I take great pleasure in recommending Wang Yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
Mr. Wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the SPECIAL CLASS forthe GIFTED YOUTHS, my university's unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented Chinese youngsters. It was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.
He impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchina's scientific and technological talents. At the time, members of the GiftedClass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. Mr. Wang scored the highest grade in that exam. He also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. To my regret at the time, hisEnglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. But I noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his English during his fiveundergraduate years with us. By now, he seems to be at least as proficient inEnglish as most of his former classmates in the Gifted Class.
In my experience with Mr. Wang, I was impressed with not only hisextraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. I am surethat Mr. Wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program that he maycare to enroll in. So I would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. I would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
Yours sincerely
Fan Pu
Professor and Deputy Head
尊敬的_領導：
您好!我是遼寧省大石橋市第一高階中學高三學生___。我希望通過貴校的自主招生來實現我在_學習的夢想，感謝您在百忙中抽出時間審閱我的自薦信，以下是我的自我介紹。
三年的高中生活就要結束了，_悠久的歷史，深厚的文化底蘊，豐富的教學資源，良好的學術氛圍，強烈的時代氣息，為社會培養出許多傑出人才。我將選擇貴校為第一志願，非常渴望能在明年7月拿到貴校的錄取通知書，成為一名光榮的_學生，成為一名對社會、對祖國有用的人才。
在多年的學習過程中，從國小習成績一直的我，憑藉自己的努力考入理想的高中——大石橋市第一高階中學，經過三年的錘鍊，我已經成長為意志堅強、底蘊深厚、成熟內斂、熱愛生活、有愛心、有同情心、有上進心、德智體全面發展的優秀學生。
我性格開朗，興趣廣泛，天文地理、國內國際形勢都會引起我極大的興趣與關注。我喜歡參加學校組織的各種活動，喜歡寫作、唱歌，做過校園聯歡晚會主持人等，這些愛好，讓我不但在學習上，而且在多方面取得進步。
我是個樂觀向上的年輕人。熱愛生活，逆境也不畏懼，對生活充滿信心和希望。我堅信，我的努力會讓我達到成功的夢想。我喜歡感受快樂，我希望把快樂傳遞給我身邊的每一個人，我為強者歡呼，為弱者流淚，我相信送人玫瑰手留餘香。我用自己的真誠，博得良好的同學緣，老師們也都對我非常認可，這多來自我單純、直率、熱情的性格。
我是理科生，養成了行事條理分明的個性，亦是一個做事果斷、有主見、有分寸的人。無論在學習上，還是其他方面，我都努力達到事半功倍的的效果。充分發揮自己的潛力。我常常用更少的時間就能學會別人在標準學習時間內才能獲取的知識，經常花費別人的一部分時間完成和別人同樣的作業任務。在高中歷次的期中、期末考試中，我的成績大多，這些都源自我科學的學習方法和良好的學習習慣。曾獲得大石橋市三好學生的榮譽。
_是我夢寐以求的大學殿堂，假如我這次有幸進步_，我將明確努力方向，能在大學汲取更多的知識，不僅是知識，更有獻身祖國、為民族復興貢獻一份力量的情操。在學術活躍的_，我將努力參加一些團體、論壇和各種活動，鍛鍊我的能力，把自己磨礪成一個_學生所具備的獨特文化品位、非凡才能和良好綜合素質的優秀人才。
“好風憑藉力，送我上青雲。”期待在不久的將來成為_的學生，而_則是我人生大學階段最有意義的好風!隨信附上個人簡歷。懇請貴校領導接受我的申請，實現我的理想。
此致
敬禮
Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further mystudy in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of AppliedPhysics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get myB.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I choseBoston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array ofdatabases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe myinterests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solidacademic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduatestudy.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the GraduateApplication Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, andother relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of thisletter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear Sir,
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University inJune next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your universitynext fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog ofyour university and any other necessary information, and also a set ofapplication forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
尊敬的_領導：
您好!我是遼寧省鐵嶺市高階中學20_屆理科實驗班的金巨集，和其他的同胞或者說是競爭者們一樣，我也希望通過貴校的自主招生來實現我一直以來的夢想——考入_大學，首先感謝您能在百忙之中抽出時間審閱我的申請材料。
相信在此之前，您已經閱讀過了無數的留學申請書，對省、市三好學生，校學生會主席，團支部書記等也已經見怪不怪了。很可惜，這些耀眼的榮譽和職位我都沒有，我有的是對_全面的瞭解，有的是對_始終如一的熱愛與嚮往，有的是“非_不去”的勇氣與決心。更重要的是，我有著誠實、實事求是的品質，我不會為了得到您的青睞而誇大事實，虛張聲勢，而且我覺得一個人的領導能力、組織能力、交際能力和協調能力並不是只有靠這些職位才能體現出來的，畢竟校學生會主席只有一個，但具有多方面能力的高中生遠不止這些。
從小就熱愛旅遊、喜歡開拓視野的我也算是遊遍了祖國的大江南北，各大學也基本都參觀過，而且還在去年先後參加了_大學的冬令營和同濟、_大學的夏令營，但在眾多高校中，唯有自由、開放、享有“_”美譽的_大學深深吸引了我，而且我也聽到__的學長_介紹說，__非常適合那些“有想法”的人，只要你有想法，__都會盡全力幫你實現，我覺得我就是那種有想法、有創新意識的人，這也使我更加堅定了“將來一定要到__讀書”的決心。憑藉著十幾年如一日的努力，我的成績一直名列前茅，會考更是以全市第二十八的成績考入鐵嶺市重點高中理科實驗班。到了高中，我並沒有驕傲，而是更加努力的學習，成績也有了進一步的飛躍，每次考試成績均穩定在年級前十名，發揮好時還會進入前五名，我堅信自己是有資格進入_大學的。
做事果斷，善於規劃是我的另一優點。說到規劃，我對自己的未來也已經做好了初步的打算：近年來，隨著中國經濟的騰飛，汽車已經走入了尋常百姓家。由於汽車工業的進步，這方面人才的需求量也在隨之增長。這對從小酷愛汽車，7歲就能識別數十種車標的我，無疑是一種巨大的激勵，我也勵志將來要進入一家汽車公司，參與設計製造一部效能優異，而且安全節能的汽車。據我所知，現今中國汽車在發動機的節油耐用，穩定效能上仍有一定的提高空間，而伴隨著油價的上漲，增壓直噴等技術也已走下神壇，進入乘用領域。在車身結構方面，人們對於安全舒適的追求是無止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能設計，有了更優秀的懸架，有了鋁材，甚至碳纖維的應用。我願把我全部的精力都投入到這些領域中，讓中國的汽車有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞臺上。這一切看似虛幻的夢想，一旦進入__，就都很有可能變為現實。眾所周知，__的機械工程及自動化、車輛工程等專業都是當前國內最一流的。除此之外，貴校的密歇根學院不僅包含機械類專業，而且如果前兩年在校成績突出，還能出國到密歇根大學繼續深造，學習國外先進的理念，這些都非常有助於實現我遠大的理想。我保證，如果我能進入_大學，一定會本著“_”的校訓努力學習機械方面的專業知識，培養各方面的綜合素質，成為像_那樣的_大學的驕傲。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
尊敬的：
我是系X班的，因(寫上休學的原因)無法按時參加學習，需要出國留學休學XX年。
休學後，我會努力,並且繼續堅持學習。並在休學期間，加強自己的思想教育，使自己的思想始終與我校保持高度一致。
望領導及老師能夠批准。
此致
敬禮
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
Dear _,
On November 9, 20__, I took my GRE Subject (BIOLOGY) test. Although I it isbeyond me to report the exact number of the participants in this specific testthe world over, the score I achieved indicated to me that I was above 98%, andaccording to the analysis by my classmates, this might be the highest score thatChinese students have ever achieved. While I was aware that the importance ofany test score as an indicator of one’s scholastic aptitudes should never beover-exaggerated, the result still gave me a tremendous sense of self-pride andself-achievement. I believe that I achieved such a high score not through merecoincidence. Instead, it is the result of my long-time love for and dedicatedefforts at biology. With an implicit faith in my knowledge of biology and in mypotential to continue to excel others, I here solemnly file this document in anattempt to apply for admission into your esteemed university for a Master’sprogram in pharmacology.
