析，其實自身還有非常多的漏洞：氣氛緊張時容易先入為主，遇到困難“腎上腺素分泌會急劇增多”從而影響思維。我努力克服它們，並且見賢思齊。
當然如果進入_大學，那裡將肯定是我展示自己的平臺了。在理想的指引下，我將繼續秉持高中以來優良的學習習慣和方法，繼續貫徹全面發展，努力在各方面都讓自己滿意;在生活上也必須更加照顧自己了，雖然現在也是一人，但遠在他鄉，當圓月嵌入蒼穹時也會不免引起鄉思吧。未來的生活有許許多多的變數，可以是充滿激情，也可以是頹唐無奈，生活會有非常多的誘惑，但是我必須堅守住心靈的淨土：無論怎麼改變，我所追求的理想不變!我希望為科學研究竭盡心力，我希望為國民思想精神的昇華奮鬥終身!不僅僅是大學，進入社會、開始工作，無論怎麼改變，必將始終為了崇高的事業奮鬥，向著理想賓士!我相信在未來的某一天，當我“驀然回首”時，我的夢想，已經在“燈火闌珊處”。這也應該是我人生的最後一個境界了。
我享受挑戰，勇於嘗試沒有把握的事，我知道絢爛的未來需要靠自己創造。我一直幻想自己是名英武的騎士，駕著名駒，在廣袤的歷史田野中，向著理想賓士!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
尊敬的先生/女士：
你好，我叫__，是__大學的老師。也是__學生的班主任，我非常高興地向你推薦我的學生__，並且相信它能夠出色的完成在貴校碩士課程的學習。
自從他進入大學以來, 常常表現出與年紀不相符的成熟和穩重。由於班上的大部分同學都來自其他省市，這第一次的出門離家的經歷使得他們需要一個相當長的過程適應這個完全陌生的新環境。但我注意到，相比之下，__同學很快的調整好了心態，積極主動地融入到這個新環境之中。
大學的課程與中學有很大不同，偏重在自學能力，而且專業課程的學習要求另一種思維方式。因此，在大一.大二，很多同學都表現出了不同程度的不適應，不知道該如何學習大學的課程。但是，__同學適應能力很強，很快摸清了工商管理課程的關鍵，在很短的時間裡就掌握了學習方法，而且其他任課老師都表示他對於新知識的接受能力很強，新學的知識他馬上就能消化，當堂就能理解掌握。
可以這麼說，班裡的部分學生是拿著極其出色的大學聯考成績走進了我們學校，而__同學憑藉的則是他極強的自學能力和良好的學習方法。這一點，在每學期的期末考試上得到了很好地體現，尤其是在專業英語的期末考試中取得極其優秀的成績,也是班裡少數順利通過英語四六級考試的同學.他對學習英語的熱情和毅力是最讓我感動的.
除了學__同學還校裡足球隊的主力隊員,積極的參加校裡組織的各項活動,有極強的組織和領導才能.他經常到我辦公室或給我打電話,一起討論他學習和生活中所遇到的問題,希望取得更好的學習成績.概括的說__同學是一個好學生.
我希望貴校能給他一個機會，讓他在貴校嚴謹的學風和良好的學習環境中繼續發揮他的特長，進一步提高專業知識，拓寬視野。望貴校考慮它的申請。
尊敬的_領導：
您好!
我是一個天資聰穎，活潑可愛，知書達禮，善解人意，愛好廣泛，才華橫溢的有教養的女孩。步入成年的我即將告別我難忘驕傲的母校——遼寧省檯安縣高階中學(省級示範性高中)，奔赴我心儀已久的_大學。此時此刻，我的心情異常激動。面對夢想學校的領導們，我鄭重地向您介紹一下我的個人情況：
我自幼成長在一個書香門第。在這個大家庭中，我受到了良好的教育啟蒙，養成了高度的自立自強，奮發向上的生活習慣。從祖輩到父輩，書香之氣，一代勝於一代，在臺安地區小有名氣。父輩哥們成為_網的“董氏三傑”。繼承父輩的基因，我也成為了小有名氣的文壇高手。有數十篇文章發表於《_》《_》《_》《_》《_》等網路刊物上，常常受到文聯作家協會的作家們的好評。
由於家父是遼寧省特級教師，所以，相對而言，我的啟蒙大學轉學手續教育就比其他同齡人優越得多。從上國小開始，爸爸就對我實施了科學訓練。我曾是班級的班長，中隊的中隊長，少先大隊的大隊長，環保協會的會長，小記者站站長。雖說身兼數職，但絲毫沒有影響我的學業，相反卻極大地促進了我的學業。我的各科成績均名列前茅，而且愛好廣泛，體音美全面發展，薩克斯、葫蘆絲都曾是我的拿手絕活，電子報刊獲省級一等獎。多次獲得國家、省、市級書畫作品一、二等獎。值得稱道的是，在國小畢業生升學考試中，我以全縣第一名的好成績升入縣重點中學。在中學期間，歷任班級團書記兼班長，主管班級全面工作，成為班主任的得力助手。升入高中後，三年來一直擔任班級想去國外上大學的團書記，全面領導學生開展工作，出版報，給同學授課，學生家長會議，和國際交流學生聯誼等諸多事宜我都成為其中的主角。用老師和同學的話說：“董婷婷，你真是當年的穆桂英，陣陣少不下呀!”在學生及其家長心目中都佔有矚目的地位，一舉一動具有廣泛的影響力。可以說是一位不可多得的才女能人。
在我心中，一直有著這樣的夢想——那就是有一天能成為爸爸的學生，聆聽他的教誨，像他的學生那樣，步入理想的高校，走出國門，為檯安爭光。那些師哥師姐們常常在國外為爸爸發來問候，也常常過問我的情況。這對於我來說，是巨大的鞭策和鼓勵。我一定會盡百倍千倍的努力，實現我的理想。_大學就是我目前最近的理想。
一流的心態造就一流的人生，理想的大學鑄就祖國的未來。我堅信，選擇我是您的明智。我會讓_大學以我為榮，我會讓祖國母親露出欣慰的笑臉。因為未來會有一個出色的科學家董婷婷在_誕生。那時，尊敬的各位領導，您就是伯樂，您就是共和國的功臣!你的選擇不會錯，我的未來不是夢!
有著深厚的文學底蘊的我，會利用我的速讀速記的本領，輕鬆地駕馭鍵盤，用我超常的智慧譜寫我輝煌的青春序曲。科學在發展，人才靠競爭。我願以我的充足的個人實力挺進我心儀的_大學，讓我們地區的更多的撥尖人才湧入_大學，成為_大學的後續力量，把延安精神發揚光大，讓_理大大學成為共和國的脊樑支撐。
哪裡有追求，哪裡就有我;哪裡有發展，哪裡就有董婷婷!
綜上所述，我鄭重地向_大學的各位英明決策的領導推薦自己，一個卓越的具有非凡潛能的董婷婷在向您招手。她會讓您看到_大學美好的未來，她會讓_大學校園煥發青春的風采，更會讓_大學展示自強不息，奮發有為的新一代。
鴻志萬里投理工，
謀求發展抒豪情。
巾幗莫讓鬚眉志，
振興中華揚美名。
此致
敬禮!
Dear _,
