四、關於求職信的結尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組裡面(1)句較差，經過修改後(2)句顯得比較恰當。a:(1)軟弱、羞澀的：ifyouthinkicanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.(2)改寫後(較佳)：ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson.b:(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asi'msureaninterviewwillconvinceyoui'mthemanforthejob.
(2)改寫後：5:30-9:vening.
c:(1)請求式的句子，不夠完整(遺漏面談時間)：bereachedbycallingbeijing12345678.(2)改寫後：mayihavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?anreachmebetweennineandfiveo'clockduringtheday.
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