I am confident in my qualifications as a competitive applicant for yourhighly respected program, partially because of my unusual interest inpharmacology. As a bridge across medical science and pharmacy, pharmacologyplays a vital role in the research on the ways to resist diseases. Theexploration and the subsequent elaboration on the mechanism of therapeuticfunctioning of drugs is a necessary step in the development and application ofdrugs to overcome diseases. Faced with this academic discipline that isinextricably connected with human life and human welfare, I have always beenfascinated by this subject, bent on making my own contributions to theimprovement of the quality of human life. Every time I learn about new theories,approaches and developments in biology and pharmacology, I cannot help feelingexcited. Each setback I encounter or each success I achieve in my experimentswould motivate me to persist and continue. It is this fascination with biologyand pharmacology that stands behind my dedicated studies and research in thosesubjects.
The 4-year comprehensive and systematic study and training in the specialtyof pharmacy guaranteed my successful completion of my undergraduate program atthe College of Medicine of _ University, the best medical institute in an academic environmental famous for its rigorousness, I established a solidfoundation in such diverse fields as biology, chemistry, biochemistry,pharmacology, pathology, physiology, and cell biology. As I approached mystudies primarily from a problem-oriented manner, devoting much more energy tolabwork than to coursework in order to satisfy my curiosity for solvingpractical problems, my overall GPA is somehow affected, slightly lower than whatI would have desired. In my case, GPA, which is purely based on exam scores,does not account much. In retrospect, I have been more concerned with developingmy hands-on abilities and on developing an extensive knowledge rather than onintensive test-oriented knowledge. Nevertheless, compared with other students, Iam sure that I excel them in terms of experimental skills and the ken ofknowledge and, for an undergraduate, a good foundation supported bycomprehensive specialized knowledge and strong hands-on abilities are mostimportant for more intensive studies in the future.
I have every reason to believe that my excellent experimental skills andresearch experience will qualify me to be a helpful research assistant to myfuture supervisor and to make important research achievements. Even when I was afreshman, I started to work as a research assistant in the laboratory. Over thepast four years, I have commanded most of the basic skills necessary forundertaking lab research, such as operations on animals, cell culture,electrophoresis experiments, etc. By far, my most important research experiencecame from undertaking my graduation project, which exemplified an overall testof experimental techniques. I chose to focus on the Effect of Ye3 on the CellApoptosis. The reason for choosing this subject of research is that the study ofcell apoptosis has a crucial importance in the treatment of cancer and inmaintaining the immunity of those suffering from AIDS. On the premise that rareearth ions are considered capable of entering cells, I decided that my projectwould concentrate on rare earth ions and their effects on cell nucleus. Withextensive experiments, I discovered that, under different circumstances, rareearth ions would produce totally different behavior toward cell apoptosis. Whenthe concentration of rare earth ions is below a certain ultimate limit, thefunction of the ions changes from that of facilitating cell apoptosis to that ofsuppressing cell apoptosis. As an initial and tentative study, my research haswon very positive comments from my advisor. In undertaking a large quantity ofexperiments, I not only applied basic operation skills with much dexterity butalso acquired many new techniques such as making post-coloring observation ofthe morphology of cell nucleus through the confocal fluorescence microscope, andperforming qualitative testing of cell apoptosis with the help of flow cytometrymethod (FCM).
Having completed my undergraduate education and acquired necessaryqualifications, I would like to pursue a more advanced degree program at TheDepartment of Pharmacology & Therapeutics, Faculty of Medicine at TheUniversity of _. The department, founded in the 1950’s, has been greatlystrengthened by the joining of dozens of renowned scholars and specialists overeach of the past decade. Its mission, “to educate, create and sustain knowledgeconcerning the actions and mechanisms of drugs in biology and medicine,"reflects the Department’s consistent dedication to academic excellence. YourDepartment fosters research collaborations within the Department as well as withother _ Faculties & Departments, national and international universitiesand related industries, and is committed to the development of new researchareas. I am especially interested in Clinical Pharmacology Research Organization(CPRO) under the leadership of Dr. _.