I am a student of _ school _ (female, born on August 20th, _), and I amabout to become a middle school student. My biggest wish is to be able to studyin _, because destiny made me know _middle school. In the summer of 20_ I wasfortunate to become a member of the school club, and represented _ middle schoolto participate _ in _ the middle school student sports meeting (table tenniscompetition) that year, and achieved good results. In just a few days of thecompetition, through the introduction of the leading teachers and teammates, Ihave a full understanding of _middle school. After that, I pay more attention tolearning and love sports. In my heart, learning and exercise have constitutedthe driving force for mutual promotion. At present, my table tennis skills havebeen further improved. In the 20_20_years, I have won the second place in thewomen's group A of the table tennis competition for two consecutive years.
Ping-pong is my hobby, and it is my goal of continuous efforts to improveacademic performance. A good learning environment can create outstandinglearning talents. The suburban high school is my dream choice. The school hasthe traditional virtues of solidarity and mutual assistance, and has a learningatmosphere of "comparison, learning, catching up, and surpassing", and it ismore problem-solving. Good teachers and leaders who are difficult and willing toteach. Opportunities are met but not sought. If the school leaders give me thisopportunity, I will continue to sum up my experience and lessons, be mentallyprepared to dare to endure all hardships, establish the confidence to overcomeall difficulties, and strive to be excellent Achievement completed three yearsof junior high school life. Never let the school leaders down. I don'tunderstand whether this formulation is appropriate, but I implore the leaders tostudy my application.
Yours sincerely,
___,___
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Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further mystudy in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of AppliedPhysics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get myB.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I choseBoston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array ofdatabases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe myinterests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solidacademic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduatestudy.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the GraduateApplication Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, andother relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of thisletter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
尊敬的_大學老師：
您好!
