英文簡歷：使用簡潔的詞

使用簡潔的詞來代替冗長累贅的短語

例（１０）：Wordy: In the sense of his speech he talked on the question of securities.

Concise: During his speech he talked about securities.

例（１１）Wordy: During the proceeding year, the company was able to accelerate productive operations.

Concise: Last year, the company was able to accelerate productive operations.

例（１０）和例（１１）中wordy的句子裡In the sense of 可以用During來代替，同為＂在．．．裡＂的意思；on the question of 可以用about來替代，同為＂有關．．．，關於．．．＂同理,例（１１）中wordy的句子裡的During the proceeding year也可以用Last year來代替。沒有改變原來句子要表達的意思，而且顯得更加簡潔，更加直白，在口語中更加常用。會使得讀信人更加容易理解。既然如此，商務信函寫作者為什麼不用這些簡潔、明瞭、清晰的常用詞來代替那些冗長、累贅、空洞的短語呢？