Your research-oriented program adheres to an “apprenticeship” model ofgraduate training in which in which graduate students work in closecollaboration with a particular Faculty member, their supervisor. Since thematching of research and professional interests between the student and aFaculty member within the Department is paramount, I would like to identify Dr._ and Dr. X_as either instructor or supervisor with whom I would like to workwith. Dr. X_may enlighten me on central nervous system physiology andpharmacology while Dr. X_may instruct me concerning the mechanisms of actionand resistance and intracellular pharmacokinetics of antiviral agents. Myinitial study of their papers and research reveals that their fields of researchperfectly parallel my study and research interests. I expect that my Master’sprogram can ultimately lead to a Ph. D. program.
This Personal Statement is presented by a highly self-motivated Chineseyoung man who cherishes high academic ambitions, possesses outstanding biologyknowledge, and is determined to work harder to make even more proudachievements. For this reason, I hope that my application can be given mostserious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的老師:
您好!我叫___，是盤錦市遼河油田第一高階中學高三學生。貴校是我理想中的學校，不僅因為我的姑姑在這裡任教，也是因為這裡有我喜歡的專業——材料化學，我希望通過自己的努力實現自己的理想。
我的爸爸是遼河油田的一名高階工程師，媽媽是教育培訓中心的一名教師，爸爸媽媽給我取這樣的名字，就是希望我能取父母之長，名字寄託著父母的期望，父母的愛陪伴我成長。正如父母所期望的，如今的17歲的我，不僅學習成績優秀，而且健康，自信、陽光，向上。性格開朗、大方，興趣廣泛。在高中階段，兩次被評為學校三好學生，是老師，長輩心目中的好學生，好孩子，是同齡夥伴的好朋友。
我非常感謝我的父母對我的教育，他們沒有象其他家長那樣，從小就讓孩子上這個班、那個班，我從小到大從沒有進過各種文化課實補習班，在我很小的時候，他們培養我對大自然的熱愛，帶我去各地旅遊，領略祖國的大好山河，首都北京、現代化大都市上海、海南的天涯海角，九寨的青山綠水，古都承德，到處都留下我的足跡。古人說，行萬里路，讀萬卷書，這些經歷開闊了我的視野，豐富了我的知識，更是豐富了我的人生，我為能在童年、少年時期有這樣的經歷而慶幸。
父母都是喜愛讀書之人，這也在潛移默化中影響著我，我也喜愛讀書，尤其喜愛讀歷史和軍事方面的書，在很小的時候，就讀《三國演義》，從兒童版到原裝版，讀了不下五遍，許多章節都能背誦下來，還看《二十五史》、《史記》《資治通鑑》以及許多名人傳記。讀史使人明鑑，讀書增長了我的知識，歷來文史不分家，對歷史書籍的熱愛使我在學習上更加輕鬆，我雖然選擇了學習理科，但我的文科成績一樣優秀。讀書更使我學會思考，名人傳記使我懂得，沒有隨隨便便的成功，成功的背後是努力，是付出，是對真理的堅持，是臥薪嚐膽，有時甚至是要犧牲自己的生命!我和我的同學都是90後的孩子，在遼河油田這樣生活水平比較富裕的地區，許多孩子從小嬌生慣養，依賴性強，自我管理能力差，而我的父母從小就培養我的自我管理、自我教育的能力，我不僅在學習上從來不用老師和家長操心，在班級裡還擔任數學課代表工作，幫助老師做許多班級工作，同學有問題也都喜歡問我，而我也總是耐心地給同學講解，在幫助同學的同時也使自己對知識有了更深入的理解，真是送人玫瑰手有餘香。同時我還擔任學生會文藝部工作，參與學校的各項活動，豐富了自己的經歷，鍛鍊了自己的能力。這些都是我高中生活最為寶貴的財富。
我的家庭給了我一個比較民主和寬鬆的氛圍，使我不必把時間和經歷都用有書本上，分數上，對我的興趣和愛好，父母都是支援和鼓勵的。我喜愛音樂，在國小時候就被選入學校樂團，後來又專門學習二胡，達到考級十級，併成為興隆臺區少兒藝術團成員，在學習相對緊張的中學和高中階段，也鼓勵我參加市區組織的演出活動。我喜愛運動，網球、足球、羽毛球、乒乓球、籃球都是我喜歡的，雖然不是樣樣精，但也算是樣樣通，快樂體育、快樂運動，運動給了我健康的體魄，也給了我健康向上的生活態度。
我熱愛生活，關心身邊的每一個人，感謝生活給予我的一切。我關心國家大事，每天早上都要收聽“中國之聲”的廣播，晚上放學回來，父母也會就一些新聞、實事、熱點問題與我探討，使我的思想始終能跟上時代的脈搏，而不是兩耳不聞窗外事的書呆子，我相信世界是我們的，我們要與祖國同呼吸，共命運，因為在我們身上，肩負著建設祖國的責任。
敬愛的老師，感謝您看完我的自薦信，我對自己充滿信心，也相信您也會對我充滿信心。為了我的理想，我要加倍的努力。
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Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I ects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter ker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
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尊敬的學校領導、老師：
我是現就讀於X大學XX級X學院X班的學生，現因(休學原因)無法按時參加學習，需要休學時間(休學時間)，即從X年X月XX日至X年X月XX日。
望領導及老師能夠予以批准。
申請人：
申請時間：x年x月x日
Dear_,
I'm Yang, a master candidate from Harbin Institute of Technology, Harbin,P. R. China, supervised by Prof. Tang. And I ever contacted you for the passwordof your papers in the last time. I'm supported by a Chinese National Fund, whichwill support those PhD candidates in China to go abroad to some world classUniversities of their fields. This programme will cover all living cost I needin USA. After I read a lot of papers of my research area, I understand that youare working on MAX phases and have published quite a lot of high levelscientific papers. As such, you are the leading researcher in _ in the world. Ifind your area fits me well, so I write to you to see if you can give me achance to study in your school. My CV and published papers have beenattached.
My research area is mainly about MAX phases. I have published 5 papers inthe journals including J. Mater. Res. and Solid State Commun. In addition,papers were submitted. And now I'm doing _. I am not applying a full time PhDprogramme, and this programme is a short time (12-24 months) co-educationexperiences more like a visit scholar programme. This programme is a new type ofco-educate PhD programme supported by China Scholarship Council. The studyperiod abroad varies from 12 months at least to 24 months at most. I have toaccomplish my doctor degree back to my school (Harbin Institute of Technology),so I'm not supposed to acquire my doctor degree at Drexel University.
And this programme runs like this, students meet the applicationrequirements can apply this programme, and my University and research area isamong the main supporting Universities and areas. Students must acquire anofficial invitation letter from the prospective tutor/University. Therefore, allI need is an official invitation letter from you (or your University). The dateof enrollment I'm considering is September/October 20__. In order to make sure Ican catch up with the next year's programme, I have to prepare all theapplication stuff (including your official invitation letter) before January,20__. And because it will cost about 1 month to mail your invitation letter fromUSA to China, so I really hope you can respond me as soon as possible to makesure I can receive your letter before the winter vacation this year. And if youcan't make this decision or you have a better recommendation whose researchareas fit me well, please inform me. Really hope to hear from you as soon aspossible!