"韶華不為少年留，勤為天道酬。"正如高三的教室後牆上我所想出的勵志名言一般，它時刻激勵著班上的同學與我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡陽市八中高三的一名學生，就讀文科，是平凡的，因為是一個同所有人一樣的矛盾融合體;但又堅信自己是不同的，是因為我將成為發光體。金子，到哪裡都會發光，而我選擇的是貴校這樣一座鍊金爐。
河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我願像河般，為夢想奔騰向前永不止息;像海般容納百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利萬物而不爭，處眾人之所惡，故幾於道。居善地，心善淵，與善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，動善時。夫唯不爭，故無尤。"善的最高境界，大致在於此乎。像水般，往低處流，卻能容納百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高處走時，當不勝寒時，不忘想想水的謙虛，以一種包容一切的姿態，以柔化剛，接受萬物的俯視與臣服，這種"柔德"，使我自己的心境變得平和，要像水那樣，無形勝有形，不斷地改變，塑造自己，臻於完美。
寵辱不驚，閒看庭前花開花落;去留無意，漫隨天外雲捲雲舒的同時，我本著湖湘學派"經世致用"的原則，志當存高遠。如果說周總理是"為中華之崛起而讀書"，那我便願為"中國之強盛而讀書"。學無止境，人生本是一個不斷學習的過程。在六年的學習委員一職的任職過程中，除了學習課本知識，我的右手可以寫出一手漂亮的毛筆。因為正，一筆一劃地寫，心才會正。我的左手，能彈出美妙的小提琴樂章，這不僅開發了我的右腦，音樂更使我思維敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不僅是人類對上帝的提問，更是與大自然的交流。讓狂躁的心，不知不覺間安靜下來。
人生的旅途中，讀書萬卷：安徒生童話到世界名著。我醉心於寶黛間的痴纏;徜徉於《傲慢與偏見》裡伊麗莎白奇妙的心海中;感嘆於李白"我輩豈是蓬蒿人"的豪邁;與杜甫"安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏"一起憂國憂民;與易安居士一起看"雨疏風驟，綠肥紅瘦"。在文的海洋中，我願成那一滴水，一尾魚，在海洋心中，見證著它的悲喜。於是在歷史的不平中，我亦詩嘆曰：陳王夢還金鏤枕，鳳皇遺恨正阿房，才佳長恨無歸處，冷露成淚暗遺香。
我同樣願行萬里路，沿途的風景，豐盈著自己的人生，懂得取與舍，讓人生的閱歷更加豐富。曾到過南京，河畔槳聲燈影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝舊事已隨流水，而這座古都卻有太多歷史無法忘記的東西：革命先行者孫文先生之陵……流連於河海大學門前，不由駐足，希望自己能成為"歸人"，而不是"過客"。我這樣的遊子，在閱過17年風景後，選擇了河海大學作為圓夢的地方。
我喜歡奔跑的感覺，起跑線比重點更加美好，體味那為理想拼搏的過程。十年磨一劍，劍出鞘，一鳴驚人，直指河海。
我，靜如處子，或動如脫兔，願意跟書本這樣高尚的朋友對話。書山有路勤為徑，運用正確的學習方法，在無涯的學海中"直掛雲帆濟滄海"，正確地駕駛著學習之舟，雖然途中有風浪，但堅持駛向目的地--河海之灣。我，崇尚獨立，常獨立思考探尋人生真諦，遇事冷靜自若，卻又讓理性成為我織夢的梭，讓勤奮成為我築夢的橋。理智與熱情，誠信與好學，成為划向河海的槳，只為到那裡，為自己編織另一個夢，解決南方家鄉旱澇災害頻繁的問題，造福家鄉、祖國人民。在見證河灣輝煌的同時，與河海一起創造下一個輝煌。
我願逆風行舟，駛向河海，利用水，造福人民。
我願逆風，只為尋河海一夢。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
20__年__月__日
Application Letter for studying abroad
Xiao Ming
Student
Shandong University
27 Shanda Nan Lu
Jinan , Shandong , China
250100
Dr. Melba Ripley
The School of Architecture
University of Louisiana
100 Webber Hall
Baton Rouge, LA 70814
Dear Dr. Melba Ripley:
My name is Bu Xuliang , a student studying Microbiology technology in
Shandong University School. I intend to spend my doctor years in aUSAuniversity by the end of September 20__ for my higher education at the sametime to develop my scientific skill since I love to have a career in the fieldof Microbiology.
During the past three years, I had been an excellent student .I was
extremelyinterested in knowing how a microorganism change food to theenergy for their Biochemical processes, and used to find out the answer bymyself. I have
published a paper in past three years. I am quite confident that I canarrange both my study and my daily life well in new environment. I also tookpart in a great deal of social activities and some of them were reallyimpressive. I would truly like to have theopportunity to do research work inyouruniversityso as to learn more new technology in Microbiology technology.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me more information aboutthe application at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours,
Xiao Ming
dear professor,
i am greatly grateful that you can spare some time to read my letter. i ama chinese undergraduate from _, which is one of the top 10 universities inchina, and i will graduate in 20_. after that, i want to continue my educationby pursuing a master degree in france. i am now in the department of _.