Yours sincerely,
尊敬的_大學老師領導：
您好!我是___，是入黨積極分子，__省三好學生，在日常的學習和生活中我處處以身作則，以榜樣的力量感染和帶動我的同學。我在學習上勤奮刻苦，始終成績優異，我就讀的學校是一所擁有近四千名學生的省級示範校，每學期我校都要進行一次10所省級示範性高中的聯合考試，每個年級的考生約一萬三千多人在這類地區聯考中，我的成績始終名列前茅。20__年上學期我考取了地區聯考第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名。20__年下學期地區第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名，20__年上學期地區第9名，英語單科成績第一;本校第2名，班級第一名。20__年下學期地區第一名，本校年級第一名，班級第一名。20__年高三的第一次考試我考取第一名。我從國中起就多次參加全國中學生奧林匹克各學科競賽，並於20__年獲全國中學生奧林匹競賽一等獎，20__年獲全國中學生奧林匹競賽英語、數學、化學競賽一等獎、物理競賽二等獎。讀高中後20__年我獲取全國中學生英語能力競賽一等獎，全國中學生數學競賽希望杯三等獎。20__年獲全國中學生生物、數學競賽決賽資格。各學科競賽拓寬了我的學習思路，檢驗了我的學習效果，也爭強了我的自信心。
20__年8月我升入高中，12月份我校有一名不幸身患尿毒症的同學叫___，面對著一個年輕的生命在頑強的與死神抗爭。我決定和我的同學一起發起一次奉獻愛心的捐贈活動，以集體的力量挽救這個年輕的生命。我寫了倡議書，在學校號召老師和同學們為___同學捐款，還到社會上進行宣傳，得到老師、同學和社會各界人士的幫助，共捐款6萬餘元。為邱純亮同學做換腎手術奉獻了我們的一份愛心。我們的愛心捐贈活動在社會上引起了強烈的反響。我市電視臺在晚間最近新聞欄目專門做了報道。挽救這個瀕臨枯萎的生命的過程，震撼了我的心靈。因為我有能力通過自己的努力，延續一個年輕的生命，同時，愛心捐贈活動也驗證了我的組織能力，凝聚力和感召力，更是對我自身綜合素質的一次檢驗。在後來的班級工作和組織其他活動的時候我的自信心更強了。
當邁入了_大學的校門，也就步入了我生命中的最重要、最精彩的階段。我會珍惜在校園中渡過的分分秒秒，在這大師雲集、神聖的學術殿堂、在這群賢畢至的高等學府，如飢似渴的吸納最新的知識和資訊，發揚林業學子的優良傳統，刻苦學習、精益求精，通過腳踏實地的努力使自己成為本專業的優秀學生，同時努力探索和驗證與本學科、本專業相關的科學知識，以唯物和科學的態度勤奮地學習、深刻地思索、不懈地尋求本學科領域的最新知識，使自己成為本學科領域的有發展潛力和有培養價值的學生，成為北京林大的驕傲。
尊敬的_領導、老師們：
有目標的人生才是有意義的人生，一個人若沒有目標，就如同迷失了方向的船隻，隨波逐流，永遠沒有溫馨的港灣。我的目標，就是求新務實地創造，以成果回報社會，以人格魅力影響世界!而我最嚮往的_大學，也將成為我生活的契機。
王國維曾提到人生的三個境界，我的過去就是“昨夜西鳳凋碧樹，獨上高樓，望盡天涯路”。因為一直都是非常優秀的學生，因此對自己的要求也很嚴格。記得那是國小五年級的期末測試，不知是換了考場，還是題目的角度難度不合我的口味，我一向引以為豪的數學在那次考試中只有區區80分。老師們不好嚴厲地批評我，畢竟我平時的專注有目共睹;父母卻是非常失望地將我“軟禁”起來，不能出門，不能碰電腦，甚至於“新聞聯播”都成為禁忌。
我後悔自己太不認真，但是這又有什麼用呢?!在被關在家的時間裡，我就把那張試卷翻來覆去地看，我看錯的題目，重新做它們，繼續尋求更快更好的解法。這種開拓初次嘗試是很累的，阿拉伯數字圍成緊箍咒，向我的頭上套去。
直到進入國中才逐漸意識到這就是所謂的“正確學習方法”，才瞭解“不認真”是過於籠統的概念。其實在不知不覺中，無論誰都會進步，譬如我並沒有刻意去琢磨那些錯題，而錯題於我就像是甘甜的乳汁，有著汲取不盡的養分。後來當聽到有人評價我認真、仔細、“肯鑽”、“坐得住”時，我並沒有多大的感覺。靜下心進而回顧，已經在長年累月中成為習慣，歲月的流逝雖會將鋒芒磨盡，但遺留下來的卻是至寶。
而“衣帶漸寬終不悔，為伊消得人憔悴”堪稱現在生活的映照了。每天往返於學校家庭間，尤其是進入高三，重複單調的生活讓人產生厭倦。可是我明白我所要追求的是什麼，我為“伊”而憔悴，但卻“終不悔”。這是希望的作用：當我看見新的藥物治療病人、新的材料用於生活、新的裝置提高產率，看到人民的生活美好，我就會感到由衷的喜悅，這也就成為支援我繼續奮鬥的力量。
我看小說，我看其中所反映的社會現象，或者作者所要表達的美好願望;我看動漫，我看其中所展現的美好人性，或者享受作品本身帶給我精神的放鬆。我把我的感受寫進部落格，我為自己創造發洩的條件，於是有人評價我冷靜、客觀、“有思想”，於是有人說我趕得上潮流，有創新意識。其實這些都是一家之言，自己怎麼樣，只有自己最清楚。
我曾不太善交際，從而一度將“寂寞讓我如此美麗”奉為經典。但是看到同學回家都有伴兒，遇到困難都可以向死黨尋求幫助，我便也感到孤單與落寞。可是社會畢竟是自己的社會，個體的生存幾乎都是靠個體的力量，沒有誰會一直陪同自己走下去：父母會先於自己逝去，配偶則必須在成人後在“對的時間”遇到，朋友更不可能如影隨形。我意識到了，也就盡力讓自己融入生活圈，竟發現其實一切很簡單，需要的只是善意、友好和坦誠。
我在高中遇到很多天資聰穎的人，在感嘆的同時也逐漸發現其實“上帝在厚重的牆上開了一扇小窗”。“窮則獨善其身，達則兼濟天下”，雖然現在是一個人，但也必須從完善自我做起。在“修行”的途中所感受到的靈魂的昇華是愚鈍的我無法用筆描述的。我嫉妒過競賽優異的人，並且在得知胸有成竹的化學競賽落榜時也難過得無法入眠。但等到冷靜下來細細分析，其實自身還有非常多的漏洞：氣氛緊張時容易先入為主，遇到困難“腎上腺素分泌會急劇增多”從而影響思維。我努力克服它們，並且見賢思齊。
當然如果進入_大學，那裡將肯定是我展示自己的平臺了。在理想的指引下，我將繼續秉持高中以來優良的學習習慣和方法，繼續貫徹全面發展，努力在各方面都讓自己滿意;在生活上也必須更加照顧自己了，雖然現在也是一人，但遠在他鄉，當圓月嵌入蒼穹時也會不免引起鄉思吧。未來的生活有許許多多的變數，可以是充滿激情，也可以是頹唐無奈，生活會有非常多的誘惑，但是我必須堅守住心靈的淨土：無論怎麼改變，我所追求的理想不變!我希望為科學研究竭盡心力，我希望為國民思想精神的昇華奮鬥終身!不僅僅是大學，進入社會、開始工作，無論怎麼改變，必將始終為了崇高的事業奮鬥，向著理想賓士!我相信在未來的某一天，當我“驀然回首”時，我的夢想，已經在“燈火闌珊處”。這也應該是我人生的最後一個境界了。
我享受挑戰，勇於嘗試沒有把握的事，我知道絢爛的未來需要靠自己創造。我一直幻想自己是名英武的騎士，駕著名駒，在廣袤的歷史田野中，向著理想賓士!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：___
__年__月__日
尊敬的_的老師：
您好!
我是來自河南省__中學的__，很高興能向您呈上我的留學申請書，也希望藉此機會我可以脫穎而出，為順利進入_大學奠定堅實的基礎。
在首都這座夢想之城，可謂高校林立，但是隻有貴校深深地吸引了我的目光。每年，我們高中都會有人考入貴校，他們被譽為“天子驕子”。當錄取金榜貼到校園裡，看著他們臉上洋溢的笑容，我的心裡也如波濤洶湧，再也那耐不住了。我暗暗下定決心，有朝一日我也要以自己的實力築夢於人大校園，成為她的一分子。
可說歸說，要想成功，唯有刻苦努力，勤奮學習。
在學習上，我對自己要求十分嚴格，充分發揚不怕吃苦的精神去面對學習中的一切困難和挫折。我知道學習就是一個苦難的過程，唯有堅持不懈，才能實現鳳凰涅盤的重生，才能抵達成功的彼岸。因此，在課堂上，我緊緊跟隨老師的思路，認真聽講，細心做好筆記，每一個知識點都不會錯過。課下，我珍惜時間，努力複習，積極預習，有的放矢地掌控好自己的學習節奏。我喜歡思考問題，喜歡探究問題的本源，然後舉一反三，化整為零。由於我的勤奮、刻苦，我獲得了優異的成績，每次考試都在全校前列，受到了老師和同學們的肯定，多次被評為優秀班幹部、優秀學生、學習標兵等。
在獲得優異成績的同時，我還抽時間，擠時間發展自己多方面的興趣。我喜歡打乒乓球、羽毛球、籃球，沉浸於體育鍛煉的激情與豪邁中，在緊張與刺激間收穫了強健的體魄。但比起體育鍛煉，我更鐘情於國學文化。
我喜歡國學的博大精深，喜歡國學的厚重神奇。課餘，我已經閱讀了多部國學經典，比如《孟子》《論語》《史記》《資治通鑑》《漢書》等，在文字與故事裡感受到了國學的無限魅力。在我看來，國學不僅僅是傳統文化，更是中華民族核心的價值理念和追求，是數千年來中國人思維方式行為方式生活方式生產方式的高度總結，是中華母親的乳汁，是中華兒女的血脈、精神和靈魂，是中國人信仰的天空和大地。
出於對國學的熱愛，我從小就立志要投身於祖國寶貴文化的學習、挖掘、弘揚中，用自己的所學，為國家的文化發展和民族的文化復興，貢獻自己的微薄之力。
而我之所以在眾多的_高校中鍾情於貴校，就是因為貴校深厚的文化底蘊吸引了我。貴校是一所以人文社會科學為主的綜合性研究型高校。自建校以來，貴校始終不忘“立學為民、治學報國”的辦學宗旨，以“實事求是”為校訓，逐漸形成了完備的教育體系，尤其注重發揮人文社會科學認識世界、傳承文明、創新理論、諮政育人、服務社會的作用，半個多世紀以來，已為國家輸送了一大批高素質的人才，其中范文瀾、馮其庸、艾青、王小波等校友可謂赫赫有名，為國家的文化建設做出了巨大的貢獻。
我敬仰貴校國學院，它是新中國第一家以國學為教育研究目的且本碩連讀的教育科研機構。學院學術力量雄厚，已經制定了完整系統的國學教學方案，建立了以經典研讀為中心的課程體系，並充分兼顧傳統與現代的有機融合，在教學與研究中，既有繼承傳統的治學特點，又有鮮明的時代性和寬廣的國際視野。這些，都令我向往。所以，我認為貴校國學院是我的夢想之地，會改變我的人生軌跡。
尊敬的老師，請您考慮並接受我的申請，給我一片天空，讓我自由飛翔，給我一片海洋，讓我盡情暢遊，我相信，進入人大是我最明智的選擇。如果順利被錄取，我一定會珍惜時間，勤奮努力，孜孜以求，投身於學術研究，跟隨大師足跡，在國學的傳承裡留下自己的名字，成為國家的棟樑，成為人大的驕傲。
我相信，我可以。
此致
敬禮
親愛的教授：
我很高興以書面形式推薦的醫生的信。 __支援他申請在實驗室的博士後位置。
博士。X__一個優秀的研究生致力於為毫秒我的監督下度。在我與他在大學接觸，他的創造力和態度研究工作給了我很深的印象。他總是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解決他自己的問題，我很滿意他。
__一直致力於高分子發光研究六年左右。據我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化學在主人的工作，如蛋白質和核酸檢測等，在這些領域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已經和將發表多篇論文在國際期刊。我在讀他的論文發表和與他討論往往興趣。我很讚賞他的研究能力。
__博士還擁有非常優良品格。他是一個虔誠的科研工作者。他的作品是在週末。他是一個誠實和智慧，可靠，負責人，並且是非常合作過。
基於這些優勢，我相信這個年輕人將實現在今後的工作更大的學業成功。因此，我強烈支援他的應用程式，這將不勝感激，如果你能給他的優先考慮。
請隨時聯絡我，如果我可以回答關於__的任何其他問題。我的地址如下：
教授__X
1. 參觀和考察學校
預約參觀考察學校(首先進入學校的，先註冊，然後通過郵件在網上預約參觀學校的時間，一般學校都需要你提前預約，也可以自己接打電話預約)。收到回信按預約時間訪問學校，會有招生辦的老師帶領參觀校園然後幫助你瞭解相關學校資訊。
2. 網上提交申請材料
確定學校後就可以在提交申請材料，學校的通常都會有完善的申請流程，按照提示和要求來就好。學校收到遞交材料後如果有不完善的地方仍然會通過郵件形式與家長溝通，所以記得時常看看郵箱以及垃圾郵件箱。
3. 等待面試通知
從申請到收到面試通知這個過程會比較漫長，至少一個月，兩個月也完全有可能。
因為，泰國人辦事速度較慢，申請的學生越來越多，而招生辦通常就是兩三個負責人，她們每天有接待不完的訪問者以及上百封郵件要回復。
所以如果怠慢你是非常正常的，建議勤發郵件溝通以防被疏漏。準備的這期間可以好好幫助孩子準備面試。低齡兒童面試對英文的要求不高，能簡單的交流。
但是一年級以後的需要有一定的基礎，面試包括聽說讀甚至寫，比想象中要難。所以一定要有英文基礎。(但各個學校都存在不同程度的差異，所以看你選擇的是哪個學校)
4. 面試結果
參加學校面試後，不會立馬有結果，通常等上一個月兩個月都很正常。所以建議你至少提前半年開始辦理申請。泰國開學時間一般都在八月份，一個學年分四個學期，平均兩個月為一學期。
5. 交建校費和學費並保留收費單
如果面試成功學校會學校會通知你按時繳費(建校費和學費，學費可以按一學年交也可以按一學期交)學校收到款項會給你郵寄收費單據和簽證所需的推薦材料(單據和簽證材料都得儲存好，這個後續去大使館辦簽證要用到)。
本人__x，男，1986年生於______,從小就受到良好的家庭教育，而且在父母的言傳身教下我很早就樹立了自己正確的人生觀和價值觀，並懂得了如何在生活中磨鍊自己。
____年x月我被________x錄取，並選擇了適合自己學習的`國際經濟與貿易專業。
一直以來我學習刻苦，勤於鑽研，在四年內，學院給了我得智體美全面的教育，科學的安排了;國際貿易、國際工商管理、財務會計、國際結算、市場營銷等課程。
四年期間修完全部課程並順利地通過了計算機國家二級、英語四級等等級考試。適應社會和公司對人才的要求。
為了鍛鍊自己、服務大家，在大學期間我積極地加入了學院大隊學生會，並擔任班長一職。在擔任班長期間，由於我的積極工作、努力學習，為隊裡做出了一定的貢獻，取得了一定的成績，曾分別在五四評優和學期評優中被評為“優秀學員”。此外我獨立完成了學院科研專案《______》，並獲得專家教授的一致好評。
大一、大二暑假期間為了培養自己的能力，瞭解社會。曾在《__x》雜誌社從事撰稿工作，得到了編輯部的一致好評。
後在世紀文學，幻劍書盟等站駐站寫文，其中《____》一文獲得了近3萬次的點選量。
身為軍校地方生的我性格開朗，勤奮好學，樂觀、自信、責任心強;接受能力強，有強烈的集體榮譽感和上進心。樂於與人相處，與身邊的人相處融洽，具有團體合作精神;為人正直，工作認真負責，能吃苦耐勞，做事嚴謹;缺點是性格比較浮躁。
I am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
Born in Beijing, China’s political capital, cultural center and economichub, and nurtured in a well-cultured family and an empowering community, I havedeveloped a meaningful outlook on lie. I identify myself with such values thatone gives meaning to life when one lives to give. Success stories of my parents, relatives and friends along their career-path have entrenched my belief inbeing independent and confident as a contributing memeber of the community.
As I look back on early days of my schooling , I am just as grateful to myworking parents for having sent me to one of the best boarding schools inBeijing where I received quality primary education and learned to appreciateindependence. As I recall , being independent was probably the biggest asset Igained as a teenager with the absence of parental guardianship for most of those6 years. After I upgraded to secondary school, I offered to go to school bybike. Though hesitant at first, my parents gave their well-thought-out consentto the 15-km ride average Chinese parents would simply veto in the first placegiven the “one-child policy”and subsequent “little emperors” pampered by parentsand grandparents. Thankfully, that day-to-day routine bike trip,rain orsunshine,tempered my strong character. I have been holding myself to higheststandards, academically and physically from primary school days through tocollege life. I have grown up all these years amongst top cohorts and have beenexposed to varied horizons and dimensions of school life in and outside ofclassroom. I am perfectly healthy and stong with a sharp mind and demonstratedcommitment to teamwork. I was handpicked to play for school baseball team when Iwas in primary school. Back then, my proven leadership and excellent skills inthe field assured my coach that I was born to be a team leader. And I didjustice to his well-timed appointment by heading a team of Beijing to compete inShanghai and Hong Kong several times. And the strong track record of outoutstanding performances each time still fills me with pride and excitementtoday. During one match tour to Hong Kong in the 1990s, I was immediatel exposedto the enviable luxury and prosperity of the city,the dynamic economic center ofAsia. That trip awakened me ,for the first time, to the value of wealth andfinance. And it was that very journey to the thriving metropolis that shaped myambition to be a financer.
Years later,when the colleg entrance exam came,that moment of life anddeath for most of senior high school students in China,my top preference wasFinance Colllege of Beijing Technology and Business Unversity. The result cameas a sad surprise as I was admitted to Computer Science College instead. But Istuck with my dream major and decided to minor in finance. I have since workedhard to equip myself with systematic knowledge of finance. As a result , I amdnow well on my way to graduation with double degrees in both computer scienceand finance in 20__.
During my college days,I led my cohorts in starting up a micro company as Idabbled into the real business world. We settled for newspaper as our maidenattempt.. As a new horn,I took a hands-on approach, from editing to circulating,from cost control to market survey. My strong leadership and sunergy of theentire team kept this mini organization going pretty well in its infancy. Yetinexperience in operation and cost management led to a failed business in theend. But I saw the silver lining in the failed venture. I now know more aboutwhere I need to work on. When I was a little boy, my parents taught me how tomanage money in the safest way. They helped me put my pocket money in the bankand get interest as a return. Now, as a grown-up already,I recognize thatsystematic learning and book knowledge can truely help me know how much moreabout what finance is all about. Naturally, as one’s knowledge about swimmingincreases, the desire to swim in the sea grows. Yet, with more academicexposure, I have come to realize how I am ill-equipped with the knowledge neededto stay afloat in the trubulent sea of finance. That self-conscious humblenessversus the profundiy of finance as a much-respected discipline has led me to optfor further study in the US,home to a number of world-class colleges offinance.