my primary interest is in international commerce, and i notice that essecis on top of that field, so i decide to exert myself to get in. your research in“cross-cultural relationship marketing”, especially your publications onbusiness of china as well as southeast asia, are of particular interest to i would like to deal with business between europe and china in my 's why i seek entry to your theme.
during my university years, i am used to working in a team environment. forexample, i was administrative vice minister in student union, and organized andschemed activities along with competitions in university. for my excellent job,i gained the scholarship for entertainment and physical education r passing college english tests 4&6, i turned to learn french last yearand i got a score of 463 in tcf. i am preparing for ielts currently, and if gmatis necessary for applying master degree in essec, i shall take the test afterthe ielts test.
with so much admiration and enthusiasm, i hope i would have the opportunityto work under your supervision. if admitted, i am able to continue working alongthe lines of your present research. thanks for your kindness andconsideration.
yours sincerely , _-
I am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
尊敬的先生/女士：
你好，我叫X，是X大學的老師。也是X學生的班主任，我非常高興地向你推薦我的學生X，並且相信它能夠出色的完成在貴校碩士課程的學習。
自從他進入大學以來，常常表現出與年紀不相符的成熟和穩重。由於班上的大部分同學都來自其他省市，這第一次的出門離家的經歷使得他們需要一個相當長的過程適應這個完全陌生的新環境。但我注意到，相比之下，某某同志很快的調整好了心態，積極主動地融入到這個新環境之中。
大學的'課程與中學有很大不同，偏重在自學能力，而且專業課程的學習要求另一種思維方式。因此，在大一。大二，很多同學都表現出了不同程度的不適應，不知道該如何學習大學的課程。但是，某某同志適應能力很強，很快摸清了工商管理課程的關鍵，在很短的時間裡就掌握了學習方法，而且其他任課老師都表示他對於新知識的接受能力很強，新學的知識他馬上就能消化，當堂就能理解掌握。
可以這麼說，班裡的部分學生是拿著極其出色的大學聯考成績走進了我們學校，而某某同志憑藉的則是他極強的自學能力和良好的學習方法。這一點，在每學期的期末考試上得到了很好地體現，尤其是在專業英語的期末考試中取得極其優秀的成績，也是班裡少數順利通過英語四六級考試的同學。他對學習英語的熱情和毅力是最讓我感動的。除了學同學還校裡足球隊的主力隊員，積極的參加校裡組織的各項活動，有極強的組織和領導才能。他經常到我辦公室或給我打電話，一起討論他學習和生活中所遇到的問題，希望取得更好的學習成績。概括的說某某同志是一個好學生。
我希望貴校能給他一個機會，讓他在貴校嚴謹的學風和良好的學習環境中繼續發揮他的特長，進一步提高專業知識，拓寬視野。望貴校考慮它的申請。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
i am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economichub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I havedeveloped a meaningful outlook on lie. I identify myself with such values thatone gives meaning to life when one lives to give. Success stories of my parents, relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief inbeing independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.
As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to myworking parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools inBeijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciateindependence. As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset Igained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those6 years. After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school bybike. Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consentto the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first placegiven the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parentsand grandparents. Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain orsunshine,tempered my strong character. I have been holding myself to higheststandards, academically and physically from primary school days through tocollege life. I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have beenexposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside ofclassroom. I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstratedcommitment to teamwork. I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when Iwas in primary school. Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills inthe field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader. And I didjustice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete inShanghai and Hong Kong several times. And the strong track record of outoutstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitementtoday. During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposedto the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center ofAsia. That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth andfinance. And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped myambition to be a financer.
Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life anddeath for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference wasFinance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity. The result cameas a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead. But Istuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance. I have since workedhard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance. As a result , I amdnow well on my way to graduation with double degrees in both computer scienceand finance in 20__.
During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as Idabbled into the real business world. We settled for newspaper as our maidenattempt.. As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating,from cost control to market survey. My strong leadership and sunergy of theentire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy. Yetinexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in theend. But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture. I now know more aboutwhere I need to work on. When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how tomanage money in the safest way. They helped me put my pocket money in the bankand get interest as a return. Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize thatsystematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much moreabout what finance is all about. Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimmingincreases, the desire to swim in the sea grows. Yet, with more academicexposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge neededto stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance. That self-conscious humblenessversus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to optfor further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges offinance.
After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for ClarkUniversity,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US. I trustthat demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind offinance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update myvision as financier of the future. To me,Clark is the best and right place thatcan surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike. I am morethan anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble partto its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas. I am therefore very muchlooking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus. May that offercome just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in oneof the greatest colleges in the US.
Dear sir / madam:
Hello, my name is _ _, _ _ _ University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students _ _ _, and believe that it can be a good completionof your master's courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast, _ _ _ _ adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, _ _ students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that he'll be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, and _ _ _ by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school _ _ football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. _ _ said the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
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