After meticulous comparision and cross-checking, I have settled for ClarkUniversity,the birthplace of the first-ever graduate school in the US. I trustthat demanding academic standards here and ,best of all ,great mastermind offinance that Clark can offer will undoubtedly broaden my horizon and update myvision as financier of the future. To me,Clark is the best and right place thatcan surely make the difference, academically and professionally alike. I am morethan anxious to embrace those best minds in Clark and contribute my humble partto its huge wealth of knowledge and innovative ideas. I am therefore very muchlooking forward to a positive reply from Clark, my dream campus. May that offercome just in time for my journey towards a rewading learning experience in oneof the greatest colleges in the US.
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有刪節)
合理地闡述了申請者學習電子工程的動機，學習動機是評審委員非常看中的。同時，讀了這段文字，會使讀者沉浸在對童年往事的美好回憶裡，藉此打動評審委員的心。
另外一篇修改過的文章開頭用詩一般的語言寫道(有刪節):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
結尾呼應了開頭，闡述了作者為什麼要去美國讀書:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance tosee many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtaindrinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much usefor televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to playwith, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i idemade such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin,surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were...
I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I stillremember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men theywere! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source ofencouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue lighttwinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to chargebravely into the unknown world.
尊敬的_大學老師：
您好!
"韶華不為少年留，勤為天道酬。"正如高三的教室後牆上我所想出的勵志名言一般，它時刻激勵著班上的同學與我。我，封恬恬，湖南省衡陽市八中高三的一名學生，就讀文科，是平凡的，因為是一個同所有人一樣的矛盾融合體;但又堅信自己是不同的，是因為我將成為發光體。金子，到哪裡都會發光，而我選擇的是貴校這樣一座鍊金爐。
河，孕育文明;海，凝聚智慧。我願像河般，為夢想奔騰向前永不止息;像海般容納百川，有容乃大。"上善若水。水善利萬物而不爭，處眾人之所惡，故幾於道。居善地，心善淵，與善仁，言善信，正善治，事善能，動善時。夫唯不爭，故無尤。"善的最高境界，大致在於此乎。像水般，往低處流，卻能容納百川;而在人生的攀登中，往高處走時，當不勝寒時，不忘想想水的謙虛，以一種包容一切的姿態，以柔化剛，接受萬物的俯視與臣服，這種"柔德"，使我自己的心境變得平和，要像水那樣，無形勝有形，不斷地改變，塑造自己，臻於完美。
寵辱不驚，閒看庭前花開花落;去留無意，漫隨天外雲捲雲舒的同時，我本著湖湘學派"經世致用"的原則，志當存高遠。如果說周總理是"為中華之崛起而讀書"，那我便願為"中國之強盛而讀書"。學無止境，人生本是一個不斷學習的過程。在六年的學習委員一職的任職過程中，除了學習課本知識，我的右手可以寫出一手漂亮的毛筆。因為正，一筆一劃地寫，心才會正。我的左手，能彈出美妙的小提琴樂章，這不僅開發了我的右腦，音樂更使我思維敏捷。那些曼妙的音符，不僅是人類對上帝的提問，更是與大自然的交流。讓狂躁的心，不知不覺間安靜下來。
人生的旅途中，讀書萬卷：安徒生童話到世界名著。我醉心於寶黛間的痴纏;徜徉於《傲慢與偏見》裡伊麗莎白奇妙的心海中;感嘆於李白"我輩豈是蓬蒿人"的豪邁;與杜甫"安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏"一起憂國憂民;與易安居士一起看"雨疏風驟，綠肥紅瘦"。在文的海洋中，我願成那一滴水，一尾魚，在海洋心中，見證著它的悲喜。於是在歷史的不平中，我亦詩嘆曰：陳王夢還金鏤枕，鳳皇遺恨正阿房，才佳長恨無歸處，冷露成淚暗遺香。
我同樣願行萬里路，沿途的風景，豐盈著自己的人生，懂得取與舍，讓人生的閱歷更加豐富。曾到過南京，河畔槳聲燈影，媛娮笑晏晏，六朝舊事已隨流水，而這座古都卻有太多歷史無法忘記的東西：革命先行者孫文先生之陵……流連於河海大學門前，不由駐足，希望自己能成為"歸人"，而不是"過客"。我這樣的遊子，在閱過17年風景後，選擇了河海大學作為圓夢的地方。
我喜歡奔跑的感覺，起跑線比重點更加美好，體味那為理想拼搏的過程。十年磨一劍，劍出鞘，一鳴驚人，直指河海。
我，靜如處子，或動如脫兔，願意跟書本這樣高尚的朋友對話。書山有路勤為徑，運用正確的學習方法，在無涯的學海中"直掛雲帆濟滄海"，正確地駕駛著學習之舟，雖然途中有風浪，但堅持駛向目的地--河海之灣。我，崇尚獨立，常獨立思考探尋人生真諦，遇事冷靜自若，卻又讓理性成為我織夢的梭，讓勤奮成為我築夢的橋。理智與熱情，誠信與好學，成為划向河海的槳，只為到那裡，為自己編織另一個夢，解決南方家鄉旱澇災害頻繁的問題，造福家鄉、祖國人民。在見證河灣輝煌的同時，與河海一起創造下一個輝煌。
我願逆風行舟，駛向河海，利用水，造福人民。
我願逆風，只為尋河海一夢。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
20__年__月__日
尊敬的各位老師及校領導:
本人是外語系日語專業2班學生，現申請休學，為期一年(201X年9月—201X年9月)，希望學校予以批准。
不知何時開始，會忘記自己做一件事的理由，會回想不起昨日的自己，也不知道日復一日的我，在做些什麼。回想至今為止的大學生活，有收穫，也有一些不甘。收穫了善良簡單的朋友們，還有隨和可親的同學們，以及學習日語帶給我的充實感，還開始學習了我所喜歡的跳舞。不甘是由於我的迷茫，是由於我所不喜的大學生活，我不喜的並非大學本身，而是由於時代賦予他的另一種風貌與意義。然而，另一種意義上，大學也是自己的，如何度過大學生活也取決於每個人自己。我不希望沒有目標，並且沒有認清自己，就茫茫然然的度過這寶貴的四年，這樣對我的青春來說也算是一種損失。
休學的一年裡，我會找一份與日語相關的工作，繼續學習日語。我對所能找到的工作抱的期望值並不高，也並不認為出社會工作會有多順利。在休學的一年中，我希望能和在校的同學們一起考N2 或是N1，實現自我獨立，並且能為家裡儘自己的力量。回學校之後，也能更加有目的的學習，或者還能做些翻譯兼職。未曾想過考研的我，竟然也萌生了跨專業考心理學研究生的念頭，雖然只是一剎那的想法，也讓我自己驚訝不已。我也明白了，活著要不斷的學習，學校就是一片很好的土壤，能為我們營造最好的環境。
我決定休學，並不是不對自己的人生負責，而正是因為我要對自己的人生負責。可能有人會影響你的人生，但他們無法對你的生命負責，也沒有人會對你的生命負責。休學是我認認真真，反反覆覆考慮所得出的決定。很多時候，我們永遠都不知道自己所做的決定是對是錯，或許根本就沒有對或錯。只能在認真且客觀地思考之後，做出心中的選擇，這樣也就不會後悔了罷。
上天賦予了我們思考的能力，就讓我們不能僅僅滿足於肉體上的需求活著，而要在心靈體驗上感受到真正的滿足。我有自己想過的生活，我也想為之努力，我也會為之努力的。
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尊敬的先生/女士：
你好，我叫__，是__大學的老師。也是__學生的班主任，我非常高興地向你推薦我的學生__，並且相信它能夠出色的完成在貴校碩士課程的學習。
自從他進入大學以來, 常常表現出與年紀不相符的成熟和穩重。由於班上的大部分同學都來自其他省市，這第一次的出門離家的經歷使得他們需要一個相當長的過程適應這個完全陌生的新環境。但我注意到，相比之下，__同學很快的調整好了心態，積極主動地融入到這個新環境之中。
大學的課程與中學有很大不同，偏重在自學能力，而且專業課程的學習要求另一種思維方式。因此，在大一.大二，很多同學都表現出了不同程度的不適應，不知道該如何學習大學的課程。但是，__同學適應能力很強，很快摸清了工商管理課程的關鍵，在很短的時間裡就掌握了學習方法，而且其他任課老師都表示他對於新知識的接受能力很強，新學的知識他馬上就能消化，當堂就能理解掌握。
可以這麼說，班裡的部分學生是拿著極其出色的大學聯考成績走進了我們學校，而__同學憑藉的則是他極強的自學能力和良好的學習方法。這一點，在每學期的期末考試上得到了很好地體現，尤其是在專業英語的期末考試中取得極其優秀的成績,也是班裡少數順利通過英語四六級考試的同學.他對學習英語的熱情和毅力是最讓我感動的.
除了學__同學還校裡足球隊的主力隊員,積極的參加校裡組織的各項活動,有極強的組織和領導才能.他經常到我辦公室或給我打電話,一起討論他學習和生活中所遇到的問題,希望取得更好的學習成績.概括的說__同學是一個好學生.
我希望貴校能給他一個機會，讓他在貴校嚴謹的學風和良好的學習環境中繼續發揮他的特長，進一步提高專業知識，拓寬視野。望貴校考慮它的申請。
尊敬的X大學老師領導：
您好!首先感謝您能在百忙之中抽出時間審視我的申請材料!
我是X市高階中學理科實驗班的X，和其他的同胞或者說是競爭者們一樣，我也但願通過貴校的自主招生來實現我一直以來的夢想考入X大學。
在眾多高校中，唯有X大學深深吸引了我，而且我也聽到X的學長說，X非常適合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都會盡全力幫你實現，我覺得我就是那種有想法主意、有立異意識的人，這也使我更加堅定了“將來一定要到X讀書”的決心。憑藉著十幾年如一日的努力，我的成績一直名列前茅，會考更是以全市第二十八的成績考入鐵嶺市重點高中理科實驗班。到了高中，我並沒有驕傲，而是更加努力的學習，成績也有了進一步的奔騰，每次考試成績均不亂在年級前十名，施展好時還會進入前五名，我堅信自己是有資格進入X大學的。
相信在此之前，您已經閱讀過了無數的自薦信，對省、市三好學生，校學生會主席，團支部書記等也已經見怪不怪了。很可惜，這些刺眼的榮譽和職位我都沒有，我有的是對X全面的瞭解，有的是對X始終如一的熱愛與嚮往，有的是“非X不去”的勇氣與決心。更重要的是，我有著老實、量力而行的品質，我不會為了得到您的青睞而強調事實，虛張聲勢，而且我覺得一個人的領導能力、組織能力、交際能力和協調能力並不是只有靠這些職位才能體現出來的，究竟校學生會主席只有一個，但具有多地方能力的高中生遠不止這些。
做事堅決，善於籌劃是我的另一長處。說到籌劃，我對自己的未來也已經做好了初步的打算：近年來，跟著中國經濟的起飛，汽車已經走入了平常庶民家。因為汽車產業的提高，這地方精英的需求量也在隨之增長。這對從小酷愛汽車，7歲就能識別數十種車標的我，無疑是一種巨大的激勵，我也勵志將來要進入一家汽車企業，介入設計製造一部機能優異，而且安全節能的汽車。據我所知，現今中國汽車在發念頭的節油耐用，不亂機能上仍有一定的進步空間，而伴跟著油價的提高，增壓直噴等技術也已走下神壇，進入乘用領域。在車身結構地方，人們對於安全恬靜的追求是無止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能設計，有了更優秀的懸架，有了鋁材，甚至碳纖維的應用。我願把我全部的精力都投入到這些領域中，讓中國的汽車有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞臺上。這一切看似虛幻的夢想，一旦進入X，就都很有可能變為現實。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的X大學老師：
您好!我是X，現就讀於X。感謝您在百忙之中審閱我的留學申請書。
X大學，以怒蹄奔騰的駿馬為標誌物，希望學子們能“騰天潛淵，吐納川海;遼闊原野，一任賓士”，博大高遠的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成為X大學的一名學生。
由於在數學上表現出了優秀的能力，我5歲時上了國小。20X年時，我們全家來到北京，並開始了我在X學校長達8年的學習。這8年來，X見證著我點點滴滴的進步。來到北京前我對英語一無所知，可我的母校是一個國際化的學校，於是我的英語讓老師和父母十分著急。後來在父母老師的幫助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英語水平，現在英語已經成為我的優勢之一。小升中的時候，我的成績還不是很好，在我國中三年的不懈努力之下，最終以會考523分(當時的市重點線)的成績進入了我校高中部實驗班。在高一時我的成績在班裡、年級的前列，參加了海淀區數學、物理、化學競賽，並在第X屆全國數學“希望杯”比賽中獲得全國三等獎。進入高二之後，我在所有考試(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的週考、區統考)中都保持著班級第一、年級第一的成績，而且整個高中年級的各科會考成績都是A。我認為只要對學習有著嚴肅認真的態度，始終都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性對待考試、不斷提高自己的學習能力，從而保持了一個穩定的、向上的狀態，我會將這種狀態在我以後的學習、生活中繼續保持下去。
我出生在一個民主開放的家庭。父母都是老師，給我一定的自由發展空間，並著重培養我的領悟能力、學習能力和動手能力，讓我學會自立。於是我在遇到生活、學習、與人溝通相處等方面的困難時，都自己想辦法獨立解決，從而在各方面成為班級、年級的佼佼者。由於父母對我潛移默化的影響，我做事十分認真，習慣追求完美，雖然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的態度和意志讓我在學習、工作中有著出色的表現。
正如校訓“X”所展示的，我的母校X學校，既秉承了傳統教育的嚴謹、求實，也發揚了寄宿學校的軍事化管理，更融入了外國教育的開放和高效。正是在這樣的環境中，我擁有了豐富的知識、多樣的能力、堅強的毅力和開朗的性格。在X年的學習生涯中，我更加成熟穩重，做事心思縝密、謀劃周到，成為一個學習優秀、善於處理各方面事務、全面發展的人。
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
__年__月__日
Monsieur le Président,
Dans le souhait d'une inscription auprès de votre université, j'ai l'honneur de vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.
J'étudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans, et j'obtiendrai ma licence(bac+4) en juillet 20__ .(1)
Outre la langue fran?aise, j'ai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle je m'intéresse particulièrement.(2)
Après l'obtention de mon dipl?me, j'aimerais poursuivre mes études de littérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement de littérature.(3)
Or, pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires, j'ai besoin d’un certificat de pré-inscription délivré par votre université. C'est pourquoi je vous demande quelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sont les attesations que je devrais fournir.
Si c'est possible, pourriez-vous me faire parvenir, à l'adresse ci-dessus, un dossier d'inscription ?(4)
Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance, je vous prie d'agréer, Monsieur le Président, l'expression de mon profond respect.
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尊敬的老師：
你好!我叫，是本校系*班學生。
因最近情緒煩躁，頹廢，不能靜下心在校繼續學習。在自己的學習中，感覺到前所未有的迷茫，想到外面體驗一下生活。故向學校申請休學一段時間，希望能獲你的批准。
以前，從知道考慮自己前途的時候，我選擇了上學.然而在日新月異的變革中，在校畢業後的就業問題是每個在校學子的一塊心病。我想的很多、很久，感覺自己的命運由自己把握，真想出學校大門改變自己一下，即使改變後仍沒結果，我則問心無愧!
謝謝學校這一年的培養!
此致
敬禮!
申請人：
申請日期:X年X月X日
i am writing to express my full support for xiao xiao, who is applying tograduate school at [name of school]. though i am currently a visiting scholar atthe university of california, san diego, i was xiao's supervisor at the vvvuniversity school of architecture and civil engineering. in my [number] years inacademia, xiao stands out as one of the best students i've encountered.
as the professor in charge of vvv's student union, i spent several yearssupervising and working closely with pan, who served as the union's chairpersonand monitor. pan's work included managing the routine affairs of his class of 76students and planning many student activities. consequently, through our closecontact, i gained a thorough understanding of and respect for pan's character,his strong organizational skills, and his leadership ability. for example, infall 1997, xiao organized an evening party for incoming freshmen. i stillvividly remember the party's resounding success, as well as pan's unswervingattention to details.
dedication and passion are hallmarks of pan's character. although the workhe did as a student leader was time-consuming and tiring, he never simply embraced his responsibilities, and enjoyed the tasks at hand. studentsacknowledged his devotion to his classmates repeatedly: for four years in a row,the student body elected him monitor and chairperson. xiao felt great warmth notonly for his classmates, but also for society at large.
sincerely,
professor name
department of electrical engineering,
abc university
Dear _,
I am a student of _ school _ (female, born on August 20th, _), and I amabout to become a middle school student. My biggest wish is to be able to studyin _, because destiny made me know _middle school. In the summer of 20_ I wasfortunate to become a member of the school club, and represented _ middle schoolto participate _ in _ the middle school student sports meeting (table tenniscompetition) that year, and achieved good results. In just a few days of thecompetition, through the introduction of the leading teachers and teammates, Ihave a full understanding of _middle school. After that, I pay more attention tolearning and love sports. In my heart, learning and exercise have constitutedthe driving force for mutual promotion. At present, my table tennis skills havebeen further improved. In the 20_20_years, I have won the second place in thewomen's group A of the table tennis competition for two consecutive years.
Ping-pong is my hobby, and it is my goal of continuous efforts to improveacademic performance. A good learning environment can create outstandinglearning talents. The suburban high school is my dream choice. The school hasthe traditional virtues of solidarity and mutual assistance, and has a learningatmosphere of "comparison, learning, catching up, and surpassing", and it ismore problem-solving. Good teachers and leaders who are difficult and willing toteach. Opportunities are met but not sought. If the school leaders give me thisopportunity, I will continue to sum up my experience and lessons, be mentallyprepared to dare to endure all hardships, establish the confidence to overcomeall difficulties, and strive to be excellent Achievement completed three yearsof junior high school life. Never let the school leaders down. I don'tunderstand whether this formulation is appropriate, but I implore the leaders tostudy my application.
Yours sincerely,
___,___
Dear _,
My name is Lin Hao, from Northeast China---Heilongjiang Province. Thelong-term and cold climate has allowed me to develop a tough and tenaciouscharacter in the course of my life. In 20 years, I was admitted to China withexcellent results. Jilin University, a prestigious university, is currentlystudying for a bachelor's degree in economics majoring in internationaleconomics and trade, and a second degree in futures investment and managementmajor in the same period. My university is a comprehensive university with avery complete range of disciplines. My university life has not only enabled meto develop a comprehensive and three-dimensional development in learning methodsand professional knowledge, but more importantly, it has improved my ability tointegrate knowledge of various disciplines. At the same time, it greatlyincreased my desire for knowledge. Therefore, I decided to study in the UK aftergraduation. Through understanding, I currently hope to apply for a__University__ major.
Family is very important to everyone, because it is the first classroom forus to receive education. My grandfather was a banker, my father was abusinessman, and my mother was a statistician. Their words and deeds to meplayed an extremely important role in the establishment and development of myoutlook on life and values, and also helped me. Established an honest,hardworking, and never-say-fail character. So influenced by them, I am veryinterested in finance disciplines. My family is the most important asset in mylife. It gives me the interest in learning this subject and the character ofgoing forward courageously.
Through the learning of professional knowledge, I have developed a stronginterest in economics and finance. I read "Life Economics" by Dr. DavidFriedman. In the book, he used easy-to-understand cases. Combining the mistyprinciples of economics with people’s ordinary life has enabled me to master theeconomic principles that most people find boring, and the learning methods inreal life. At the same time, I have a good understanding of Fried Dr. Mandeveloped a feeling of worship. In the same year, I read his masterpiece "PriceTheory" again. Through the study of this book, I became obsessed with knowledgeof currency and finance. Due to the strong desire for knowledge, I started tominor in the second degree "Futures Investment and Management". During thisperiod, I met a mentor, Professor Lu, a very famous scholar in China's futuresindustry. Professor Lu combines the theory and practice of the futures market,and combines the true meaning of life with the operation of the futures market,which is regarded as a "casino" by outsiders, and teaches us the knowledge ofthe futures market and economic investment. This teaching method is in line withmy learning habits, so I quickly entered the state. We often discuss thedevelopment of China’s futures industry and the price fluctuations of the worldfutures market together. In the autumn of 20__, I was invited to assist him incompleting the "China Financial Futures" Research work on the "Enlightenment ofthe Japanese Yen Development Route to the Development of China's Renminbi" inthe "Market Establishment" project. Because of his outstanding performance, hewon the appreciation of Professor Lu.
In addition to studying professional knowledge, in my spare time, I alsoestablished the first leukemia volunteer organization in Jilin Province andserved as the chairman. Helped 10 children with leukemia from poor families inthe form of voluntary activities. Every year, they held lectures on leukemiaknowledge at Jilin University, as well as volunteer registration activities forthe Chinese bone marrow bank (Chinese hematopoietic stem cell bank), and bloodsample extraction activities. In the past three years, the association has beenUnder my leadership, we have made considerable progress and achieved outstandingresults. Many media have reported on our activities. On the website of _社 onOctober 25, 20_, we also reported on our activities. In addition, my deeds werealso reported to the famous Chinese student magazine "East, West, South, Northand University Students" Issue 03 of the year 20_. These honors fully prove theaffirmation of my work by the society and the school. Now, one of every 150volunteers in the Chinese bone marrow bank is developed by my association. Theassociation has also been awarded the title of Jilin University BoutiqueAssociation for three consecutive years. I was also named the first "Moving JiUniversity" of Jilin University. The title of top ten college students, and atthe same time, through the establishment of a volunteer association, not onlyenabled me to realize the value of life, but also exercised my organizationalskills, which greatly improved my personal quality. In addition, I also likesports very much. I am good at sprinting, football, etc. Young, I should be fullof vitality.
In the summer of 20_, as a student representative of Jilin University, Ivisited a famous university. As a Chinese representative, I participated in morethan ten student exchange activities, and as a cultural messenger, I spreadChinese traditions and modern culture to the students, and through the visit, Ilearned some culture and visited their education system. In the process, I wasdeeply moved by the university's advanced teaching mode and strong scientificresearch capabilities. Compared with my own school, although we have developedrapidly, there is still a gap between the world's top education. This feelinginspired my enthusiasm for learning. After returning to my country, I decided touse my own strength to make my own contribution to the development of mymotherland. This is also an important reason why I applied to your school,because as a The responsibility of the Chinese is to use the advanced knowledgeI learned overseas to build my motherland.
"Practice, firm, and hardworking" is the fine tradition I inherited, and itis also my life creed. Facing the imminent graduation from university, a strongthirst for knowledge and a passion for professional knowledge, I decided tocontinue my professional study and accept the rigorous teaching, cutting-edgeresearch and new ways of thinking in the university, so as to enrich myself andrealize myself I also hope that I can become the messenger of the culture of thetwo countries. Thank you for your attention and look forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
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